[SirSlikk]

Okay only one drawing at the time but I'll put more up soon.

(I didn't put this in sonic art because all of it isn't going to involve sonic.

My Sonic fancharacter Ryoku sonic riders style.

http://x7d.xanga.com...7/b48774123.jpg

Any critisim would be appreciated.

[Lord Shmeckie]

Hey, guess what? If it's a SONIC fancharacter, guess where it goes...

[Siracer]

SirSlikk, on Aug 14 2006, 08:16 PM, said:

(I didn't put this in sonic art because all of it isn't going to involve sonic.

Uh, shmeckie, I'd go with what he says now, so you won't yell at him for it being in the sonic art area later.

[Lord Shmeckie]

Then he can put that stuff in Other Art

[Siracer]

MEh, you have a point. Well anyway, thts pretty good, Slikk.

[SirSlikk]

Jesus christ Shmeckie. Do you get up in the morning and try find people to yell at?

[Lord Shmeckie]

Don't concern yourself with what I do when I get up in the morning.

[VanillaREM]

hmmm....well, if you want criticism, and aren't afraid of it, then here i go... watch out, i come from the riff-raff of FFN... but this'll hurt me more than it'll hurt you... *gulp*

alright, so...let's just begin with, your style could definitely use work. maybe it's just the fact that you did it with pen and on LINED paper, but it's hard to tell where a lot of things are. i think you could've done a much better job with this in pencil where you could actually grade the shading to make the lines stand out a bit more. also, your style, if you are trying to imitate sonic style, leaves much to be desired...the proportions are off (they don't have necks, and that body is huge). one more thing: what exactly is he supposed to be? (you just reused rouge's wings and super sonic's quills by the looks of it). PLUS MALE SONIC CHARACTERS DON'T WEAR CLOTHES, DAMMIT!!!! sorry--that always bugs me.

what i suggest to you is that you go back to basics (like xtina's awesome new CD!!!! shameless plugging, there). to do this you should start by drawing heads with many different expressions, as expression is the key motivating factor that can make or break a picture.

otherwise, i commend you for your effort. i don't know how much experience you've had, but your style is better than some others' out there. keep practising.

[SirSlikk]

O_O; damn...

VanillaREM, on Aug 15 2006, 04:48 PM, said:

what exactly is he supposed to be? (you just reused rouge's wings and super sonic's quills by the looks of it). PLUS MALE SONIC CHARACTERS DON'T WEAR CLOTHES, DAMMIT!!!! sorry--that always bugs me.

1. He's suppose to be a be a shapeshifting demon (I know not original)
2.I gave him clothes because it made my character look a little different from the other characters, I've seen it done alot so I tried it.(and plus his true form looks human)

I've never really practiced drawing and thats probably why I need so much work. Thanks for the advice I'll work on my drawings.

This post has been edited by SirSlikk: 16 August 2006 - 01:08 AM

[Cutechaos]

nice work!! ^^

VanillaREM: My fancharacters have clothes..

[Siracer]

I'd like to correct V.REM,
The male sonic characters under 17 have no clothes. Every comic I've seen enternet-wise, and reality-wise have proven my theory thus far. To why this is, I don't really want to know, or care.

[VanillaREM]

Cutechaos, on Aug 15 2006, 06:59 PM, said:

VanillaREM: My fancharacters have clothes..

Siracer, on Aug 15 2006, 07:06 PM, said:

  I'd like to correct V.REM,
The male sonic characters under 17 have no clothes. Every comic I've seen enternet-wise, and reality-wise have proven my theory thus far. To why this is, I don't really want to know, or care.

awww, sorry guys...i guess i should've said that...i, personally try to stick to sonic style as much as possible (that's my dose of unoriginality for ya), and therefore, being such a stickler, it just really gets me mad when other people bend the "rules". it's more of a personal opinion, and i should've said that instead of trying to make everyone else conform without reason....sorry, i formally apologize.

i guess adding clothes is a way to make them more original and unique to yourself in this ever-expanding fanbase. it's hard to be completely different, so you're forgiven for him being a shape-shifter. i hope i didn't sound like i was trying to be mean when i asked what he was...that was an honest question.

aaaandd....male sonic chars under 17 have no clothes? whaaaa? :S i'm talking about game characters, if this is any clarification of what i meant at all...and pretty much everyone is under 17 there...only big and vector(and possibly storm) pass that line...and they haven't got clothes either....:S

[Siracer]

Big is a fat, tall cat, at the time of SA1, he was 16, I think. I don't know Vec.s Age, and storm isn't realy an age at all, since B R.s only apeared in that game, and probably will never be heard from again.

[Cutechaos]

B.R. Who?

Its okay Vanilla I try to make it look my character eveeryine does have they're own opinion..

[SirSlikk]

VanillaREM, on Aug 15 2006, 05:36 PM, said:

I guess adding clothes is a way to make them more original and unique to yourself in this ever-expanding fanbase. it's hard to be completely different, so you're forgiven for him being a shape-shifter. i hope i didn't sound like i was trying to be mean when i asked what he was...that was an honest question.

I was just answering your question, you don't need to apologize.

[Siracer]

Cutechaos, on Aug 16 2006, 02:56 AM, said:

B.R. Who?

Its okay Vanilla I try to make it look my character eveeryine does have they're own opinion..

BR, Babylon Rouges.

[VanillaREM]

SirSlikk, on Aug 15 2006, 08:56 PM, said:

I was just answering your question, you don't need to apologize.

I know...but i felt like i was being a bully again...:S plus i just say sorry all the time...it's in my nature...or maybe just a trait i picked up from my ex? :S besides, i got the feeling that you were hurt by the way i had phrased the question...i think i would have been....

[Cutechaos]

oh.. thanks for telling me Acer!!

[SirSlikk]

VanillaREM, on Aug 16 2006, 05:21 PM, said:

I know...but i felt like i was being a bully again...:S plus i just say sorry all the time...it's in my nature...or maybe just a trait i picked up from my ex? :S besides, i got the feeling that you were hurt by the way i had phrased the question...i think i would have been....

I don't get my feelings hurt don't worry about it.