[Lord Shmeckie]

See picture here.

It's a character design for a comic project I'm working on. I'm stumped as to where to go with it from here (I know what he's gonna look like, just a case of artistic block), so I figured I'd get some C+C on what I've got so far.

[Sway]

I think it looks pretty awesome, Shmeckie. I'm not really sold on the floating fire crown, but otherwise it looks good. I'm not sure what kind of feedback you're looking for exactly, because I could say "Blah blah blah give him more spikes" or something and that could be not what you're going for at all, so I'll just say it's a well-done drawing and the guy looks badass.

[Lord Shmeckie]

Just general comments and criticism. It's been too long since I got some, so I figured I'd see how my drawing and designing abilites had come along.

[Master of AFTER]

Awesome picture! I actually like the fire crown, myself. I thought it was a really cool touch... If I were change anything, then I might move the 'flesh tube' things that currently go from the breastplate area into the pecks. They seem a little awkward as-is, like they're some kind of weird nipple-things. Maybe make 'em a little bigger or move them down and around more toward the side of the torso. Also, I might elongate the extensions coming out of the shoulders just a tiny bit.

Besides that, I really like the design. Very scary and badass... It's got some real presence to it, which is hard to convey with just a sketch. The finished product should own.

[Sway]

P.S. Give him ten penises.

["That Other Guy"]

Tentacle hentai....How fun.

All I can say is his left arm is a little warped and kind of over-exaggerated. That, and those nipple tubes...

Awesome picture, over-all though.

This post has been edited by "That One Guy": 19 April 2006 - 04:37 AM

[Lord Shmeckie]

"That One Guy, on Apr 19 2006, 04:37 AM, said:

All I can say is his left arm is a little warped and kind of over-exaggerated. That, and those nipple tubes...

They're supposed to be warped. As for the tubes, the actually begin just above where nipples would be (I know because that's how I can remember where to put them). Also, I'm planning to have several of them on his body, just trying to figure out where.

[Gold_TSG]

Page is catagorized as "Personal Pages" and is thus blocked from viewing. That's why I hate school.

[???????]

Nice picture, Shmeckie . I'm no art critic, so I have no real criticizism for this picture.

[TigerEyes]

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Also, I'm planning to have several of them on his body, just trying to figure out where.

I personally don't think you should have that many of them (more than four or five could diminish the "weird and freaky" effect, if that makes any sense). I actually kind of like them as they are, but that's just me.

You really are a talented artist, Shmeckie. You never cease to amaze me.

[Gold_TSG]

Now that I've seen it, the head looks oddly familiar somehow.

[Master of AFTER]

Gold: "...Uncle Fred!?"

[sonictk]

Something about the placement of the veins really irks me, especially on his left shoulder (I think it's a shoulder D: )... But for a comic drawing, this would be perfectly fine. :tup:

(PS I think you need to define his lower abdomen a bit more...there's so much detail everywhere else but below his chest, there's practically nothing there.)

[Lord Shmeckie]

Those aren't veins. They're cracks.

[???????]

They seriously do look like veins. Some do look like cracks.

[sonictk]

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Those aren't veins. They're cracks.

Shading would help establish that. D: They all look like veins to me.

[Gold_TSG]

Master of AFTER, on Apr 20 2006, 01:47 AM, said:

Gold: "...Uncle Fred!?"

What are you doing here!?

[Lord Shmeckie]

And how, exactly, would shading establish that?

[Gold_TSG]

Lord Shmeckie, on Apr 21 2006, 02:18 PM, said:

And how, exactly, would shading establish that?

Accually, I was about to ask that same question, had I not been distracted.

[???????]

sonictk, on Apr 21 2006, 02:04 AM, said:

Shading would help establish that. D: They all look like veins to me.

Shmeckie was referring to this post gold.