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#1 User is offline   StreaktheHedgehog Icon

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Posted 08 March 2006 - 10:23 PM

Hi all. this is my 1st post and sonic-related fanfic. b4 u read, remember that i don't write stories as well as i can illustrate em so if i should put this on another board just tell otherwise, comments and suggestions welcome ^_^

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If I go crazy, Will you still call me Superman?
If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
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Posted 08 March 2006 - 11:36 PM

Cool I LOVE it.

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Posted 09 March 2006 - 01:57 AM

not a fic....needs to be moved to fanart
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Posted 09 March 2006 - 01:33 PM

Hey, this story is a fanfic, i just cant keep my attention straight when i write one so i turned it into a comic. i'm okay with it being in the art but its supposed to be my illustrated fanfic. :angry:
If I go crazy, Will you still call me Superman?
If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
Kryptonite.
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Posted 09 March 2006 - 02:16 PM

Damn my eyes...!
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Posted 09 March 2006 - 03:10 PM

a fanfic by definition is a series a writing about a set fan genre.


What you have doesn't count as a fic. Perhaps it did in the begining when you had written the script but it has evolved far from that to be even seen as one. Illustrations are a different matter. Illustrations do not have panels. Illustrations still has the story and descriptions written without using word/thought bubbles
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Posted 10 March 2006 - 01:58 PM

Well it WAS a fanfic, but can you kinda ignore the rule and just read this as if it was one? thats all i ask. by the way EnigmaEchidna, loved your "For You Sonic I Will"
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If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
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Posted 10 March 2006 - 04:53 PM

Anyhow. Do any of you want to read parts 2 and 3? i' almost finished w/ 3. My friends say "its cool and Part 2 is shocking" **** out of 5 Stars;)
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If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
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Posted 10 March 2006 - 05:26 PM

Shrink the damned images, and please, for the love of all you hold dear, make the text legible.
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Posted 11 March 2006 - 02:24 AM

i'll do that. sry bout my hand writing, it smeared a bit. i could re-scan them if u like
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If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
Kryptonite.
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Posted 11 March 2006 - 06:39 PM

It's alright, but personally I don't like it. The story is stale. The main idea is used over and over in Sonic. The artwork is basic, but I don't know your age or art classes you have taken, so their alright for a beginner.
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Posted 11 March 2006 - 11:43 PM

Stale?!?! :angry: I don't get you. By the way, I'm new to the whole minature drawings of sonic. and just so you know, this "stale" story is far from stale. i have been working hard on the next 2 sections of it and everyone says they're great. you'll see the rest soon enough, i'll even re-submit part 1 so you can read it easier.
Oh and Dark, I'm older than you so don't critize my work got it?

This post has been edited by StreaktheHedgehog: 11 March 2006 - 11:46 PM

If I go crazy, Will you still call me Superman?
If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
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Posted 11 March 2006 - 11:55 PM

he meant the story that you are telling in your fancomic. From his POV its just probably not his cup of tea or he feels that its something done to death.
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Posted 12 March 2006 - 01:01 AM

Well, i guess not everyone will like it. Oh, and i've been working on the neatness, tell me if this page looks better, if so i'll post the rest of it like this.

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If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
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Posted 12 March 2006 - 01:40 AM

Well, i have nothing else to do so here's PART 2a

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If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
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Posted 12 March 2006 - 01:44 AM

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If I go crazy, Will you still call me Superman?
If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
Kryptonite.
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Posted 12 March 2006 - 01:51 AM

Once again great job!
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Posted 12 March 2006 - 01:57 AM

See? Y is there only one person here who compliments these drawings? Some constructive critizism has been displayed too but only two post are encouraging.
If I go crazy, Will you still call me Superman?
If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
Kryptonite.
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Posted 12 March 2006 - 02:09 AM

Yeah why are you all being rude.
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Posted 12 March 2006 - 02:36 AM

Part 3a

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If I go crazy, Will you still call me Superman?
If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
Kryptonite.
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