[angelfire]

Chapter 1**Sonic's POV:I felt dead. I was numb,cold, and confused. I didn't remember anything. At all. All of a sudden,I felt hands on my back and they pushed me anto a hard floor. I cringed with pain as the person's voice aid,"Get your lazy a** up!" I could tell already that it was a girl. Unwillingly,I opened my eyes. What I saw in front of me was not normal. All I saw was a wasteland. There was burned debris everywhere. It was an automaticly depressing sight. It was evening, with a purple glow over casting the almost balck night sky. I turned around to look at the girl that pushed me onto the hard ground.It was an orange fox with aqua eyes. She was really tall and looked mean. I decided already that I hated her."Get up!" she yelled at me,kicking me in the back.The sharp pain made me fall over while I tried to get up. Before she could kick me again,I scrambled up on my feet and faced her."Who are you?"I asked dumbly."I'm Razor,but why would you care?"she asked."Razor is a girl's name?"I replied. But I soon regreted it whn she slapped me across the face."Just come on."she snapped.I followed her across the vast wasteland in silence. I coulda swore I was walking in my sleep until I heard a strong voice singing,"I risked my only life.So they can live again. I wondered why the shadows spoke to me.Again."I stopped dead in my tracks.It was Razor. Her voice rang across the silent field.Then I heard others singing in response.The voices got closer.And closer. And then,I blacked out.***TO BE CONTINUED******

[angelfire]

Chapter2**Razor's POV:Who did that guy think he was?I saved the little b****** from his near death and he just talks smack?Pathetic. When me and my group found him,he was burned and unconciounce. The only reason I pushed him off his hand-made bed was because my best friend Rainy said he might've been working with GUN. So my instinct was to attack him. The wasteland is our home. Before the wildfire, it was a wide, open feild with small homes, and even streams. But the fire destroyed everything. So me, Rainy, Ruby, Reesy,Rosey, Raku and Roca took refuge in a small home with one bedroom. It was the only house that didn't get burned to ashes. And we were the only people who didn't die.*****TO BE CONTINUED*

[TJKitsune]

Someone likes names that begin with 'R'..

[EnigmaEchidna]

and seriously develop you fics more

[angelfire]

TJKitsune, on Mar 3 2006, 12:06 AM, said:

Someone likes names that begin with 'R'..

Yeah,you're right.I luuuv names that start with R!!!!!!!

[angelfire]

EnigmaEchidna, on Mar 3 2006, 09:47 AM, said:

and seriously develop you fics more

&Pffft*Gee,thanks for the negative energy.And whadaya mean 'develop my fics more'????????????????????????????????????????

[EnigmaEchidna]

that wasn't negativr energy it was advice and besides no matter where you are in life someone will always be giving you some

[Sway]

KK, please stop posting with your eyes closed, it's making your writing hard to read.

[angelfire]

Sway, on Mar 3 2006, 10:29 PM, said:

KK, please stop posting with your eyes closed, it's making your writing hard to read.

Gee,aren't you nice.*sarcasim*I mean,come on!GET REAL!I'm 11,how good at writing am I supposed to be?!?!

[Sway]

Good enough to know that there are spaces after punctuation at the very least.

[???????]

You're 11?! Well, I can understand that your sentences may not be the best, but could you try to improve on them a little? I'm not trying to be mean, please understand that, but people would have an easier time reading your posts if you did.

[angelfire]

???????, on Mar 4 2006, 11:08 AM, said:

You're 11?! Well, I can understand that your sentences may not be the best, but could you try to improve on them a little? I'm not trying to be mean, please understand that, but people would have an easier time reading your posts if you did.

Thanks for the advice,dude.See,if more people would post advice nicely like that,not to name names *cough*Sway.........*cough*then I'm more likely to be nice back.Thanks again,???????

[Master of AFTER]

However, notice how you failed to take his advice even when he was being super-nice.

[angelfire]

Master of AFTER, on Mar 4 2006, 09:15 PM, said:

However, notice how you failed to take his advice even when he was being super-nice.

He was being nice????????

[angelfire]

Chapter2**Sonic's POV* Why did I black out like that? All I heard was singing, then I'm unconcouise. Again. Trust me, it's not a good feeling. And what's freakier? I woke up in a tree. A flippin' tree! While that Razor girl and her friends are inside that house, I'm stuck up in a tree. They must not trust me. But I don't trust them, so it pretty much evens out. **Razor's POV**** I sat with my group around a fire. I shivered from the cold breeze and watched the fire flicker. "Razor, should one of us go check on the hedgehog boy?" Raku asked me. "Nah. Better to just leave him." I said to him. Raku was older than me by a year, but it sure as heck doesn't make him no wiser or smarter. "Whateva." he rolled his emerald green eyes at me and turned back to Rainy. But I didn't care. If we started trusting the boy too much too soon, it would backfire. I could feel it in my bones.

[Kvitne]

MOA was referring to Gamer-e, aka ???????.

EDIT: Also, the forum provides a spell checker for a reason.

This post has been edited by Kvitne: 06 March 2006 - 01:21 AM

[angelfire]

How in the world was I supposed to know that?

[Kvitne]

KK the Fox, on Mar 5 2006, 10:34 PM, said:

How in the world was I supposed to know that?

Well, if you were referring to the part of my post where I said:

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MOA was referring to Gamer-e, aka ???????.

You were supposed to know because in your post directly above MOA's, you said that ??????? gave advice nicely, thus provoking a statement from MOA about how, despite ??????? nicely giving advice, you didn't listen to it.

And if you were referring to my statement about how there is a spell checker on the forum, well, right below the box you type your posts out in, there is a little button that says spell check on it. It's quite obvious and out in the open, for anyone to use.

And I also believe that there's an age limit for those joining the forums. I believe, if I'm not mistaken, that you have to be 16. If you are, as you say, 11, then you joined this forum well before you became the proper age to do so, and against the rules too. You only have yourself to blame for being ridiculed.

[???????]

With this forum, you have to be at least 13, Kvtine. If members should only be here when they're 16 years old, then I might as well not come back here until my 16th birthday in November.

[angelfire]

Look, guys, I like posting her, cuz writing is somthing I luv to do. Please don't tell that I'm 11! I BEG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!