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Sonic the Hedgehog: Running on Empty my first sprite comic.

#1 Zeiback the Echidna

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Posted 09 February 2006 - 04:23 AM

Here are the first three pages of my first sprite comic.

No, I don't own the sprite sheets used in this comic

Credit of these sprites goes to:

http://sprites.fireball20xl.com/

http://ssn.sonicstadium.org/

Issue 1

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Issue2

Issue3

Reposted these 3 due to whiteness and transparancy issues.

This post has been edited by Zeiback the Echidna: 10 May 2006 - 06:04 AM

#2 StreaktheHedgehog

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Posted 30 March 2006 - 05:12 PM

Sooooo, what happened after that?

If I go crazy, Will you still call me Superman?
If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
Kryptonite.

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Posted 30 March 2006 - 05:20 PM

Some tips:

Change the color of the background on the sprites. having white makes the eyes transparent, and invisible eyes are not good.

Second, finish your stories! 2/3 of these have the biggest cliff-hangers I've ever seen.

Other than that, they're pretty good. Not ARS quality, but good.

This post has been edited by "That One Guy": 30 March 2006 - 05:21 PM

#4 Lord Shmeckie

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Posted 30 March 2006 - 06:23 PM

Vurry mediocre. Not only that, but I can see through Amy's eyes. Plus, the dialogue seems like something someone would write if they were imitating sprite comics.

<i>If I knew the difference between antidote and anecdote my friend Bobby Schneider would still be alive. He gets bit by a cobra, I'm readin' him funny stories outta Reader's Digest...</i>
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#5 Chiko

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Posted 01 April 2006 - 01:39 AM

Someone help him he's out of control!

What's with all the white? and comeon finish which you started, wheres the ending? where is it?

#6 StreaktheHedgehog

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Posted 05 April 2006 - 01:08 PM

seriously, finish these! now u've got me intrigued, what happens? :blink:

If I go crazy, Will you still call me Superman?
If I'm alive and well, will you be there holding my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might
Kryptonite.

#7 Zeiback the Echidna

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Posted 10 May 2006 - 06:01 AM

o_O PRAISE THE LORD! Someone actually reviewed, I didn't think anyone was looking at these! Oh yeah, sorry about all the whiteness. AND the transparancy. I've got those issues sorted out now, and I'll repost. And I apologise if the dialouge's corny. Keep in mind this is my first sprite comic ever, so I'm new at this. In the meantime...

Issue 4

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Issue 5

Issue 6

#8 Zeiback the Echidna

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Posted 10 May 2006 - 06:09 AM

To make up with the lateness...here's the 3rd set. Enjoy! However lame-ass the dialouge may seem. LOL Comments and critiscm are welcome. But please, no flames.

Issue 7

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Issue 8

Issue 9

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#9 Zeiback the Echidna

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Posted 10 May 2006 - 06:15 AM

And another...

Issue 10

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Issue 11

Issue 12

#10 Chaos Vegeto

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Posted 10 May 2006 - 06:52 PM

How did you get that Bunnie Rabbot Sprite? Anyway these are interesting and some panels are a little silly.

Life has no phlisophical meaning, if it had such a meaning then life would be pointless and therefore we would have no purpose.-Light Vegeto in Lightning VII- The Light Hidden on Mobius

#11 Zeiback the Echidna

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Posted 10 May 2006 - 08:20 PM

Next set. And Chaos Veggeto, in answer to your question...

http://www.themysticalforestzone.com/ That's where I found the Bunnie sprites. The sheets are © by Mechachu or Akuma the Hedgehog.

You can find a LOT of Sonic sprites in this site. But keep in mind, Most of them are SEGA Genesis Sprites. They have some WIERD ones too...like Eggman in a towel. *shudder* Or Egg Santa. o_O

Issue 13

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