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My fanfiction torn between two hotties its about amy sonic and a girl i made up

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Post icon  Posted 14 December 2005 - 02:00 PM

I have decided that my story is really rubish so i have taken it off. But it was my first time I have ever wrote a story im sorry about my bad grammer. I will carry on just commenting on other peoples story's sorry bout that.

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Posted 14 December 2005 - 03:26 PM

Personally... I don't like it.
I really don't.
I don't see, or understand what it's about...
Torn between two hotties?
What two hotties?
Also, the parts were too short, and had little description.
Work on it.
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Posted 14 December 2005 - 10:04 PM

from my stand point....its kinda of disturbing and the color hurt my eyes...the only time I use color in my thread is to state that the chapter is just a work in progress ....
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