[SuperJon16]

Authors note: These are new ages for the Sonic crew and also new characters.

Old
Sonic The Hedgehog age 18
Miles Tails Prower age 16
Knuckles The Echidna age 21
Amy Rose age 18
Shadow the Hedgehog age 25
Rouge the bat age 20
Eggman age 47
Cream the rabbit 15

New

Jon The hedgehog age 19
Chris the hedgehog age 18
Angel the hedgehog age 18 (Sonic’s Sister)
Liana the hedgehog age 18



Authors note: I do not own Sega or Sonic Team Sega does but I do own Jon, Angel, Chris and Liana. Sonic and the rest of the crew belong to Sega.



Chapter 1: An Alliance is formed


Sonic and his friends were heading down to Earth after the space colony incident. Two hours later they finally made it to Earth and everyone stepped out of the ship except Eggman and Sonic.

“ You know once we step out of this ship we will be enemies again…” Eggman said, as he pulled out a giant laser beam gun.

“ I agree with you, this is how everything was meant to be…” Sonic replied with his famous grin.

Sonic looked at all his friends and said “ Ok guys once I put my feet on the ground we’re gonna run…. ”

“ Ok” the whole crew said (Tails, Amy, Knuckles, Rouge,).

Sonic gives Eggman a cheesy grin while putting his feet on the ground. “RUN!!” Our blue hero yells as he and the rest of the crew started running.

Well you know how it ends Sonic, ends up winning.

THE NEXT DAY

Eggman was looking in the forest for a Chaos Emerald. Then suddenly, Eggman saw Shadow on the ground out cold, all bloody, and burned up.

Eggman grins evilly as an evil plan starts to develop in his mind.

TEN MINUTES LATER

Eggman is now in his bass. He had picked up Shadow from the forest ground and put him in a special tube, that’s called “Egg-Curer”. It simply cures the person, if they’re badly hurt. But Eggman had other plans, you see he put a metal curved plate on the black hedgehogs head. The plate had a thin black wire, which well connected to the master computer.

“I’m willing to bet that when Shadow wakes up, he won’t wanna team up with me…” Eggman said to himself, as he was typing away on the master computer. All of Shadow’s memories suddenly appeared on the computer screen. He started scrolling down to almost the very bottom and found what he was looking for. Eggman highlighted the part of Shadow’s memory when he remembered Maria’s promise. Eggman grinned, as he presses the big red delete button. His grin turned in to a frown as he saw an error message pop up.

“Error, can’t delete…” The Master Computer said.

Eggman typed in “Why?”

“Reason unknown….” The Computer responded.

Eggman sighed with frustration, as he typed in “What can I do to fix this?”

“You’re the one with the brains here, not I. I’m just a computer…” replied the computer.

Eggman glared at the Computer as if it can see him. He then started pondered for a few minutes and then come up with another plan just as evil as the first.

“If I can’t delete this part of the memory, then I’ll just make him think that what Maria said, was a lie…” He said as he once again started typing away on the computer.

When he was done typing, he pressed enter and it started installing the new information in to Shadow’s brain. He smiled with satisfaction as he stretched in his seat.

TWO HOURS LATER

Shadow is now on a bunk bed resting. Eggman only recently took Shadow out of the Egg-Curer.

Shadow suddenly slowly opened his eyes, but only saw blur “ Maria, is that you?” Shadow asked as he stared at Eggman with a dreamy look

“Yes” Eggman said sarcastically.

“Really…”Shadow said as his eyes widened. His vision was still blurry.

“NO Idiot! It’s me Dr. Eggman” Eggman said while whacking Shadow off the head with his hand.

“Ouch!” Shadow half yelled as he rubbed the spot Eggman had whacked “Wh-Where am I?”

“You’re in my base…” Eggman said with boredom.

Suddenly Shadow eyes widened as memories hit him like a tsunami wave.

”Maria…”Shadow mumbled.

Eggman grew a worried expression, thinking that the memories he added didn’t work.

“That *****! She poisoned my mind with lies! I saved the world for nothing! I should have let the world get blown to hell!” Shadow said with anger.

Eggman at this point was astonished. He didn’t expect Shadow to act like this. Eggman started thinking that maybe he over did it.

”Hell I’m so anger right now, that I’m about to blow up the world!” Shadow said with an insane look on his face.

‘Yep, I over did it…’Eggman thought. ‘But maybe I could change his mind…’

“Yeahhh! I’ma about to get one of them big nukes and blow this-”

“ Hey I got a better Idea!” Eggman interrupted.

Shadow then stopped talking none since as he looked at Eggman. “Go on…” he replied slowly.

“You and me should rob banks get rich or die trying! Also fine all seven Chaos Emeralds. With it’s power you’ll be able to become Super and me and you can rule the world!” Eggman said with his evil grin.

”Naaa, Blowing up the world sounds much better-” Shadow started

Eggman now was really worried. He might have just made Shadow in to a lunatic.

“But-”

Eggman hope goes up again.

“But now that I think about it, you’re plan is much better because if I blow up the world, I would also die” Shadow finished.

“So, you’ll do it?!” Eggman asked with hope.

“Hmmm, Yeah…sure why not…” Shadow said as if he were still thinking.

“HAHAHAHA EXCELLENT!” Eggman said

FIVE YEARS LATER

It’s been five years ever since Shadow and Eggman have teamed up. They have made plan after plan of ruling the world, but none have seemed to work, because of a certain blue hedgehog and his friends. When Sonic and the rest saw that Shadow was alive, they were surprised and trilled, but also curious as to way in blue hell would Shadow start helping out Eggman again. Sonic had asked the black hedgehog one times in a fight, but all he got in replied was “Some ***** filled my head with lies”. After that day, Sonic never asked again.

In these five years Sonic and his friends have changed a lot, as well as his enemies…well…Just Shadow. Sonic The Hedgehog now has longer quills and blue baggy pants and grind able white Air Force 1. Sonic had one day give Amy, who now wore a white t-shirt, along with bell-bottom jeans and Air Force 1’s, a chance to be his girlfriend, in a date. Sonic found out that she wasn’t as bad as he thought she would be. After that, they became a couple and to this day they still are.

Five years ago, one day, during those times he just finished fighting Eggman away from the city; the president came up to him and insisted that our blue hero should get paid for each time he saves the city or world from any danger. Sonic didn’t agree and dashed away. But then when he started going out with Amy, he asked the president if the offer was still available, at that time he was thinking that Amy would want the money. The president said yes and from there on, he received checks for saving the city. In fact, after the day Amy said, “Go out one day and use the money on anything you want”, Sonic found that he liked it and started buying many things. Hell he bought things like a mansion with fifteen rooms and also a yellow Lamborghini. Amy liked the mansion, but asked why he bought the Lamborghini, when he was the fastest hedgehog alive. He replied with “because it looked cool” and that pretty much ended the conversation.

Miles “Tails” Prower has longer tails thus making him fly longer. His front hair had also grown. But still he had kept his shoes that he had, had for pretty much his whole life. He also started wearing baggy pant ever since Sonic had told him to try them on. Tails one day met a cream colored female rabbit that is named well…Cream! She wears a simply school girl uniform. After a while, he started going out with her and do stuff like go to the park, play tag, swing on the swings, kid stuff like that. Tails at the times was living at Sonic mansion.

One day Cream stopped wearing the school uniform, and started wearing a tight light pink t-shirt, along with a bright blue skirt, that almost touched her knee, and black slip on shoes. things got kinda ugly from there on. Tails started getting attracted to her, and getting thoughts that he never thought he would think. The poor teenage fox tried so hard to avoid the feelings, but failed, Because One day Sonic caught them making out on the floor of the living room.

Knuckles the Echidna…hmmm, nothing is really known about him since Sonic hasn’t seen him in four years. Rouge the bat was also gone. Now tell me that doesn’t seem odd…(smirks)

Shadow the Hedgehog now has a really bad ass evil attitude and wears black baggy pants and two golden rings on his wrist and a golden chain that has a money sign on it and also wears new air shoes the Eggman made because the ones he use to have got burned up when he was falling into Earth. Dr. Eggman looks the same.
____________________________________________________________________Well thats it for now. I don't know when i'll post the next chapter, but MAYBE it will be soon. And who ever read this, thanks.

[Fonz_RLE]

I've read it, and I liked it.

... did you want anything else with this reply?

[SuperJon16]

Fonz_RLE, on Oct 3 2005, 11:55 PM, said:

I've read it, and I liked it.

... did you want anything else with this reply?

Nope, not at all. thanks.

[Venom]

I enjoyed it. It had some nice touches to it, which made it interesting to readon.
Nice job.

[SuperJon16]

Chapter 2: The Kidnapping

It’s 10:00 o’clock AM Sonic, Amy, Tails and Cream are eating the breakfast that Amy made. Soon as they finish eating they all put there bathing suits on they went to hang out on Sonic’s private beach. They really didn’t have plans today. Eggman hadn’t attack for a week now, so that means Sonic’s hasn’t been getting his checks.


2 HOURS LATER

Amy, who was lying on a chair along with Sonic, was wearing a pink two-piece bikini, along with a pair of white sunglasses. Sonic was just wearing a blue pair of short pants and blue sunglasses. Tails just wore his baggy jeans and Cream wore her two-piece bikini that was covered with small white bunnies. They were both lying down, on a big blanket on the sand.

“ I’m bored…” Cream complained as she sighed.

“ Me too…” Tails responded, with the same tone.

Both of then haven’t been doing much lately. Ever since Tails met Cream, he got lazy and stopped making things like he used to.

Cream shifted so she was now facing Tails. She started staring at Tails, with a small smile.

“Wh-What is it!?” Tails asked, feeling uncomfortable.

Cream just continued to stared at him with burning eyes, was it desire?

Tails just shivered

Cream’s small smile turned in to a wide one.

“How do you do that!” Tails yelled as he stood up, breaking his glaze with her eyes.

“Because its easy!” Cream said with a giggle as she also got up. “And…” She started as she shoved Tails, making him fall on the sand. She then crawled on top of the shivering fox. “I like you…a lot” She said softly.
“Oh hell no!” Sonic’s voice yelled, making Cream jump off Tails.

Sonic glared at Tails and Cream, as they grinned innocently.

“Tails, Cream, stop doing that behind my back! I’m sick of it! I mean god! Is it that hard to get a room!?”

“Will it help if I say it was Cream who started it?!” Tails replied with the same grin as before, as Cream gave him a mean glare.

“Uhh no, but answer me this Tails…” Sonic started and stopped as, he feared that he was not gonna like the answer to his question. “I know you both make out, from the times I caught you…but…. did you guys go all the way?” he spat right out.

Amy tipped her sunglasses down and also stared at Tails and Cream waiting for the answer.

Tails gulped, as he was about to reply. Cream just blushed a deep shade of red. “Y-Yes….and oh, before you ask, yes more then once” Tails haft whispered.

“Damn…” Sonic haft cursed haft mumbled, as Amy sighed with disappointment. “Tails, you better have been using protection, or I swear to god I will-”

“Don’t worry I have been, never forgot…” Tails cut in quickly.

“Tails! What the heck has happened to you!” Sonic yelled as Tails flinched. “You know what, don’t answer that…” he then turned away from the fox. “Just be careful…” with that said, Sonic walked back to Amy and laid down on the chair, beside her.

Tails crossed his legs on the sand as he frowned and tilted his head down. Cream stood beside Tails, with an upset look. “Tails…. I’m really sorry…” she said softly, with her now downcast eyes.

Tails left ear puckered up making Cream turn her attention to him. The two tailed fox then lifted his head up at Creams direction, and grinned as if nothing had happened.

Cream stared at him with questionable eyes, but then realization hit her.

“You…. were faking it!” Cream haft yelled.

“Shhhh, keep it down…” Tails responded.

“Oh Tails…” Cream said with a small grin.


2 HOURS LATER

Now its 2:00 PM and Sonic just opened his eyes. Apparently, he fell asleep without him noticing it. He looked down and saw that the pink hedgehog had also fallen asleep. Sonic smiled as he got up and stretched. He then looked at the spot Tails and Cream were at, and saw that they were whispering to each other.

“Tails, I’m gonna go order pizza for lunch right now” Sonic said as he started heading to the front door of the mansion.

“Alright!” Tails yelled back, as he and Cream continued to talk about whatever they were before.

As Sonic opened the front door of the mansion, he stopped quickly as he saw a half eaten jelly filled Donut on the floor. He was really hungry, so he decided to pick it up later and continued walking into the kitchen. He then picks up the phone that was on the counter and starts dialing the phone number. Its rings a couple of times until then finally pick up.

“Pizza Palace, state your order please” A male voice said over the phone.

“Yeah, I would like a-”

Suddenly…

“HELP!! SONIC!!” Amy’s voice yelled.

Now our blue hero was sure that, that was not a playful scream. “ Gotogobye”! Sonic said quickly as he hung up the phone and started running to the front door, but only to slips on the donut that he didn’t pick up and hit the floor with a thud.

“Damn! Why didn’t I pick up that up?” Sonic said as he flipped back up, landing on his feet with speed.

Sonic runs out the door as fast as he can and got to the beach only to gasp and what he sees before him.


“The hell….” Sonic mumbled with fear as he saw Tails and Cream on the sand, unconscious.

Sonic walked up to the unconscious beings, but stopped as he looked to his right and saw that a black van just started heading in to the mane road. He heard so loud banging and figured that it Amy in the back of the van. Sonic quickly ran out of the beach and starts running after the black van.

“AMY!! I’M COMING!” Sonic yells as he ran faster after the van.

Since he was the fastest hedgehog alive, he was pretty much right behind the van, but backed up as suddenly a laser pops out of the van’s roof and starts shooting at Sonic. With ease Sonic dodges all the shots, but also became slower in the process.

Sonic then grew sick of this game and took action by jump onto the van’s roof. While on top of the van, Sonic does a swift kick at the laser, thus breaking it. Sonic then sees a guys arm stick out the window. Apparently, the guy was wearing black, because his arm was covered in long clothing. Sonic gets closer and his eyes widen in shock as he sees that the guy is holding a red Chaos Emerald.

“CHAOS CONTROL!!” the guy yelled in a deep voice, and the whole car starts to shine light green. It then flickers and vanishes in to thin air, making our blue hero hit to the ground and roll in the process.

“Damn it!!” Sonic snared as he got up slowly.

Then Sonic remembers that he left Cream and Tails on the beach sand and quickly runs back to his mansion. He got there in a few seconds only to fine that they weren’t there! He started to panic, but quickly stopped as he ran in to the Mansion, hoping to deer god that they somehow in there room.


Sonic went up to the stairs and quickly opened the door to see Cream lying on the bed, as Tails sat on the edge.

“Tails…” Sonic whispered, “Is Cream alright?”

“Yeah she’ll be ok, she’s just unconscious… uhh where’s Amy?” Tails said hoping that nothing happened to her.

Sonic just lowered his head a bit and nodded in defeat. “She got kidnapped…”

Tails eyes widen. He didn’t know what to say, so he didn’t repile to that.

Sonic and Tails both stayed quiet, both lost of words.

All Sonic can do now is hope that Amy is alright and will stay that way until he finds her. Which he will do.

To be continued…
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Once again, don't know when i'll update...

[SuperJon16]

Damn, Chapter 2 has been up for a few weeks and no one has said nothin'. Well looks like i'm gonna have to double post.
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Chapter 3: Stolen Emerald

Thursday July 16 10:00 AM

Sonic eyes snap open, for what felt like the hundredth time. He just couldn’t go to sleep, without Amy beside him. He didn’t get sleep and it’s already morning. Sonic sighed with frustration and got of the bed, knowing that he wasn’t gonna get the sleep he wanted. He then went into the bathroom, deciding he needed a warm shower to calm his nerves.

As the warm water hit him, his thoughts were only about Amy. Damn, he just couldn’t believe that he let that happen to her. Ever since he started to go out with her, he protected her more then ever. He only hopes to dear god that nothing happens to her at the time being. He then snapped out of his deep thoughts and got out of the tub to dry up with his towel. After that, he got dressed in his baggy jeans and his headed down stairs to the kitchen.

When he got there, he began making breakfast for himself. He was making eggs and beacon, along with toast. So far he was doing a bad job, because it started to burn. He had put the stove to high by accident. Damn, he wasn’t used to making food, because he never had to. He would normally go get a hot dog, but since he started going out with Amy, he ate what she made. He soon grew frustrated and tossed the now burned breakfast in the trash.

Sonic flopped on one of the kitchen chairs near the table and began glared holes at the wall ahead, as if he was going to explode any second.

Suddenly Tails and Cream come down stairs, with small smiles on their lips. They both look ahead only to see an almost-ready-to-explode blue hedgehog.

“Sonic look, I know you’re upset that Amy got kidnapped-” Tails started as he put his hands on the table edge. “ But getting anger like this and glaring at the wall ain’t gonna help”

Sonic ignored him and continued glaring at the wall.

“Tails, it smells like something burned here…” Cream stated, wrinkling her nose in disgust.

Tails sniffed the air and also smelled it. “You’re right…” the fox continued sniffing until he got to the source of it. “Sonic, you can’t cook for jack” he said as he looked at the burned food in the trash.

“Tails…” Sonic finally spoke. “ Just shut up”

“Man, you could of asked Cream to make you breakfast” Tails stated as he turned to face Sonic.

“She wasn’t awake…” Sonic responded with anger in his voice.

“You could of waited”

“Yeah but-didn’t I tell you to shut up?” Sonic snapped rudely.

“Pfft, since when do I listen to you?” Tails shot back, just as rudely.

Sonic had, had enough and stood up, getting face to face with Tails. With quickness, he shoved Tails, making him hit the floor and slid back a little. Tails eye widened with shock, as Cream gasped.

“Tails! Screw you! You have no idea how I’m feeling right now! I-I swore that I would protect Amy from anything! But I failed!” Sonic yelled with anger and sadness.

“But you hav-”

“Just save it!” Sonic cut in.

With that said, Sonic dashed out of the kitchen and out the front door of the mansion with speed. He slammed the door in the process.

“I’ve never seen Sonic that mad ever…” Cream said with a frown. “You should of left him alone…and I can’t say the way you acted was fine…”

“Pfft, and you can’t say the way he acted was fine either” Tails answered with a scowl as he stood up. “But don’t worry, if I know Sonic well, which I do, he just went to cool off”

“Do you want breakfast?” Cream asked

“Na, I’m not hungry for some reason” the fox responded, as he started walked in to the living room and flopped on to the couch. He then grabbed the remote control and turned on the TV.

“Well then, I’m not making breakfast…” Cream chirped, as she grabbed a bag of potato chips and skipped to the living room. She then jump up and landed on Tails lap as she opened the bag of chips.

“What was that for?” Tails asked as he continued watching TV.

“Uhhmm just being random”

“Pfft!” Tails snorted which made Cream giggle.

As they both were watching TV, it was suddenly interrupted as a woman appeared on the screen.

“We interrupt this program for an important News Flash; City Halls bank was just recently robbed, by a light green male hedgehog. The only thing that he stole was the green Chaos Emerald in the volt. He seems to be having a hard time escaping, as the cops have him surrounded. This is Lisa McNeal reporting to you live” said the News reporter.

“Heh, knowing Sonic he’s probably heading that way already” Tails said. ‘I only hope that his anger doesn’t get the best of him….’ The fox added as and after thought.

CITY HALL…


Sonic had only just got to City because he was nearby. His eyes widened as he sees cops shooting at a light green hedgehog and miss completely. From what he can see, the hedgehog was wearing baggy jeans along with red and white Air Force 1s. In a blink of an eye, the hedgehog was gone.

ALLY WAY…

“Man! I can’t believe I let you drag me in to this!” Said a baby blue male color hedgehog with baggy jeans and shiny baby blue Tim. “You know that when Angel finds out about this, she’s gonna kill you right!”

“Keh! I asked you to come in case I got caught so you can help, but I never said you had to bring her!” the light green hedgehog said pointing at a yellow colored female hedgehog. She is wearing a white tang-top with blue pants and two silver rings around her wrist and a pair of shiny baby blue Air Force 1.

“hey, it Isn’t my fault, she wanted to come! And you know very damn well once she’s set on something, she’s do it” the baby blue hedgehog responded.

The female hedgehog just rolled her eyes. “Why do you want the Chaos Emerald anyways? She asked.

“It’s none of you business!” the light green hedgehog snapped.

“Why won’t you tell us?” the baby blue one asked.

“Because, like I said, it’s-”

“Heh, Look what I found here…” Sonic said with a smirk, as he stepped in the ally way. “What do you three think you’re doing?”

“ Keh! None of your business so go away!” The light green hedgehog answered.

“Okay then, just give me the Chaos Emerald and I’ll leave”

“Uhhh no”

“Fine, have it your way, I’ll just take it from you…” Sonic said with a scowl look.

“Hey, isn’t that the famous Sonic the Hedgehog?” The yellow hedgehog asked no one is particular.

“Keh! Famous or not, he’s in my way, so he’s going down” the green hedgehog said with confidents, as he got in to fighting position.

“Bring it on!” Sonic yelled as he did the same.



To be continued…
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If any one reads this story, post and tell me what you think. other then that, feel free to look and leave.

[SuperJon16]

Chapter 4: *** Whooping of a Life Time

The light green hedgehog grins and quickly runs and tries to kick Sonic in the face but misses as Sonic ducks and punches him in the stomach and then elbows him to the ground. The nameless hedgehog flips back on to his feet, but was met by a Sonic’s fist, making him hit the ground again.

“Heh! Just like I thought! You’re nobody! ” Sonic said with a cheesy grin.

The green hedgehog flips back up again, landing on his feet.

“Keh!” was the hedgehogs only replied, as he got ready for another round.

The nameless hedgehog runs and uses the spin dash attack but Sonic quickly crosses his arms in to an X and blocks the attack, pushing the other hedgehog back. Sonic, with his sonic speed, dashes up to lime hedgehog and punches him in the stomach, which causes him to bend down and hold his stomach with pain. Sonic bends down and pushes against the ground with his feet; then jumps up and punches the lime hedgehog in the chin. The light green hedgehog goes flying up in to the air and then hits the ground with a thud, making the Emerald fall out of his pocket.

Sonic, thinking that the hedgehog is unconscious, started walked up to him.

“Chris? Shouldn’t you go help him?!” The yellow hedgehog asked in a worried voice.

“Liana, my brother is not easily beaten. He’s fine, just watch…” The baby blue hedgehog, known as Chris answered.

Sonic was about to pick up the Emerald, but that was quickly put to a stop as the lime hedgehog grabbed the Emerald before him. He then flipped back up, doubled kicked Sonic in the chest, which knocked the air out of him.

“I see you still got some spark left!” Sonic gasped with holding his chest.

“Keh! I’ve got more then that! ” The light green hedgehog half yelled.

“Yeah right your bluffing…” Sonic replied with a cocky voice.

“ Hmph! I bet you never seen anyone turn Super without the Chaos Emeralds have you? ” The nameless hedgehog said.

“Heh! That’s because it’s not possible!” Our blue hero responded with a knowing smirk.

“ That’s what you think! How about I show you how it’s done!” the light green hedgehog said, as suddenly a yellow alter appeared around him and his quills started floating up.

The light green hedgehog then started flickering between bright yellow and light green, as he shut his light green eyes.

“No…. it’s not possible….” Sonic mumbled as his eyes widen in shock.

The lime hedgehog’s fur stopped flickering and finally turned bright yellow. He then opened his eyes to reveal that they were now bright red.

Sonic could believe what he was seeing. How was he supposed to beat someone in there Super form? He had never seen this happen before, neither did he think it was possible.


The now bright yellow hedgehog flashed Sonic a confident smirk and vanished.

Sonic started looking around for the vanishing hedgehog, but just couldn’t find him. Suddenly Sonic felt a powerful present behind him and turned around. A powerful fist to the face, met Sonic by the yellow hedgehog, sending him a few feet away. The bright yellow hedgehog vanished once again.

The yellow hedgehog then appeared behind the flying blue hedgehog and stopped him by grabbing his quills


“Now who’s the nobody?” the bright yellow hedgehog snared as he give Sonic a combo of punches and kicks.

The Yellow Hedgehog quickly kicks Sonic up really high and jumps up himself and starts powering up for an attack.

“Gallet Gun!!” He yelled and fires a big yellow blast at Sonic, which sends him straight down.

“Chris! Finish him off!!” The Yellow hedgehog shouted.

Chris grinned and dashes quickly to the falling blue hedgehog. As Sonic closes in, Chris pulls his right foot back. Chris then ultimate spin kicks Sonic as he connected with his foot; sending him straight thought three buildings with impact. Sonic then hits the ground as a bloody mess and also becomes unconscious.

“Chris, Liana come over here and hold my hand, we’re getting the hell out of here,” The light green hedgehog said.

Chris and Liana hold the nameless hedgehog’s hands.

“Umm are you guys sure you didn’t kill him?” Liana asked with concern.

“Naa…. hope not….” Chris mumbled that last part.

“Keh! He would have to be really weak to get killed by that! That wasn’t even half my power!” The Nameless Hedgehog said with cockiness.

“Suuurrreee….” Chris half mumbled.

“Shut up! Chaos Control!!” With that said, they all vanished with a bright green light.

Sonic lays on the ground unconscious! What will happen to our hero?!


To Be Continued…
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Short chapter. Next one will be longer.

This post has been edited by SuperJon16: 29 December 2005 - 04:06 AM

[SuperJon16]

Bump! Damn, no readers?

[angelfire]

Your story is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool!Please,please continue writing it!

[SuperJon16]

Chapter 5: Angel

July 17 9:45 AM.

Tails wakes up from yesterday’s PERFECT night.

As he stood up to stretch, his first thoughts were if Sonic came home last night. Sure they had a fight, but Sonic wasn’t the kind of guy to keep grudges…well only if he hates the person he’s mad at.

He started heading to exit his room, but stopped as he heard his name being called.

“Tails…where are you going?” Cream said while rubbing the sleep out of her eyes.

“Going to check if Sonic came yesterday…” Tails with that said, he turned around again, but stopped as his name was called again.

“Tails” Cream said softy. This made Tails turn around slowly.

When Tails faced her, Cream just winked at him.

Tails shivered. How does she do that? She just did a simply wink, that’s what everyone else would say, but for Tails, it felt like she just put a spell on him. It made him start getting the eager to jump back in bed. It only took the fox a few seconds to decide what to do.

“Oh hell…” Tails mumbled as he jumped back on the bed with his beloved Cream.

This is one fight that he can never win…

MEANWHILE

Sonic slowly opens his eyes to see that he was in one of those hospital rooms. He looks to the right and sees a purple female hedgehog sitting on a white chair. She has brown hair on her quills, along with blond streaks in them. The clothes that she is wearing are a purple tang-top along with dark purple baggy pants. On both her wrist, she has purple bracelets and for footwear, she had purple Tims.

“Wh-who are you and why am I here?” Sonic asked slowly.

“My name is Angel…and I found you on the streets unconscious. It seemed that you took quit a beating, so I called for help to bring you here…” said the purple hedgehog, while walking in front of Sonic. ‘Hmm now that I get a better look at his face, he looks very familiar…’ She thought. ‘Is he? No it can’t be…. can it?’

“Uhh excuse me for asking, but by any chance is you name Sonny?” Angel asked with hope in her eyes.

“Sonny…no one calls me that anymore. Wait! How the hell did you know that?” Sonic asked with curiosity.

Angel’s eyes widen with shock as she then quickly dug in her left pocket and pulled out a small picture.

“Look…” the purple hedgehog said as she handed Sonic the picture.

Sonic took a good look at the picture and his eyes widen with surprise. On the picture was a small purple hedgehog that looked like she was age of five. She was wearing a purple dress. Apparently, she was the girl that is standing in front of him now, but that’s not what shocked him. What shocked him was that beside her, was a small blue hedgehog that looked just like him. No, it was him!

“The heck does this mean?!” Sonic half whispered.

“That…that you’re my brother!” Angel squealed with excitement as tears started to weld up in her eyes.

“But I don’t remember having a sister…prove it…” Sonic said.

“Uhhmm you said that no one calls you Sonny anymore…” Sonic nodded at this. “I’m willing to bet that people call you Sonic!”

“So, you could have heard that on TV…” Sonic replied simply.

“Okay then, how about when you were younger, you would steel from the corner store. How about the time you snuck in our neighbor’s house and peed on his couch because you’re ball landed on his backyard and he wouldn’t give it back? And about the time you said that you could run on water and attempted it, but fell in and had to be saved from drowning? And about--”

“Ok, ok! I believe you!” Sonic said as his cheeks turned bright red with embarrassment. “But why don’t I remember you? I remember the things I did, but the memory with you in it, are just a big blur…there are some times that you flash across my mind…but then vanish” Sonic said. “And the other funny thing is that I don’t remember my parents…at all…”

“You know, I don’t either. I just remember those past memories with you in them. The last thing I remember with you was that we both were cuddled up and crying together, because of something. After that, everything is blank up to the point I woke up in the hospital. From there on, I got adopted by a family, but that’s a long story that I will tell you some other time” Angel said. “So, anyways how did you end up on the streets unconscious?”

“Hmm the only thing I can remember now is some male hedgehog beating me up…uhh can’t really remember much now, but I’ll tell you when I do”

“Oh, alright… but are you okay now?” Angel asked with a bit of worry in her voice.

“Yeah, I feel fine now…” Sonic said as he pushed back the sheets covering his body and jumped off bed. “So, how about you come to my mansion and meet my friends?”

“Yeah right… you don’t have a mansion,” Angel said with doubt.

“Wanna bet, I have a mansion complete with a private beach and I also bought a yellow Lamborghini!” Sonic bragged with a cheesy grin.

“I’m not going to believe that for a second!”

“Heh, don’t believe me, I’ll just show you, I’m going back to MY mansion and you can catch a cab and follow me” Sonic said as he started heading out to the hospitals mane hallway. Angel fallowed closely behind.

“No, I’ll just run with you back to your ‘mansion’ ” Angel rolled her eyes when she said mansion.

“Ha like you have a chance with the worlds fastest hedgehog!” Sonic said while grinning like an idiot.

Angel just rolled her eyes again.

As soon as our blue hero checked out, him and the purple hedgehog headed down the stairs and went out the hospitals mane doors and stopped at the sidewalk.

“Are you ready to get smoked?!” Sonic asked, as he got ready.

“Yeah, I’ll give you a head start” Angel said with confidents.

Angel really doesn’t know how fast Sonic has gotten over the years. But then again, Sonic doesn’t know how fast his sister is either.

“Damn you’re that confident?”

“ You’ll see…” Angel said with an innocent smile.

“Alright… GO!” Sonic yelled and started to run, but not his full speed of course. He never used his full speed unless he really needed it.

Sonic got about halfway and stopped to look back to see if Angel was behind him. He saw that she wasn’t there and grinned like an idiot.

“Ha I bet she’s taking the cab…” Sonic thought with a smirk

Suddenly Sonic turns around and sees Angel a few feet away for him. She just waves at him with her innocent grin.

“HOW THE HELL DID YOU GET HERE SO FAST?!” Sonic yelled with complete shock. “Ahh I get it, I bet you took that cab half way didn’t you” Sonic said while smiling.

“Hmph, Sonic I got two worlds for ya…” Angel

“And what could that be?”

“See-y….hold up, we can’t continued this race…” Angel said as she put her hand to her fore head.

“And way not?” Sonic asked.

“Well, I don’t even know what direction I have to go, so you would win any ways” Angel stated.

“Oh….my bad…”Sonic said with a hit of embarrassment. “Then just fallow me…”

“Lead the way” Angel replied simply.

Sonic nodded and started to jog, along with Angel.

As they got close to the mansion, Angel eyes widened, “that’s it up ahead?”

“Yup” Sonic said with a proud look on his face.

“Really? I’ve seen that a whole bunch of times, but I never thought you lived in it!” Angel said with wide eyes.

“Let my show you the inside” Sonic said as they both arrived in front of the mansion.

As they start walking up to the mansions front door, Sonic pulled out his keys as Angel looks to the right and sees the nice sandy beach that has a great view of the ocean.

“The beach It’s beautiful! I would like to hang out there sometime” Angel said with amazement.

“We can later, but first…” Sonic started and pushed the doors open. “Look at this!”

“This place is huge!” Angel yelled as her eyes widen once again.

Angel started walking around getting a good view of the living room and kitchen. She then walked back to the center and looked up the stairs.

“How many floors are in this place?”

“Oh, two not counting down here. We also have a basement down stairs, but that’s only for Tails lab”

“Tails is one of your friends right? Wait, did you say lab!?” Angel asked, surprised once again.

“Yeah. And yes its kind of a lab, It’s pretty big too”

“How many friends of yours live here?” Angel asked.

“Four including me. Tails and Cream share a room and me and A-Amy share one” When Sonic said Amy’s name; his face had a hit of sadness, but quickly shook it off. Angel saw this, but decided to ask about that later because she didn’t wanna bring up something that would upset him.

“Anyways, lets go upstairs so you can meet Tails and Cream…” Sonic said as he started walking up stairs, Angel fallowing closely behind.

As he and his sister reached the top of the stairs, Sonic began knocking on the door, which was to his right, that said ‘Tails and Cream’ on the top.

Sonic and Angel suddenly heard giggling coming from inside the room. After that, it was silent. Sonic soon grew irritated and knocked harder on the door. “What the hell are you both doing in there!? Open the door!” Sonic yelled.

“Oh, Sonic is that you? Hold up!” Both Sonic and Angel heard Tails shout.
A few seconds later a clicking sound come from the door, meaning it was unlock, then the door opened, reviling the two-tailed fox, with his baggy jeans on.

“Sonic, where were you all day yesterday? Oh and I’m sorry for the way I acted yest-”

“No, I should be sorry, I shouldn’t have acted that way, but anyways what were you doing in there?” Sonic asked with a suspicious look on his face.

“Uhh…Well…” Tails began but stopped as he finally notices the purple hedgehog beside Sonic. “Who is this?” He asked, avoiding the subject.

Sonic notices this, but decided to let it go for now. “Oh, believe it or not, this is my sister, Angel”

“Sister? I never new you had one” Tails said with confusion.

“I’ll tell you about that latter” Sonic responded.

“Nice to meet you Angel, I’m Tails” Tails said as he extended his right hand to Angel.

Angel took his hand and shook it. “Hey”

“By any chance is Cream there…” Sonic asked as he glared at the Fox.

“Uhh yeah…” Tails said with a grin and moved aside, reviling Cream, who was on the bed putting her shoes on.

“Hi!” Cream said with innocent smile.

Angel waved back.

Sonic just sighed, knowing very well what happened in here.

“Why don’t we all go to my private beach, but first, lets show Angel my Lamborghini” Sonic said with his cheesy grin.

MEANWHILE…

We go to a mysterious hedgehog that is talking to a guy with an egg shaped body. The mysterious Hedgehog has baggy black jeans and also had a black sweater with a hood covering his head. The person that the mysterious hedgehog is talking to is no other then Dr. Eggman (Doctor Robotnik). The mysterious hedgehog walks up to a cell with a pink female hedgehog in it that is wearing a brown rag on.

“Let me out of here!” Amy yelled with anger.

“Hmph, I think not” The mysterious hedgehog said while taking of his hood and grinning.

“Shadow! I should of known you were also behind this!” Amy yelled once again.

Eggman walked beside Shadow and chuckled. “I have plans for you my friend…”

What will Shadow and Eggman do to Amy, what plans do they have in stored, fine out in the next Chapter!

To Be Contiuned...
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I'm Back...

[Lord Shmeckie]

Not as good as mine.

[angelfire]

Lord Schmekie, are you gonna say that to every story?
Anyway, SuperJon16, please continue writing. This story is still sooooooo gooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!

[SuperJon16]

Chapter 6: Emerald Soul


July 18. 10:00 PM (night)

SONIC’S BEACH

Sonic and Angel have been talking for a few hours now, trying to get to know each other more and catch up on old times as they sat on chairs near the a small table on the sand, while Tails and Cream are sleeping on a blanket on the sand. As they were both talking, Angel had been trying to get enough courage to ask Sonic why he suddenly got sad when he said ‘Amy’ earlier today. Was that his girlfriends and did something happen to her? She must have been something to him, to cause such sadness. She really wanted to ask him, but didn’t want to see the hurt look upon his face again.

“Sonic can I ask you something?” Angel asked carefully.

Sonic saw the look on her face and had a feeling as to what she wanted to ask about. “Go on…”

“Umm, do you have a girlfriend?” Angel asked.

Sonic sighed, having had a feeling that this was going to come up some time today. “ Yeah, but she got kidnapped two days ago…” he replied with a frown and sadness in his voice, which made Angel wince.

Angel frowned at his sad expression. She had expected him to say something else, like “she is hurt”, but never she got kidnapped.

“I’m sorry, I should have never asked…. its none of my business anyways…”

“No, its alright, you were curious, and wanted to know…” Sonic said.

There was awkward silence as they both couldn’t bring them self to say something.

“I-I should be going home, it’s already late and my boyfriend is probably worried about me…” Angel said as she stood up
“Do you want me to walk you there?” Sonic asked.

At this, she put her hands on her waist and said, “I’m a big girl, I can take care of myself”

“Is that so?” Sonic joked, which earned him a glare from Angel. “Alright, see you around” He finished as he turned around started walking to his two friends who were sleeping soundly on the sand.

“Alright thanks for everything Sonic” Angel said as she turned around, started walking, but then stopped and turned around.

“Sonic”

This caused him to turned around and respond. “What?”

“I was wondering if you would like to meet my boyfriend tomorrow?”

“Yeah sure” Sonic replied as turned back around shook his friends awake.

With that said, Angel walked away heading home, as Sonic, Tails, and Cream headed inside to get some sleep for the night.

JULY 19. 10:00 AM


It’s the next day and Sonic, Tails and Cream are eating breakfast that Cream made.

“Tails I got a question to ask you” Sonic said while eating eggs.

“Yeah?” Tails responded as him kept his eyes on the food and ate.

“What happen to the old Tails that used to love building stuff and look up to me as an older brother?” Sonic asked.

“I still like to build stuff, just not as much… ” Tails answered as he then stuffed his mouth with some eggs. “Oh and about the look up to you as a brother thing, its still there, just different…”

Sonic just glared at the fox. Tails felt Sonic’s burning eyes on him, even though he wasn’t looking at him. Tails knew that Sonic was still mad about what happened yesterday, when his sister and him came in to his room.

“Look, its not my fault…” Tails started. “Cream wouldn’t keep her hands to herself…” Tails said, with earned him a glare from Cream, who was eating her breakfast beside him.

Tails just grinned innocently at Cream.

“Tails…” Cream mumbled as her glare sharpened.

“Fine fine, Sonic you see…its goes like this… I-”

“You know what, something tells me I don’t wanna know…” Sonic interrupted as he got up off his chair at the table. “Just don’t ask me for help, when I see a mini Tails around here…” with that said, Sonic picked up his dish and put it in the sink and then walked up to his room.

Tails just sat there with a wide grin on his face while Cream blushed deeply.

“So….Uhhh wouldn’t it be cool if there was a mini Tails around here?”

“Tails!” Cream squealed, as her face got even redder.

MEANWHILE EGGMAN’S BASE…

Shadow is now sleeping on his bed soundly until…

“YES!! IT’S FINALLY DONE!!” Eggman yelled from his lab, which caused Shadow to wake up with shock and fell off his bed.

“What the Hell…” Shadow mumbled while rubbing his head.

Shadow gets up and walks out the door to see what Eggman had done this time.

“What the hell are you yelling about? You woke me up!” Shadow yelled with a bit of anger.

“Sorry, It’s just that I finished me latest project” Eggman said.

“What is it this time?” Shadow asked with a bored expression.

“Shadow, I just finished my newest creation! Behold!” Eggman said while picking up a gray looking Emerald off the table. “ The Emerald soul!”

“What does it do?” Shadow asked as he raised a eyebrow, with a bit of interest.

“I’m glad you asked, this Emerald sucks up any living things soul and turns the soul to power, living their body to do as we chose!” Eggman answered proudly.

“Really… have you tested it?” Shadow asked.

“No…, but that’s why we have our friend here” Eggman said, pointing to the cell the pink hedgehog was in.

“Hmm does that mean I can make Amy my sex slave?” Shadow said while grinning evilly.

“You have a sick mind Shadow…” Eggman said with a serious look on his face.

“What! It’s just to make Sonic jealous…”

Eggman still looks at him seriously.

“You know what… forget I said that” Shadow mumbled.

“All right then, here how this works. We only need three souls but we also need the seven Chaos Emeralds. With it, you will have unlimited power and you and I will rule the world!” Eggman said and laughed madly.

“Alright Lets try this thing out” Shadow said as he started walking to Amy’s cell, as Eggman fallowed with the Emerald in hand.

Shadow opened the cell that Amy is in.

“Why di-did you op-open the cell? Are you letting me go” Amy asked with fear in her voice.

“We came to try something on you, oh and before you ask, you got no choice but to do as we say, ” Shadow said as Eggman handed him the gray Emerald. “But we can make a deal…”

“O-okay, what is it?” Amy asked with a shaky voice.

“Well, we’re gonna use this new Emerald that the doctor made. It hasn’t been tested so we’re gonna test it on you…if nothing happens, then we’ll let you go, if it does, then you will be serving me and the doctor, Got it?” Shadow said.

“its not like I have a choice…you do what you wanna do….” Amy replied.

“Good. Now doctor how do you activate this? Shadow asked.

Eggman whisper the words he needed to say in Shadow’s ears.

“Okay Amy this is supposed to take your soul, so stand still!” Shadow said as he tossed the Emerald in the air.

Amy didn’t expect that and started to back away in fear but Shadow grabs her right arm, so She wouldn’t go any farther.

As he caught the Emerald, he yelled out, “Soul Control!!” and the Emerald starts to shine brightly with energy.

Amy shrieked as the Emerald Soul blasted an energy wave that went inside her mouth and sucked up her soul in to the Emerald. Amy starts to shine brightly as her eyes become dull and emotionless.

“Did it work?” Shadow asked Eggman.

“If it did, she should be just like a puppet. She at this point will only listen to you because you used the Emerald. You should confirm that…” Eggman said.

“Okay, Amy sit down on the floor!” Shadow ordered.

Amy did as she was told and sat on the floor.

“Good! Now the next thing you have to do is yell out ‘Emerald Control’, so that the Emerald can steal her souls energy and turn her soul from positive to negative. Thus making her be in our side” Eggman said.

“Got it! Emerald Control!!” Shadow yelled while sticking up the Emerald in the air.

An energy wave shots out of the Emerald, and it aimed at Amy head and hit it’s target. Amy starts to shine again and her dull green eyes turn red with life.

Amy rubs her head in pain as she stood up. “Ahh, My head…”

Eggman walks up to Amy.

“So Amy how do you like the way you feel now…” Eggman asked.

“Wow…I feel pretty good…” Amy said in amazement.

“Amy you can now go back to your ‘love’ Sonic” Eggman said with a smirk.

“No way, who ever said I even liked Sonic…” Amy said with disgust.

“What do you feel when you think of Sonic?” Eggman asked.

“Hatred…” Amy said as her eyes flashed bright red.

“Man, she looks kinda scary…” Shadow said with wide eyes.

“Indeed she does…” Eggman said with a wide evilly grin.
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[EnigmaEchidna]

This fic does have somethings that I like, but I still think its still needs to be retooled. I like the way you're taking your fuc, but the fact of matter it just makes me want to nod off a bit. You may want to add in more description in your story to make your audience enjoy it a little better. I like how you handled Shadow, but in some parts he sounds a bit dry and dull.

This post has been edited by EnigmaEchidna: 12 April 2006 - 10:41 PM

[Lord Shmeckie]

EnigmaEchidna, on Apr 12 2006, 10:40 PM, said:

I like the way you're taking your fuc, ...

Ha ha ha ha ha!

[angelfire]

I still enjoy this story because it seems to have a unique twist to it, making it a Sonic fanfic that I've never really seen before. You're still doing a great job, SuperJon1.

[EnigmaEchidna]

Lord Shmeckie, on Apr 12 2006, 07:28 PM, said:

Ha ha ha ha ha!

bah..thats what I get for doing multiple tasks at once

[SuperJon16]

Chapter 7: Set Up

Sonic was lying on his bed and listening to smooth jazz. He wanted so badly to just run outside and kill somebody just about now. He couldn’t handle the thought of what could be happening to Amy. Going outside and looking for her isn’t going to help, seeing as how he has no clue as where to find her. He thought that maybe it was Eggman who kidnapped her, but Eggman wasn’t the kind of guy who would just keep quite this long. Besides, he hand no idea where Eggman’s new base was. Its funny isn’t it? That this is the first time he didn’t know where Eggman’s base was, when he always found out.

Suddenly a very loud buzz sound came for downstairs, meaning someone was at the front door.


This made our blue hero snap out of his thoughts and run down stairs to answer the door.

As he made it to the front door, he swung it open to see no other then his sister, Angel with a smile standing there. He was about to say hi, but then the person next to his sister caught his eyes and he froze in place. Suddenly rage started to well up inside him as the memories hit him like a ton of bricks.

“HEY!! YOUR THAT HEDGEHOG THAT I LOST AGAINST!!” Sonic yelled as he pointed to the light green hedgehog beside his sister

“Keh, it seems that my girlfriend is the sister of a loser” The light green hedgehog said with a smirk. He too was surprised that this was the same hedgehog that had his ass whipped by him and his brother just three days ago.

“Why you! I’ll show you who’s the loser here!” Sonic yelled angrily as he lifted his fist to punch the living day lights out of this bastard’s face, but
stopped as he saw his sister who now stood in the way with a questionable face.

“Sonic? What are you talking about?” Angel asked with her hands on her hips.
“Remember the day you got me to the hospital?” Angel nodded. “Well he is the reason why I ended up there in the first place!”

Angel eyes widen with shock! She turned around to ask her boyfriend about this, but stopped as she saw him with a wide smirk on his lips, conforming her question.

“Jon…” Angel said with a glare.

“Keh, ain’t my fault, he just happen to be at the wrong place at wrong time!”

“What!?” Sonic yelled from behind Angel.

“Your heard me!” Jon answered with a wide smirk.

Sonic was about to respond to that until he just realized another thing.

“Angel, Don’t tell me this *******-hedgehog is your boyfriend!?” Sonic asked with rage.

“Sadly he is…” Angel half mumbled with a sigh, with earned her a glare from Jon.

“*******?! I’ll show you what a real ******* can be like!” Jon growled.

“That’s it!” Sonic shouted as he pushed Angel aside and was face to face with Jon. Both them glaring at each other with fire in there eyes.

Angel was about to break them up but stopped and looked outside as she heard a loud noise coming from that direction.

“What was that?!” Sonic and Jon said simultaneously and ran out the door, having heard the noise too. Angel fallowed closely behind.

As they arrived outside, they look up and see a black and red jet along with to figures on top. Sonic eyes fire up with rage as he realized that Shadow was behind the kidnapping, as the said hedgehog was holding Amy tightly by both her arms. The look of fear was a pond the pink hedgehog’s face, as her bright red eyes were downcast. Hold up? Since when were her eyes red? Deciding to worry about that later, he then blinked back in surprise as he saw that Amy was no longer wearing her bikini, but instead a long white t-shirt, along with a pair of black tight leather jeans.

Shadow jumps off the jet while holding on to Amy tightly, and landed on the hard ground below.

“Shadow!! I should of known you were behind this!” hollered Sonic as he glared at the dark hedgehog. “Let her go!”

“Fight me!” Shadow said with an evil smirk. “And if you win I’ll let her go!” Shadow yelled as Amy was struggling to get free.

“Fine! You got it!”

With Sonic’s agreement, the ebon hedgehog did a swift movement with his right hand connecting to Amy pressure point on her neck, making her hit the ground in a unconscious state.

“Hey!” Sonic roared with anger

“Hmph, just making sure she don’t run off ” Shadow said with the same evil smirk as before.

Shadow got into fighting position, and so did his opponent. Angel and Jon watch as both the dark and blue hedgehog glare dangerously at each other.

With a blink of an eye, Shadow dashes at Sonic and uses a homing attack but Sonic dodges it with ease and punches Shadow in the gut, then elbows him in the face. Shadow hits the ground but quickly recovers by flipping back on to his feet. All was still for a few seconds until…

“Chaos Spear!”

“Sonic Wind!”

Both the attacks collided with force, canceling each other out.

Suddenly, Shadow takes out the red Chaos Emerald out of the pocket of his pants and holds it tightly. He then begins absorbing its energy getting ready for an attack.

“Chaos Wave!” Shadow yelled and blasted a whole bunch of green energy waves directly at Sonic.

Sonic didn’t have time to move and was sent flying up in the air as the attack hit him full force. Shadow jumps up with quickness and hits Sonic to the ground with a powerful homing attack.

“D-Damn it…” Sonic mumbled while rolling in pain.

Shadow then jumps up in to the air and lands on Sonic stomach with a powerful stomp, making the blue hedgehog scream in pain.

Angel with a worry look, turns to Jon to ask him to help Sonic, but sees that her boyfriend had a bored expression on his face.

“Jon! You get over there and help him!” Angel commanded with a bit of anger.

“No way, I’m enjoying this to much!” Jon said, but then regretted his answer when he saw Angel about to burst in to tears. He hated when she cried.

“Keh, fine, but only out of pity ness” said the green hedgehog and ran, heading to where Shadow and Sonic are.

Seeing that Sonic was back in control, he turned slightly and headed to pick up the pink unconscious hedgehog, but as he was about to reach her he was kicked to the ground by the ebon hedgehog.


“Stay out of this hedgehog” Shadow said simply.

“Make me…” Jon said with a smirk as he was up again.

“Gladly”

With quickness, Shadow is in front of Jon, getting ready to punch him in the face. Jon ducks as Shadow swung his fist, and double kicked him on the stomach and hit him on the back of his head with his elbow, making the dark hedgehog hit the ground.

Jon then aims he’s right hand at the jet.

“That thing is making to much noise and frankly its pissing me off!” Jon yelled and pulled out his green Chaos Emerald out of his pocket. He absorbs a little bit of its energy and fires a small ball of Chaos energy at the jet. Its hits the jet with a bang, making it explodes to scraps.

Jon didn’t get the reaction that he wanted as he looked at Shadow and saw no expression on his face.

“Fool! I’ll get you and finish off that blue hedgehog some other time!” Shadow said. He then looked to his left and saw that Sonic already had Amy in his arms.

“Hmph till next time, Chaos Control!” With that said, the ebon hedgehog vanished with a bright green flash.

“I’m taking her back inside” Sonic said and began walking inside the mansion while holding Amy tightly in his arms.

Jon and Angel go fellow as well.

SONIC’S MANSION…

As Sonic enters his mansion, he quickly heads up the stairs, fallowed by Angel, living Jon behind.

‘Damn, this place is huge!’ Jon thought.

Jon starts walking around for a while, getting a good look at everything.

‘The hell did he afford all this?’ thought the lime hedgehog, with a bit of jealously.

Jon soon grew tired of looking around and headed up the stairs, looking for Angel and her brother but stopped as the door to his right got his attention. He sees a golden sign on a door that says “Tails & Cream’s room”.

Jon’s Curiosity got the best of him, as he found his right head touching the handle of the door and sees that it’s open. He’s ears twitched as he heard odd sounds coming from inside. He then opens the door and to his surprise, he sees a male orange/yellow colored fox, along with cream-colored female rabbit in bed, wrapped in covers!

“Ah!! WHO THE HELL ARE YOU!” shouted Cream at the light green hedgehog, whose eyes were wide with shock. She then picks up her pillow, aiming it at Jon.” GET OUT! GET OUT!” She yells and throws the pillow.

Jon, with quickness, leaves and closes the door before the pillow hits him.

Tails can’t help but chuckle at her reaction.

“That’s not something I wanna see…” Jon thought with wide eyes. He then shook off the thought and walks up to where Angel is, hoping that the next room he enters won’t be like the last.

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“Amy…Amy…” Sonic whispered as he shook the pink hedgehog gently, who was on the bed. Finally after calling her name a few times, Amy opened her red eyes slightly.

“Sonic?” Amy asked in a low voice.

“Yeah, its me…” Sonic responded and smiled.

Amy smiled back as she closed her eyes.

“Am-” Sonic started, but cut himself off as he saw that Amy’s breathing was steady, meaning she had fallen asleep.

Finally Amy was back and safe. But something still bugged him as an image of Amy’s now bright red eyes replayed in his mind. What did Shadow do to her? He would have to ask her when she awakens.

“Sonic” Angel’s voice brought him out of his thoughts

“Yeah?”

“Can me and Jon sleep here?” Angel asked. “I know it’s not late, but I feel to lazy to walk home”

“Yeah, let me show you your ro-”

“There’s no need” Jon said, interrupting Sonic as he came in the room. “I can just Chaos Control us back home, so there’s no need to stay here” He said ‘here’ with disgust, which he earned a glare from Angel.

“Oh well, I wanna stay here anyways”

“What! Why?!” Jon asked with anger.

“Because I want too, and you’re staying here too” Angel stated.

“The hell I will!”

This earned him another glare from Angel.

“No!” was Jon’s answer still.

Angel then gave him the puppy dog eyed look.

“Keh, Fine” Jon finally gave in as he crossed his arms stubbornly. He hated when she used that look on him; it always did the trick.

“Well then, aren’t you gonna show us to our room?” Jon asked rudely with a scowl on his face.

“Yeah, follow me…” Sonic said, as he turned away and headed out his room. Angel and Jon fallowed closely behind.

As they left the room, Sonic fallowed by his guest, headed up to the last floor which lead to a second hall way. They headed to the end of the hall and then Sonic opened the door to his left. Inside the room was all white and had a queen-sized bed on the middle, which touched the wall, and a bathroom to the right. Beside the bed was a small TV. It also had a bright light bulb on the ceiling and a closet on the left corner. Other then that, it was plain big room.

Angel ran right inside the room and jumped on top of the bed. She giggled as she bounced a bit when she landed. Jon just rolled his eyes and walked in the room also.

Before Sonic walked out of the room, he said that everything they needed besides food was already in the room and in the bathroom.

Once Sonic left the room, he headed down the hall and down the stairs to his room.

As he entered his room, he saw that Amy was no longer on the bed.

“Huh? Where sh-” Sonic was cut off as he felt a sharp pain on his back and hit the floor with a thud, unconscious.

Amy, who had just hit Sonic on the back of his head with her old wooden hammer, which she took out of the closet near by, smiled evilly.

MEANWHILE…

Jon, who was lying on the bed beside Angel, was just staring at the ceiling in deep thought. Jon and Angel had known each other for about two years. Three months ago, they realized they had some feeling for each other and began dating. A few days ago, he realized that this was the longest time he ever had a girlfriend for. Then finally yesterday, when he was making out with her, he realized that he loved her. The thing is that he didn’t want to tell her, out of fear that it might ruin what they already have. Its sounds stupid, but Jon wasn’t really the kind of guy who would striate up tell his feeling to someone, even if he know what to say. Little did he know, Angel had the same feelings as him.

Shoving those thoughts to the back of his mind, he looked at Angel, who was watching TV, and the thoughts came flooding back. He felt like grabbing her and telling her how much he loved her, but once again pushed the thoughts away and got off the bed, decided to take a shower. When he rolled off the bed, the green Chaos Emerald slipped out of his right pocket and landed on to the bed.

“Angel I’m going to take a shower” Jon stated as he began walking to the bathroom.

“Alright”

After a while, Angel decides to get a drink of water and heads to the kitchen on the first floor.

As she was walking down the stairs that lead to the bottom, she felt a hard shove to her back! Angel squealed as she went tumbling down the stairs and hit the floor with a thud; making her fall in to an unconscious state. Amy smiled evilly once again at her work and headed up to the room she sensed the Chaos Emerald in, which was the room Angel and Jon are staying at.

As the possessed pink hedgehog walked in Jon and Angel’s room, she quickly found what she came for on the bed. She then picked up the green gem and ran quickly down both the stairs and right outside the door.

“There all fools” Amy said to herself as she held on the Chaos Emerald tightly.

The Emerald Soul not only turned her soul evilly, it also gave her the ability to use the Chaos Control.


“ Chaos Control!” Amy said in a sweet voice and vanished with a bright green light.

BACK IN THE MANSION…

Jon got out of the shower with his baggy jeans hanging lose and a towel around his neck. While he was in the bathroom, he realized that when he passed his hand near his pocket, the Chaos Emerald was no longer there. He shrugged it off by saying that he probably left it on the bed, which it was. While he was taking a shower, he suddenly felt Chaos energy rating hit him, meaning that some one just used Chaos Control. This made him cut his shower short and see what was happening out there.


Jon looked around the room he was staying at and saw that Angel was no longer on the bed. He had a bad feeling that something bad happened, so he walked out the room and then broke in to a run as he headed down the hall and then down the first set of stairs, landed on the second floor. He then continued running until he reached the first floor of the mansion.

“The Hell!!”

He’s eyes widened in complete shock as he sees the girl he loved on the floor, face down, and unconscious. He quickly checked if she had any broken bones. He silently thanked the gods that she didn’t and picked her up gently.

Just then our blue hero walks in the scene while rubbing his aching head.

Jon turns around and looks at Sonic with fire in his eyes. “Where the hell have you been to have missed all this? I found Angel on the floor unconscious and the Chaos Emerald that I had is gone!”

“I don’t know, but something tells me that Shadow is behind this” Sonic started.

“Keh, that black hedgehog couldn’t have gotten in here, since I didn’t sense Chaos energy here and believe me he has a lot of it!” Jon said.

“No, I never said it was Shadow who did this”

“Then who could’ve?”

“Amy”
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[angelfire]

Wow, the story's getting interesting now. Keep up the awesome writing, man!

[SonicTheSamurai]

KK the Fox, on Apr 4 2006, 04:39 PM, said:

Lord Schmekie, are you gonna say that to every story?
Anyway, SuperJon16, please continue writing. This story is still sooooooo gooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!

*Sighs* He isn't being serious by any means necessary. Yeah his fanfic is shitty like you describe it, but all he's doing is having fun, that's all.