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Posted 07 July 2005 - 06:11 PM

Eternal Darkness
Chapter 1
“Sonic beat Eggman again in this outstanding battle caught on tape!” The reporter declared on the huge television screen in the middle of Washington sitting up on the glory of the news channel “The New 45” head quarters. “As we see in the tape Eggman’s robot Metal Sonic named after Sonic himself goes berserk and transforms into some dragon like creature and Sonic manages to defeat him somehow? If you’re wondering where we got the tape well it’s from The Eggcarrier’s surveillance cameras. After that we found Sonic unconscious in the woods (something must of interrupted his run home?) and we revived him but if Sonic fell unconscious who killed Metal Sonic? If look further into this tape Knuckles and Tails were probably the ones who stopped Metal Sonic Go Sonic heroes! This is Hugh Mcmormick signing off from ‘The New 45’ later!”

A while later…
“I can’t believe the Sonic Heroes actually beat the ultimate weapon of mass destruction Metal Sonic!” Eggman starts pondering… “That’s it! I’ll build a robot so powerful it will destroy everything!” “How you going to do that Doctor?” Emeral asks Eggman. Eggman thinks some more… “I’ll invent an indestructible robot one that can destroy Sonic the Hedgehog! I must get to work!”
5 weeks later…
“There it’s finished!” Eggman excitingly states. A huge enormous robot gets up and starts walking. “Go destroy Sonic Super Eggbot!” The robot then constantly says “Must destroy Sonic must obey orders, must destroy Sonic must obey orders…….” The robot then implodes and explodes. “Damn I’m never going to get rid of Sonic!” Eggman throws the “How to build your own Eggbot” book on his piles and piles of books. “While sure you are…” Emeral trying to cheer Eggman up. “Ha ha! Why didn’t I think of it before?” Eggman state when he caught site of the voodoo book in his pile of next evil plans. “I’ll raise someone from the dead!” Eggman cheerfully says!



This is my first chapter so I'll post more if there is some positive feedback...

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Posted 09 July 2005 - 02:20 AM

I'm gonna look forward to this. I'll keep reading if you keep posting. This seems to be getting intresting.
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Posted 10 July 2005 - 05:30 PM

Hey KOC, PM me when the 2nd chapters done.
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Deify you! Renew, believe in some demented myth!!!
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Posted 11 July 2005 - 05:59 AM

PM me too.
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Posted 11 July 2005 - 02:02 PM

Eternal Darkness
Chapter 2
Later on at the chapel’s graveyard in the Pumpkin Hill Zone Eggman states to Emeral “Which tombstone should we pick?” “Obviously the big huge one!” Emeral scientifically mocks! “I like your reasoning!” Eggman then says while he starts digging at the most tremendous tombstone there. “Whew finally done, man that took some time!” Eggman states exhausted after a while of digging. Eggman then places his voodoo book down and then reads the following words “Intario kakish shurnourito mana!” Just then the wind started to blow massively then it stops and everything is silent…

…and nothing happens!

Eggman then spazes and rips the voodoo book to shreds. (meaning they now don’t know what the rest in peace spell is!) “Eggman something’s happening look the dirt’s forming around the bones!” Emeral excitingly explained “Yes! This is it!”
Eggman shouted. While the dirt was forming into flesh a hand comes out and grabs Emeral’s head and squishes it without breaking a sweat! “Eggman, I am at your commands!” a voice from hell echoes around. “hohohohohohoho! Sonic I’ll get rid of you soon enough!!!”

While all this was happening Sonic and Knuckles were about to enter a Pub when out of the blew a little voice starts shouting very loud “Help! Sonic someone’s at Pumpkin Hill and is terrorizing the graveyard” when sonic turns around he sees an Undead…
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Sorry the Chapters are so short but this is my first FanFiction post so I wouldn’t want to get picky with KOC (hey I kinda of like that nickname!!?!?!?)
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