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Posted 06 June 2005 - 08:08 PM

She sighed, leaning downwards, half way off of the couch. Emerald eyes drooped to a lidded point, where she then flung herself back onto the piece of furniture. Rosy pink quills ran over each other, this way, that way. Mascara dripped from her eyes, only to be smeared again as the hedgehog rubbed her eyes sleepily. As the door rang, she opened one dull green eye, as if to acknowledge it. Again sighing, her hoarse voice rang out.

" Hold on! " her throat was scratchy; a bit swollen from sobs.

Amy Rose quickly went into her restroom, wiped off the mascara, washed her face, brushed her quills a bit, and went out to answer the door. She opened it to find Cream the Rabbit at her door.

" Ms. Amy, what took you so long? " she giggled.

" Uh, I had to get dressed, " she started. " and I just woke up. Slept in, you know. Come in. "

" Uh-huh.. " the doe replied, not covinced, but let it go.

" Ms. Amy, are you alright? " the young rabbit inquired, changing the subject rather quickly. Well, she did have a right to. Last night was rather rough.

" Oh, Cream, please just call me Amy. Also, yes, I'm fine. I don't need.. " she paused. " him. Yes, I don't need him. " she repeated as if trying to convince herself.

Last night.. she remembered so clearly.

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Posted 07 June 2005 - 01:56 AM

a nice story indeed.
It's spelled "Caesar", fool. C-A-E-S-A-R.

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Posted 07 June 2005 - 02:00 AM

She was halfway to the club when she tripped over something. The pink hedgehog fell on her rear, muttering a few choice words under her breath. She looked over and saw what she tripped over. It was a gem of some sort; a glowing pink gem. She knew it wasn't an Emerald, but.. something else, for she sensed the waves coming from it.

She thought it was odd, but ignored the falling feeling in her stomach as she stored it in her purse. She was cautious tonight, keeping her Piko Piko hammer nearby, in case she needed it. Why? Her tarot cards had told her ' An unexpected battle will come this night. ' So, she had readily packed her hammer.

As she stood up, brushing her new red dress off once, then twice, she continued her way to the club where the friends would meet for a formal dinner. Her new dress was fitted for her only, a custom made dress. In fact, Vanilla made it for her.

It was rose red in color, with thin black straps to hold it in place. As it neared mid-thigh, it spread out into a layer of red and black frills, giving her an almost princess-ish style to her. Her feet bore black klunkers with red roses on them, and 'round her neck was a black leather collar with a red rose hanging down from it. Her make-up was simple: a bit of black eyeliner and light black eyeshadow, and of course, cherry lipgloss.

She neared the bouncer, smiled innocently at him, and started to speak.

" Amy Rose.. " she said happily, blinking. The bouncer scoffed, crossing his arms after reading his list.

" Go on in, Pinky. Table 34. " she shoved by him in an unlady-like manner, finding table 34 easily, for her friends were there.

Cream was clad in a green dress that had white ribbon coming from the sides up onto the chest, tying in a cute schoolgirl fashion. Her shoes were also green, slightly heeled with white bows. Around her neck was a green collar with a white bell, that Amy had given her. She wore no make-up, but had green ribbons at her ears.

Tails was looking handsome and.. quite uncomfortable in his charcoal tux and orange undercoat. His red tie was slightly off, but nonetheless, he was adorable. His fur was combed and bangs were tamed. His eyes even had a nervous gleam in them as he gulped.

Rouge was off on business, and Knuckles had to go with her. They said it was ' Gem business ', but then again, who knows with them?

Sonic wore a completely black tux with a light blue undershirt, and blue bowtie. His shoes were polished and quills lightly pushed into place, his face was clean and there was not a scratch or flaw in sight.

Amy sat down next to Cream, who was sitting next to Tails, who in turn, was sitting next to Sonic who was really by Amy..

( Woah, that was.. confusing.. )

As they paid attention to the man on stage, nobody seemed to notice the male hedgehog staring at Ms. Amy Rose.

" Welcome ladies and gentlemen. I am proud to present Midnight Cage's karaoke night! First up we have Cream the Rabbit. "

Cream blushed, walking onto the stage, nervously gripping the microphone. As the music started, she stopped shaking and blushing, and seemed to be one with the words and the music itself.

( Should I put the song in here? )


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Posted 07 June 2005 - 03:36 PM


With more emotion than usual, the young doe began to sing in a pained but beautiful soprano voice.

" Tell me what’s wrong with society
When everywhere I look I see
Young girls dying to be on TV
Won’t stop till they’ve reached their dreams

Diet pills, surgery
Photo shopped pictures in magazines
Telling them how they should be
It doesn’t make sense to me

Is everybody going crazy
Is anybody gonna save me
Can anybody tell me what’s going on
Tell me what’s going on
If you open your eyes
You’ll see that something is wrong

I guess things aren’t how they used to be
There’s no more normal families
Parents act like enemies
Making kids feel like it’s World War 3

No one cares, no one’s there
I guess we’re all just too damn busy
And money’s our first priority
It doesn’t make sense to me

Is everybody going crazy
Is anybody gonna save me
Can anybody tell me what’s going on
Tell me what’s going on
If you open your eyes
You’ll see that something is wrong

Is everybody going crazy
Is everybody going crazy

Tell me what’s wrong with society
When everywhere I look I see
Rich guys driving big SUV’s
When kids are starving in the streets

No one cares
No one likes to share.. "

As she finished the song, some were almost in tears, a few were crying, and a few others were bowing their heads with respect. The more picky of the lot were shocked that a young child swore, especially the sweet, young rabbit.

Cream jumped from the stage and was hugged by Amy.

" You did great. "

( I do not own Crazy by Simple Plan. )

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Posted 09 June 2005 - 05:48 PM


Amy smiled down at the young doe as they walked to sit down. After a while of simple chatting, Amy excused herself to go 'powder her nose'. On her way there, though, she saw that Sonic had followed her, calling her name. She turned around, smiling.

" Yes, Sonic? " she restrained herself from glomping him.

" Um.. you look nice.. "

" Thanks, you do too. "

" Um, anyways. I need to talk to you. "

' This is it! ' thought Amy. ' He'll proclaim his undying love for me! '

" Don't think because I invited you here because I.. WANTED .. to. "

Amy blinked. ' What? '

" Tails made me.. and Amy.. "

" Y...es? "

" ..... I honestly, honestly... don't love you.. so... could you.. ya know? "

" Yeah. Sure. Anytime. I'll stop chasing you.. " she muttered, eyes secretly watering behind her bangs.

" You're still my friend, Ames. "

" I know. "

" Atta girl! Well, I gotta get back or Cream'll think I'm stalking you. "

' If only.. ' Amy thought as her hero walked away. She sighed.


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Posted 10 June 2005 - 05:55 AM

Nami the Lost, on Jun 9 2005, 01:48 PM, said:


Amy smiled down at the young doe as they walked to sit down. After a while of simple chatting, Amy excused herself to go 'powder her nose'. On her way there, though, she saw that Sonic had followed her, calling her name. She turned around, smiling.

" Yes, Sonic? " she restrained herself from glomping him.

" Um.. you look nice.. "

" Thanks, you do too. "

" Um, anyways. I need to talk to you. "

' This is it! ' thought Amy. ' He'll proclaim his undying love for me! '

" Don't think because I invited you here because I.. WANTED .. to. "

Amy blinked. ' What? '

" Tails made me.. and Amy.. "

" Y...es? "

" ..... I honestly, honestly... don't love you.. so... could you.. ya know? "

" Yeah. Sure. Anytime. I'll stop chasing you.. " she muttered, eyes secretly watering behind her bangs.

" You're still my friend, Ames. "

" I know. "

" Atta girl! Well, I gotta get back or Cream'll think I'm stalking you. "

' If only.. ' Amy thought as her hero walked away. She sighed.


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Now I've been labled a renegade.
It seems so clear now what I must do.
You're no immortal,I won't let them...Deify you!

They view, you as the new Messiah.

Deify you! Renew, believe in some demented myth!!!
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Posted 10 June 2005 - 03:25 PM

... How is that beautiful?
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Posted 10 June 2005 - 04:41 PM

whoopie, you just open his heart I guess thats why he says its beautiful.
It's spelled "Caesar", fool. C-A-E-S-A-R.

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Posted 10 June 2005 - 09:40 PM

I need ideas.. this is far as I've written and I have major writer's block right now..
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Posted 12 June 2005 - 05:56 PM



As Sonic walked away, Amy realized something. She couldn't breathe, and her eyes were blurred by her tears. She walked faster to the girls' room. When she got in there, she slumped onto the counter, breathing heavily and tears spilling from her eyes.

She watched her heart crumble as Sonic stabbed the remains and laughed. A bitter chuckle escaped her lips after a while of silence. She was no longer cryong as she lifted her red tear-stained face. Her eyes were dull and lifeless; cold; bitter.



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Posted 10 July 2005 - 05:35 PM

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Beautiful as in good Nami.....Keep up the good work.
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It seems so clear now what I must do.
You're no immortal,I won't let them...Deify you!

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Deify you! Renew, believe in some demented myth!!!
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Post icon  Posted 14 December 2005 - 08:42 PM

I'm going to go check out the rest and the begging was realy good keep it up.
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Posted 15 December 2005 - 11:12 PM

I don't wish to sound too bitchy here but please,

DO NOT ADD RANDOM ATTACHMENTS AFTER EVERY POST!
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