[Ultimate Metal Overlord]

They came in and took everything. They raided my lab equipment, My room, Everything. Except... The Observatory, in the secret equipment room. Even so, I was thrown in jail. Most people would have given up by now, But not me for I am a brilliant sceintist Eggman. Hahahahahahaaa!! I had to act quickly for I had little time. I waited till the guard was at just the right angle. Wham! I cracked him in the head with my forearm. I looked all around me, No one was watching. I grabbed the keys and got out of there. As soon as I was out, I headed to the closest vehicle I could find. I jumped in and drove off. It was close because the gate guard was about to come out of his booth but quickly looked away at another car that was speeding off towards the city jail. as soon as I got on the highway, I Called gmerl with the spy phone I had. As soon as I called for him, He was there. Without so much as a word, we arrived at the robotnikbot base that I had just got arrested at. I knew there would be agents and police scattered through the entire building. I got to work quickly. I reset the security system and went inside. Inside, There were in fact no police or agents. To my suprise, I laughed with glee. This would have been one of those moments where I could say I escaped, But no, I hadnt the faintest Idea where this little creature had come from or how she got in, but she was in there none the less, and that was a problem. Not noticing her, I went to my quarters where I began sequence 1 of my plan. I oppened a capsule with the words "eight beta ver.8" written on the side. In the capsule was a speacial formula that I had been working on. It was not quite finished, yet, It needed to be tested. As I walked to the observatory, She followed me. I did not notice her until I got on the elavator. When I finally saw her, She didnt know that I knew she was there. Finally I said, "Lets have a tea party!" In a polite and horrid sort of way. She came out of hiding followed by a small animal which I could not Identify at the moment. I told her to come in the elevator and go have a tea party. She bought it. When she came into the elevator, I noticed small features about her face. Her fur was cream colored with small brown rings around her eyes. She also had Brown mark on the top of her head. When we got to the top floor, I told her to come and sit down. She had come in all by herself and I had robot guards everywhere. She was a threat. As soon as she sat down, I got her. The chair surrounded her, and in a fast but soft whoop, she was in a small orange ball. This was my chance. I quickly placed six chaos emeralds into their consoles. I had to hurry and find that last one. I went into the storage room. There it was, A Big red shining emerald which had unreosonable powers. I picked it up admiring it. I ran as fast as I could. There I was, one step away from placing it into its console, and all of the sudden, Boom! Crashed sonic through the wall.

Thats what happened.

To be continued in chapter 2!

[Bahamas]

Enter/return key. Also, you had so many sentence fragments it was crazy. Plus, you really ought to use some speech, or thoughts.