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It all happened so fast...
All dead...
My..
Fault...
A little earlier...
Kiva: Bow before me!
Valin:Screw you...
Kiva:Then watch your frends die!
Valin:Noooo!(choke)
Bell:Valin...
Kiva:Your freinds beg for their lives...
Freinds of kiva *snickers* I'll let you live if you let me
kill valin.
Bell:never!!
Kiva:There Hearts are too innocent to let you die!!!
Valin:You..(cough)..Bastard!
Kiva:Silence!!!
Valin:Never....
Lord Vega:Valin!!!
Valin:Vega...You..made it...
Kiva:Your freind is too weak to be saved vega!
Lord vega:Bastard what did you do?!
Kiva:Exactly what Im going to do to his freinds!!!
*shoots beam and kills valins freinds*
Valin:Nooooo!!!!!!(choke, gag, wheeze)
Kiva: Now its your turn!!!
Lord vega: CHAOS CONTROL!!!
Kiva:Heh heh heh heh....
Valins mind: Nooo! my freinds!..Too weak..to..think....
*falls asleep*
To be continued...
In part two.
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Ultimate Metal Overlord 
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Posted 07 May 2005 - 11:33 PM
-"Life is like a can of soda, just open ....... nahh.
-"If I were brad pitt I would...... No no no!!!
-"Life is like a box of ....... No! I've heard it before!!!
O.K., O.K., O.K., O.K., Let me try again.
-"Life is like a river, theres no boat."
Ahh, just screw it. I hate making sigs.
-"If I were brad pitt I would...... No no no!!!
-"Life is like a box of ....... No! I've heard it before!!!
O.K., O.K., O.K., O.K., Let me try again.
-"Life is like a river, theres no boat."
Ahh, just screw it. I hate making sigs.
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Ultimate Metal Overlord
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Posted 08 May 2005 - 03:08 AM
Part two.
Vega: that was close!
Valin:yes it..(choke)..was..
Vega:dont worry about your freinds.
Valin:why? That bastard killed them!
Vega:learn to lose to regain.
Valin:what does that meen?
Vega:soon kid..soon.
Valin:Ughh.
Vega:go back to sleep.
Valin:*snore*
Vega:guess ill be lookout till you get back to health.
Meanwhile...
Kiva:Well bell it seems our plan worked..ne?
Bell:yes and its my plan.
Kiva:sorry mamuosel.
Bell:Valin will pay for retrieving me from the dark.
Kiva:but you are dark.
Bell:It doesnt concern you.
Kiva:Sorry.
Metal overlord:Master bell !
Bell:what?
Metal overlord:Ive found them!!
Bell:excelent!
Metal overlord:There just around the village outside master!
Bell: then me and three guards will be on the lookout.
Bell:Kiva watch the place while im gone!
Kiva:yes mamuosel.
Metal overlord:when will she find out?
Kiva:Im not telling her. not until the time is right.
Metal ovelord: The throne belongs to me!!!
Kiva:be patient! you will regain your throne once again.
Metal overlord:Im tired of taking orders from a little brat!!
Kiva:soon, metal...soon.
to be continued...
Vega: that was close!
Valin:yes it..(choke)..was..
Vega:dont worry about your freinds.
Valin:why? That bastard killed them!
Vega:learn to lose to regain.
Valin:what does that meen?
Vega:soon kid..soon.
Valin:Ughh.
Vega:go back to sleep.
Valin:*snore*
Vega:guess ill be lookout till you get back to health.
Meanwhile...
Kiva:Well bell it seems our plan worked..ne?
Bell:yes and its my plan.
Kiva:sorry mamuosel.
Bell:Valin will pay for retrieving me from the dark.
Kiva:but you are dark.
Bell:It doesnt concern you.
Kiva:Sorry.
Metal overlord:Master bell !
Bell:what?
Metal overlord:Ive found them!!
Bell:excelent!
Metal overlord:There just around the village outside master!
Bell: then me and three guards will be on the lookout.
Bell:Kiva watch the place while im gone!
Kiva:yes mamuosel.
Metal overlord:when will she find out?
Kiva:Im not telling her. not until the time is right.
Metal ovelord: The throne belongs to me!!!
Kiva:be patient! you will regain your throne once again.
Metal overlord:Im tired of taking orders from a little brat!!
Kiva:soon, metal...soon.
to be continued...
-"Life is like a can of soda, just open ....... nahh.
-"If I were brad pitt I would...... No no no!!!
-"Life is like a box of ....... No! I've heard it before!!!
O.K., O.K., O.K., O.K., Let me try again.
-"Life is like a river, theres no boat."
Ahh, just screw it. I hate making sigs.
-"If I were brad pitt I would...... No no no!!!
-"Life is like a box of ....... No! I've heard it before!!!
O.K., O.K., O.K., O.K., Let me try again.
-"Life is like a river, theres no boat."
Ahh, just screw it. I hate making sigs.
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Bahamas
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Posted 08 May 2005 - 05:16 AM
Sucks. Enourmously. You used a bad format, your grammer was atrocious, your plot was practically nonexistant, and the general awesome was lacking 100%.
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EnigmaEchidna
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Posted 08 May 2005 - 08:22 PM
I'm all for freedom of expressive writing but I think there should be some rules for this forum which I will discuss with Sway when I see him.
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