[SuperJon500]

Authors note: These are new ages for the Sonic crew and also new characters.

Old
Sonic The Hedgehog age 18
Miles Tails Prower age 16
Knuckles The Echidna age 21
Amy Rose age 18
Shadow the Hedgehog age 25
Rouge the bat age 20
Eggman age 47
Cream the rabbit 15

New

Jon The hedgehog age 19
Chris the hedgehog age 18
Angel the hedgehog age 18 (Sonic’s Sister)
Liana the hedgehog age 18



Authors note: I do not own Sega or Sonic Team Sega does but I do own Jon, Angel, Chris and Liana. Sonic and the rest of the crew belong to Sega.


Chapter 1: An Alliance is formed


Sonic and his friends were heading down to Earth after the space colony incident. Two hours later they finally made it to Earth and everyone stepped out of the ship except Eggman and Sonic.

“ You know once we step out of this ship we will be enemies again,” Eggman said to Sonic while looking at him.

“ I agree with you, this is how everything was meant to be” Sonic replied.

Sonic looked at all his friends and said “ ok guys once I put my feet on the ground were going to have to freaking run”.

“ Ok” the whole crew said (Tails, Amy, Knuckles, Rouge,).

Sonic smiles at Eggman while putting his feet on the ground and yells out “RUN!!”

Sonic and the rest of the crew start running.

(Author note): (the reason why Sonic and his friends were running away from Eggman because, Eggman is aiming a giant laser beam at them just to let you know)

Well you know how it ends Sonic ends up winning.

THE NEXT DAY

Eggman was looking in the forest for a Chaos Emerald. Then suddenly, Eggman saw Shadow on the ground out cold, all bloody, and burned up.

“Forget about the Chaos Emeralds, I have to take Shadow back to my base to cure him” Eggman said while picking up Shadow.
TEN MINUTES LATER

Eggman finally arrives at the base; Eggman puts Shadow in the cure tube and leaves him there for a while.

(Authors note:) if you saw DragonBall Z in the Frieza saga Goku was getting cured up in this tube with water I don’t know what it’s called but he was getting cured to fight Frieza well that’s all I can tell you.

TWO HOURS LATER

Eggman took Shadow out of the cured tube, he was all healed. Eggman put shadow on the brand new bed. Suddenly Shadow coughed.

“ Maria, is that you?” shadow says while looking at Eggman.

“Yes” Eggman saying it sarcastically.

“Really” Shadow said looking all drossy and opening his eyes.

“NO Idiot its me dr. Robotnik” Eggman said while whacking Shadow off the head with his hand.

“Wh-Where am I?”

“Your in my base”

“Where is Sonic?” while getting up.

“Sonic is not here, and why would I let him in my base Sonic and I are enemies”.

Shadow ignores him and gets off the bed.

“Hmmm I thought I was dead”

“Well aren’t you happy that you’re alive?”

“Umm yes and no, I mean I fulfilled Maria’s promise and that’s all I wanted to do. I’m also surprised that I’m alive, I fell like 1,000,000 feet from space”
“Well your lucky to be alive” Eggman said while arching an eye.

“Well I guess”

“What are you going to do next?”

“You know… I have no idea.

“ I got a Idea! You and me should rob banks get rich or die trying and fine all seven Chaos Emeralds. With it’s power you’ll be able to become Super and me and you can rule the world”.

Shadow thinks for a few minutes.

“ Why? I just helped save the world”.

“ Awww come on Shadow, you all ready did Maria’s promise, come on Shadow think of all the power you will have”

Shadow thinks again.

“ Hmmm hearing that make me want to do it but in the other hand I don’t want to brake Maria’s promise”

Shadow blows air out of his mouth while Eggman is waiting for Shadow’s answer.

“ You know what, forget Maria’s Promise in fact I hope Maria is burning in hell for all I care, lets do this!” Shadow says while grinning evilly.

“ HAHAHAHA EXCELLENT!”



FIVE YEARS LATER

It’s been five years ever since Shadow and Eggman have been trying to Kill Sonic and rule the world but failed because of the help of Sonic’s Friends. In theses five years Sonic and his Friends have changed a lot thought out the years, well and enemies. Sonic The Hedgehog has longer Quills and blue baggy pants and grind able white Air Force 1. Sonic also goes out with Amy and has a mansion and a yellow Lamborghini. Miles “Tails” Prower has longer tails and can fly longer and his front hair is little longer but still has the same shoes and also has baggy pants. Tails now goes out with Cream and him and her live in Sonic’s Mansion. Cream the Rabbit is not the Cream we use to know, her attitude HAS changed a LOT. She wears a pink T-shirt and has short pants and shy, blue Nikes and also has longer ears but not to long. Amy Rose looks way better then when she was that annoying hedgehog. She wears a white T-shirt and a red skirt and also her Quills are longer and touch her shoulders and wears two sandals. Knuckles the Echidna nothing is really known about him Sonic hasn’t seen him in four years. Rouge the bat nothing is also known about her, Sonic hasn’t seen her in four years. Shadow the Hedgehog now has a really evil attitude and wears black baggy pants and two real golden rings on his risks and a real golden chain that has a money sign on it and also wears new air shoes the Eggman made because the ones he use to have got burned up when he was falling into Earth. Dr. Eggman looks the same.
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this is the frist chapter, so yeah it sucks.

[chaosknightmare]

hehe....it pretty good.. u should roleplay with me and shade, peper and co.

[SuperJon500]

Thanks! I didn't expect that....

Well heres the last chapter of the day...

Chapter 2: The Kidnapping

It’s 10:00 o’clock AM Sonic, Amy, Tails and Cream are eating the breakfast that Amy made. Soon as they finish eating they all put there bathing suits on they went to hang out on Sonic’s private beach.


2 HOURS LATER

Amy was lying on a chair and Sonic is near her with his own chair and Tails and Cream are lying on a big blanket on the sand.

“ I’m bored” Cream said with a bored face.

“ Me too” Tails responded.

A few seconds passed before Cream looked at Tails and said “ Lets DO IT”

“Ok” Tails answered with a grin in his face.

Tails and Cream started to walk out the beach. Sonic saw that Tails and Cream were walking inside.

“Hey, where are you both going” Sonic yelled.

“To go eat something” Tails yelled back

“Ok…” Sonic thought for a few seconds and realized something. “Hey wait a minute, we just ate 2 hours ago”

Sonic thinks for a minute yet again…

Sonic quickly sat up and yells “What! No Tails! Cream! Come back here!”
Sonic yelled. He then sighted and sat back down on his chair

Sonic then thinks once again.

“Hey! Tails! Cream! You better not be doing that on my bed!” Sonic stood up and yelled.

Sonic then looked at Amy and was about to say something but stopped.

“Amy…” Sonic whispered.

Sonic saw that Amy was sleeping.

“Ahh I’ll just change the bed covers later.” Sonic said softy and went to sleep beside Amy.

2 HOURS LATER

Now its 2:00 PM. Sonic and Amy woke up. Sonic looks to the right and sees Tails and Cream talking.

“Hey Tails did you have “FUN” with Cream” Sonic said while rubbing his eyes.

Tails turned around.

“Yeah, like always” Tails grinned.

“Anyways I’m hungry, I’m going to order a couple of pizzas for all of us ok” Sonic said while walking into the mansion.

“Alright” Amy, Cream and Tails yelled.

Sonic goes in the living room and picks up the phone and starts dialing the phone number.

Suddenly Sonic hears somebody yelled out help outside.

“That must be Amy playing around with Tails and Cream” Sonic said to himself calmly.

“HELP!!” Amy yells.

Now our blue hero was sure that, that was not a playful scream. “ Oh crap! Bye” Sonic said to the pizza guy and hung up the phone. Sonic started running out the door but he slips on a half eaten jelly filled Donut that he didn’t finish eating last night.

“Damn! Why did that have to happen now?” Sonic said while getting up on his feet and rubbing the back of his head.

Sonic runs out the door as fast as he can and got to the beach.

“What the!” Sonic scream out loud in shock to see Tails and Cream all beat up and lying on the ground.

“WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED HERE!” Sonic yelled in a frightened voice.

Sonic ran up to Tails and Cream.

“ Tails, Cream! Wake up!” Sonic said while shaking them both.

Suddenly

“ AHHH! HELP ME SONIC!!” Amy screamed.

Sonic quickly turned around and saw a black car. He also saw Amy in the back of the car screaming and banging on the back. The black car starts moving and Sonic quickly gets out of the beach and starts running after it.

“AMY!! I’M COMING!” Sonic yells while running after the car.

Suddenly a laser pops out of the cars roof and starts shooting at Sonic. With ease Sonic dodges all the shots.

“What is this a freaking joke” Sonic thought to himself.

Sonic quickly speeds up and gets close enough to jump onto car. While on top of the car Sonic does a swift kick at the laser, which fell right off. Sonic then sees a guys arm stick out the window. Sonic looked in shock to sees a guy holding a red Chaos Emerald.

“CHAOS CONTROL!!” the guy yelled and the whole car starts to shine light green and suddenly vanishes and Sonic falls to the ground and rolls.

“YOU ******* *******!! YOU’LL PAY FOR THIS!!” Sonic got up and yelled with rage.

Suddenly Sonic remembers about Cream and Tails and quickly runs back to his mansion. A few minutes later Sonic runs to his beach and sees that Tails and Cream are not there, so he runs inside his mansion and looks around everywhere and stops in the living room.

“Duh Tail’s room” Sonic said to himself and ran up to Tail’s room.

Sonic opened the door to see Cream laying on the bed and Tails sitting beside her, tending her wounds.

“Tails” Sonic started, “Is Cream alright?

“Yeah she’ll be ok, Sonic did you save Amy?” Tails said hopping that Amy was in her room.

Sonic just lowered his head a bit and nodded.

“Sonic I’m sorry this happened” Tails said softy

“ It’s alright Tails it’s not your fault, I swear I will get the person who did this I swear!

[chaosknightmare]

lol im gettin into this add me on msn chaosknigthmare@hotmail.com

[SuperJon500]

chaosknightmare, on Jan 24 2005, 09:00 PM, said:

lol im gettin into this add me on msn chaosknigthmare@hotmail.com

I don't have msn. what are u trying to tell me?

This post has been edited by SuperJon500: 24 January 2005 - 09:18 PM

[Muzzy Roberto]

He's into you... Y'know... phsyically...

[chaosknightmare]

muzzy: obviously
lol notin i always add people,

[Muzzy Roberto]

And he adds himself into people as well. Usually through the anus.

[SuperJon500]

WTF? O_o;;

[Shade]

Pretty good, but just one problem. I don't think Shadow would just go "Screw You Maria" and become all evil and stuff. Other than that, nice work.

[chaosknightmare]

muzzy would know.... jk

[dorkiness]

How come they all wear baggy pants!! I want to see some shorts!!

This post has been edited by dorkiness: 25 January 2005 - 11:18 PM

[chaosknightmare]

lol dorki u are a bit picky XD, come to think about it she does have a point tho

[SuperJon500]

Chapter 3: Sonic’s Rival


Thursday July 16 12:00 PM

Sonic wakes up and gets off his bed and goes to take a shower. While he was taking a shower all he can think of is Amy, can she be hurt? Is she dying? After he was done, He got out of the tub and dried himself off and put on his clothes on and went down stairs and made breakfast which he had a little trouble doing.

Suddenly Tails and Cream come down stairs.

“Sonic why the hell are you eating that, that crap is burned” Tails asked.

“ What the hell am I suppose to eat? ****” Sonic answered in an angry voice.

“What the heck is up you’re ***? And besides you could of ask Cream to make you breakfast” Tails said.

Sonic didn’t respond.

“Tails don’t you see he’s still angry about yesterday” Cream whispered to Tails.

“Yeah I guess” Tails said while turning the TV on in the kitchen.

Tails picked up the remote control and flipped to the porn channel. Cream quickly smacked Tails in the back of his head.

“Why the hell are you watching that! When you got me!” Cream yelled at Tails.

“Chill, I was just Joking” Tails said while grinning and flipped the channel to TNN.

Suddenly the show got interrupted.

“We interrupt this program for an important News Flash; in City Halls bank, there seems to be a light green male hedgehog, and is escaping with the only green Chaos Emerald in the banks volt, cops are now trying to get him but he is to fast for them. This is Lisa McNeal reporting to you live” said the News reporter.

“ Sonic did you even hear what she said” Tails said to Sonic.

“Huh what?” Sonic said like he was daydreaming.

“Sonic you Idiot, did you even listen! She said a freaken Chaos Emerald just got stolen!” Tails yelled at Sonic.

Sonic finally snapped out of his daydream.

“Huh WHAT! A CHAOS EMERALD!” Sonic yelled.

“No my ***, yes a Chaos Emerald!” Tails said.

“Hmm I’m going to check it out” Sonic said and stopped when he almost when thought the door. “And Tails don’t get smart with me kid so shut the hell up” Sonic said and ran out the door and went to check it out.

Tails looked at Cream.

“Well I’m beat” Tails said.

“Oh well want to DO IT” Cream said while grinning.

“Alright” Tails grins back and ran up stairs and Cream followed him.

Meanwhile Sonic got to City hall and sees cops shooting at the light green hedgehog. Sonic blinks ones and the hedgehog was gone.

Meanwhile we go to a light green hedgehog that is wearing baggy pants and grind able red and white Air Force 1s.

“Yo Chris I got the Chaos Emerald lets go” the light green hedgehog said to a baby blue color male hedgehog with baggy pants and with shiny baby blue Tim.

“Ok Jon, hey Liana we have to go” Chris said to a yellow colored female hedgehog. The yellow hedgehog is wearing a white tang-top with blue pants and two silver rings around her risks and shiny baby blue Air Force 1.

“Ok” Liana said.

“ Ok now lets get out of here” Jon said and starts running with Chris and Liana beside him.

Suddenly Sonic get in their way.

“Hey were do you think you guys are going” Sonic said with a smirk.

“ Keh! None of your business, now back off!” Jon responded.

“Give me the Emerald and then I’ll get out of the way”

“No I said back off ” Jon yelled.

“Fine you want to do this the hard way then you’re on buddy,” Sonic said while grinning.

Jon turns around and looks at Chris.

“Chris and Liana stand back I’ll take care of this” Jon said and turned around.

“Lets do this!” Sonic yelled.


To be continued…

[SuperJon500]

did anyone read the new chapter?

[dorkiness]

SuperJon500, on Jan 25 2005, 06:54 PM, said:

Meanwhile we go to a light green hedgehog that is wearing baggy pants and grind able red and white Air Force 1s.

“Yo Chris I got the Chaos Emerald lets go” the light green hedgehog said to a baby blue color male hedgehog with baggy pants and with shiny baby blue Tim.

The story is good.. But Too much baggy pants.. the characters apperence seem all to alike.

And Cream Is to Horney

SuperJon500, on Jan 25 2005, 06:54 PM, said:

"Oh well want to DO IT"

[SuperJon500]

Chapter 4: The battle begins

Jon grins and quickly runs and tries to kick Sonic in the face but Sonic ducks and punches him in the stomach and elbows him to the ground but Jon quickly gets up. Sonic quickly runs straight at Jon and disappears and ends up behind Jon and punches him really hard on the back. Jon falls to the ground, gasping for air.

“Damn your weak, I guess I’m done, now hand over the Emerald” Sonic said.

Jon slowly gets up.

“No way, if you think its that easy, think again,” Jon said.

Jon runs and uses the spin dash attack but Sonic quickly crosses his arms and raises his arm up and blocks the attack and quickly punches Jon in the stomach, which causes him, bend down, Sonic bend down and punches Jon in the chin and Jon goes flying up high. Sonic quickly jumps up high and roundhouse kicks Jon in the back and Jon goes straight to the ground. He appears to be knocked out.


“Give up, your done for” Sonic said in a cocky way.

Jon slowly starts getting up.

“Ha! I see you still got some spark left!” Sonic said.

“You really think that I’m that easily beatin, you have no idea. I’ve only used five percent of my power” Jon yelled.

“Yeah right your bluffing” Sonic said in his cocky voice again.

“ I’ll show you half of my power when I go super” Jon said.

“What do you mean super?” Sonic asked. “You need all seven Chaos Emerald to turn super, you only got one”.

“ You’ll see” Jon said with a smirk on his face.

Jon starts powering up.

“AHHHH!!!” Jon yelled.

Jon’s light green fur turns bright yellow and Jon’s green eyes turn red.

“But how can you…” Jon quickly interrupts by punching Sonic in the stomach.

Jon still has his fist on Sonic stomach.

“Your about to feel 50 percent of my power” Jon said and give Sonic a mega combo of punches and kicks.

Jon quickly kicks Sonic up really high and jumps up himself and starts powering up for an attack.

“IT’S OVER!! GALLET GUN!!” Jon yells and fires a big blast at Sonic, which sends him straight down.

“Chris! Finish him!!” Jon yells.

Chris quickly ultimate spin kicks Sonic before he can hit the ground and send Sonic straight thought three buildings and hits the ground a bloody mess and also unconscious. Jon powers down and turns back to normal and lands on the ground.

“Chris, Liana come over here and hold my hand, we’re getting the hell out of here” Jon said.

Chris and Liana hold Jon’s hands.

“CHAOS CONTROL!” Jon yelled and they all vanish.

Sonic lays on the ground helpless! What will happen to our hero?!

[SuperJon500]

I need at least one reply so i can contiune...

This post has been edited by SuperJon500: 01 February 2005 - 09:50 PM

[Pepper]

I like the story. But Tails and Cream are to, like Dorki said, horney.

[SuperJon500]

Yeah, this story is old and i wasn't really thinkin right lol! but it will stop.


Chapter 5: Angel

July 17 9:45 AM.

Tails wakes up from yesterday’s PERFECT night.

“ OH Crap! I FORGOT ABOUT SONIC! He never came back last night!” Tails said while sitting up on his bed in a hurry.

“Well its your fault...” Cream said, while rubbing her eyes.

“Well I couldn’t help it… anyways I have to find Sonic” Tails said, and got off his bed and was about to head out his room until…

“Hey Tails” Cream said softy while giving Tails a weird look.

Tails look at her. He was getting the eager to jump back in bed. It only took Tails a few seconds to decide what to do.

“Oh what the hell, one more time wouldn’t hurt” Tails said and jumped back on the bed with Cream.

MEANWHILE

Sonic slowly opens his eyes and looks around and sees that he’s in a hospital and that he’s also laying on a bed. He looks to the right and sees a purple female hedgehog. She’s wearing a purple tang-top and brown hair with blond streaks and dark purple baggy pants and has one purple bracelet on each risk and purple Tims.

“Wh-who are you?” Sonic asked slowly.

“Hmph! I can’t believe you don’t remember your own sister” Angel said while walking in front of Sonic. “Well to refresh you memory I’ll tell you my name again, its Angel”

Sonic thinks for a minute…

“WHA! Your that little annoying sister who used to bug me every single day of my life! Damn you turned out to look pretty good!” Sonic said.

“ Thank you Sonic” Angel said while blushing, “Anyways what happened to you, I found you on the ground near City Hall. You were a bloody mess so I had to get some help” Angel said.

“ Well I remember that I got beat up really bad by a hedgehog but I can’t remember what he looked like” Sonic said.

“Are you ok?” Angel asked, a little worried.

“Yeah I feel ok… hey why don’t you come to my mansion and meet my friends” Sonic said while getting of the bed.

“Yeah right you don’t have a mansion,” Angel said.

“Want to bet, I have a mansion complete with a private beach and I bought a yellow Lamborghini” Sonic said to Angel.

“Ha! I’m not going to believe that for a second!”

“Fine don’t believe me, I’ll just show you, I’m going back to MY mansion and you can catch a cab and follow me” Sonic said.

“Na I’ll just run with you back to your so called mansion” Angel said.

“Ha like you have a chance with the worlds fastest hedgehog!” Sonic said while grinning.

Sonic and Angel ran down the stairs and went out the hospital’s doors and stopped at the sidewalk.

“Are you ready?!” Sonic asked.

“Yeah, I’ll give you a head start” Angel said.

“Damn you’re that confident”

“ You’ll see” Angel said while smiling innocently.

“Alright… GO!” Sonic yelled and started to run.

Sonic got almost half way and stopped.

“Ha I bet she’s taking the cab,” Sonic thought.

Suddenly Sonic turns around and sees Angel a few inches from him.

“HOW THE HELL DID YOU GET HERE SO FAST?!” Sonic said in an amazed voice. Sonic then clams down and said“Ahh I get it, I bet you took that cab half way didn’t you” Sonic said while smiling.

“Ha, Sonic I got two worlds for ya” Angel said and smiled.

“What could that be?”

“See-ya!” Angel yelled and jet past Sonic.

“What!” Sonic yelled and started running.

Sonic catches up with Angel but Angel run even faster.

‘Crap, she’s fast! But not faster then me! But I’ll let her win…Na I’ll just win’ Sonic thought and accelerated his speed to haft its max. Sonic jetted pass Angel and got to his place in a matter of seconds.

Angel got there a few seconds after.

“Ha! What took you so long?” He asked in his cocky voice.

“Wow! You weren’t lying” Angel said amazed.

“Ha I told you I’m fast”

“No, not that, I was talking about your mansion” Angel said still amazed

“Let my show you around” Sonic said and starts to walk Angel around.

Sonic shows Angel his yellow Lamborghini and his private beach and in side the mansion.

“Now I want you to meet my friends Tails and Cream there up stairs” Sonic said.

Sonic and Angel walk up stairs to Tails room. Sonic opens the door only to find Tails and Cream sleeping together. Angel looks in shock and so does Sonic.

“Tails! What the hell! Did you even bother to use a condom, oh Crap I didn’t mean to say that. Didn’t you even worry that I didn’t come last night?” Sonic said.

“Well that two questions and I’ll explain, one I could have sworn I put a condom on, oh wait I did, second I was about to look for you but Cream gave me this look and I couldn’t help it so I jumped back into my bed” Tails said.

“Oookkk anyways, guys meet my sister Angel” Sonic said.

“Hi nice to meet you” Cream said

“Hi nice to meet you. Sonic never told me about you”. Tails said.

“That’s because Sonic didn’t remember me,” Angel answered glaring at Sonic. Sonic just smiled innocently.

“ I got an idea, why don’t we all go to my private beach,” Sonic said.

Tails, Cream and Angel all agreed and they all went to hang out on Sonic’s private beach. Sonic and Angel both sat on a table that has an umbrella on the top, to block the sunlight and Tails and Cream are swimming.

“ Sis so do you have a boyfriend, a girl like you should have one” Sonic asked.

“ Yeah I do” Angel answered.

“Cool what’s his name?” Sonic asked.

“His name is Jon the hedgehog, do you want me to bring him over tomorrow?” Angel said

“Alright” Sonic said.

MEANWHILE…

We go to a mysterious hedgehog that is talking to a guy with an egg shaped body. The mysterious Hedgehog has baggy black pants and has a black sweater with a hood covering his head and two air shoes. The person that the mysterious hedgehog is talking to is no other then Dr. Eggman (Doctor Robotnik). The mysterious hedgehog walks up to a cell with a pink female hedgehog in it.

“Hmph, we meet again Amy” The mysterious hedgehog said while taking of his hood and grinning.

“ Sh-Shadow!” Amy said in a scared voice.

Eggman walked beside Shadow and started to laugh.

What will Shadow and Eggman do to Amy, what plans do they have in stored, fine out in the next Chapter!

Man the Tails and Cream part is messed up, but i'ma messed up guy! and like i said, its old. this was one of my first. One reply and i will continue...