[mecha knuckles]

Chapter 1 The Raid
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A male echidna name Calibur, was walking through the woods after a hard days work out cutting trees for the village's wood supplies, saw a wounded woman laying under a tyree wounded. He approched the woman, she was holding her side, she was wounded... she had been fighting off a group of balverines and was badly hurt after killing them. The woman did not tell Calibur that how she was wounded, Calibur took her to his house and nursed her back to health, after years of living together, they amrried and all day to day trouble were set aside well atleast for now. The two lovers brought them selfs a house in the quite town of oakvile, after setteling down they had two children, a boy and a girl named Twisted and Fortune. There mother was rarly with them she was always away and still she told no body how she was injured asll those years ago.
10 YEARS LATER... It was Fortunes birthday and Twisted had yet to buy her a present again... Twisted when to see his father.
"Dad... Dad could i have some money to buy fortune." With a hint of laughter his father replied " So you forgot your sisters birthday again well I'm not bailing you out this time." Then he added " Go and help out in the village, and every good report i get ill give you a gold peice."
On his way down to the main part of the village he saw a yound girl sittin on the floor crying, he approched the girl and asked what was wrong she replied " My teddy has gone missing could you find him for me please." So off he set in search of the yound girls teddy bear, he searched down the path nect to the corn feilds and he bumped in to a boy shouting insults to a younger boy. The boy shouted "Help me, he picks on me because I'm smaller than him, you look strong can you stop him?." Twisted walked up to the boy and asked him to leave... but the boy carried on so with a full swing twisted punched the boy and he ran away. "Hoo ray" shouted the little boy, "why was he picking on you" asked Twisted. "He wanted my teddy but it will be safer with you" he replied giving him the teddy. Twisted returned to the girl and gave her the teddy, and she skipped away.
The boy returned to his father, "I'v been hearing good things about you here you go." and gave him 3 gold coins. So off twisted ranmm down to the local sweet shop and brought the biggest bag of sweets he could, and ran down to the play area to fing his sister. "Oh thank you! i thought you had forgotten again" exclaimed Forutne. They sat and talked for hours , wehn Fortune told Twisted abaout a dream she had "It was terrible i dreamed that bandits raided the village, and that there was nothing left standing." More houres pasted and they continued to talk when a man came running from the entrance to oakvile shouting bandits, but before he got further in to the village he was shot down, "Oh no its happening hide." Twisted hid behing the great tree with his eyes closed waiting for it to be over, his sister ran off to warn everybody in the village...
All was silent all that could be hear was the burnign of buildings. Twisted ran to find his parents... once he reached his house he say his father laying on the floor, he ran up to the body of his father when, a bandit ran at him shouting DIE!, But befor he reached Twisted he fell to the floor dead. Behind the body was a hedgehog, who took the boy away from the village to be trained as a hero.

[Slim Shady]

Cool, Thats like, the word 'The' you lke say the in like every sentence

[Gem_stone_sonic]

It seems like you can't stop saying like and you only said 1 sentence. Twisted wrote 39 sentences. And the is a more common word than like. And I'm probably boring you all with my constant ramblings.

[Cookie Monster]

yusuf, thats cool

[mecha knuckles]

Quote

It seems like you can't stop saying like and you only said 1 sentence. Twisted wrote 39 sentences. And the is a more common word than like. And I'm probably boring you all with my constant ramblings.

WTF are yout takign and can i have some

chapter 2 will be out when i can be bovered to do it

[Hyper Shadow]

Cool!

Looking forward to part 2

[Cookie Monster]

ya, when will part 2 be out?

[Gem_stone_sonic]

mecha knuckles, on Oct 25 2004, 04:49 PM, said:

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It seems like you can't stop saying like and you only said 1 sentence. Twisted wrote 39 sentences. And the is a more common word than like. And I'm probably boring you all with my constant ramblings.

WTF are yout takign and can i have some

chapter 2 will be out when i can be bovered to do it

I've been snorting chaos emeralds, you can have some, if you get past Knuckles that is...

[mecha knuckles]

bleh the scond chapter is hard i done a really good one bu messed it up half way through by mesing up the story line so it won't be out for even longer now sorry guys

This post has been edited by mecha knuckles: 29 October 2004 - 12:13 PM

[Cookie Monster]

lol, bleh

[mecha knuckles]

you forgot your picture of fonz you need a pic of fonz to spam remember lol

[Cookie Monster]

who was that message to?

[mecha knuckles]

you lol bleh is spam it has no meaning lol

[Cookie Monster]

oh....no i was just asking what was with the bleh