Speedy's Adventures I'll give it a shot
#22
Posted 08 October 2004 - 12:13 PM
OK you guys are a in
Chapter 3: Hotel or Motel?
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We started running to Dusty's Place it seem so far all for what? Nothing. When we made it his house was on fire burning like a rapid horse. "So....where we go now?" I asked "I don't feel like living in a firey pit.........yet." he didn't laugh. "Hotel or Motel?" Dusty asked "I say Hotel" "I think Motel" I said. "Hotel" ChaosBolt said
"See Hotel is good" Dusty Bragged. "Let's go then" Dusty said " Come on!" "Hey ChaosBolt wanna come?" I asked "K than let's go!" ChaosBolt said. We made our way to a hotel "$1,000 dollars a week!!!!!" I screamed "I'm sorry sir but you have to pay if you want a room" The hotel person said "I told you guys Motel it is pretty much free" I said "I have No Comment" ChaosBolt said withn out an expressioin "Uh Same here" Dusty chimed in. "Motel I can get you guys there if you want?" some one said "Who are you?" I asked "Bullet" Bullet said "Lets just go to the Motel" ChaosBolt said "Nah I say we go back to my place" I said "then what was the fricken ponit of coming here?!?!?!!?" Dusty yelled. "For you to DIE" a voice yelled. Just then a laser beam come out of the Motel and shot Dusty in the heart I'll never forgot his last words "Thats bull sh...." he almost finshed it. We run to my house but we shouldn't have. Big Fricken Lazer "DAMN!!!!" I yelled "Yo man your house it dead" CB said "Hello...bad Time?" said some one "what cokkie monster?" I said grinding my teeth
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Chapter 4: Dude We Are Dead...
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lik
Chapter 3: Hotel or Motel?
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We started running to Dusty's Place it seem so far all for what? Nothing. When we made it his house was on fire burning like a rapid horse. "So....where we go now?" I asked "I don't feel like living in a firey pit.........yet." he didn't laugh. "Hotel or Motel?" Dusty asked "I say Hotel" "I think Motel" I said. "Hotel" ChaosBolt said
"See Hotel is good" Dusty Bragged. "Let's go then" Dusty said " Come on!" "Hey ChaosBolt wanna come?" I asked "K than let's go!" ChaosBolt said. We made our way to a hotel "$1,000 dollars a week!!!!!" I screamed "I'm sorry sir but you have to pay if you want a room" The hotel person said "I told you guys Motel it is pretty much free" I said "I have No Comment" ChaosBolt said withn out an expressioin "Uh Same here" Dusty chimed in. "Motel I can get you guys there if you want?" some one said "Who are you?" I asked "Bullet" Bullet said "Lets just go to the Motel" ChaosBolt said "Nah I say we go back to my place" I said "then what was the fricken ponit of coming here?!?!?!!?" Dusty yelled. "For you to DIE" a voice yelled. Just then a laser beam come out of the Motel and shot Dusty in the heart I'll never forgot his last words "Thats bull sh...." he almost finshed it. We run to my house but we shouldn't have. Big Fricken Lazer "DAMN!!!!" I yelled "Yo man your house it dead" CB said "Hello...bad Time?" said some one "what cokkie monster?" I said grinding my teeth
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Chapter 4: Dude We Are Dead...
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lik
This post has been edited by Tara: 15 October 2004 - 10:09 PM
#26
Posted 10 October 2004 - 02:11 PM
I need to write more to it I'm doing this for School in writing so why not make it fun
#27
Posted 12 October 2004 - 11:12 PM
is it to late to say you can add spark in if you want because you know you want spark in
#30
Posted 16 October 2004 - 02:58 PM
lol, yah Jack use popar English
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