[dorkiness]

Beginnings- part 1: 3 years ago

characters:

Minuku- 13
Mamoru- 14
Jijitsu-13
Yusadi-12


Minuku sat on a sandy beach towel with Mamoru. She quietly sat watching Yusadi and Jijitsu play in that water. Mamoru quietly gazed at minuku. He put his arm around her and said 'Why the serous look?'

Minuku looked at Mamoru. 'Yusadi has been acting wierd lately. Have you noticed?'
'Weird?' Mamoru asked ' I haven't noticed at all! Why?'
'She acting so... grown up!'
'So? Isn't that good?' Mamoru was comfused.
'She's trying to do more than she can. She's trying to be a cook, maid, crime fighter, AND a normal teenager. Do you think last week* has something to do with it?'

Just then Yusadi ran up to them, with Jijitsu right behind her. 'Hey guys! What's cooking?' Yusadi said 'Speaking of cooking... what should I make for dinner?' Minuku rolled her eyes.

'Did you just roll your eyes at me Minuku?' Yusadi asked with an iritated pitch.
'Ya, so? Yusadi you're being so weird lately!' Minuku yelled back.
'Minuku, you're the one who's being wierd, not me!'
'And how am I being weird? You're trying to be so mature!'
'SO WHAT! I'm not always gonna be little Yusadi, your little friend who you have to protect!'
'It's cauase of last week, isn't it?' Minuku asked quietly.
'don't EVER bring that up!' she said, angerly pushing Minuku and knocking her to the ground.

Jijitsu had gasped. It wasn't like Yusadi to resort to voilence. Minuku was stunned. She quietly got up. She stood infront of Yusadi and Looked at her. 'I won't hurt you beacause you are my friend.' She said, and turned around and left. Yusadi was shaking.

'What have I done?' She asked herself. 'Why?'


*to be revealed

This post has been edited by dorkiness: 27 September 2004 - 12:56 AM

[Cookie Monster]

woah, nice

[dorkiness]

thank you. This part is shorter. After this is they 3rd installment of part 1.. and they we start part 2!



part 1: 3 years ago.. continued.

characters:

minuku: 13
mamoru: 14
omishi: 14
yusadi: 12


Mamoru walked up the stairs to Minuku's dorm. It was in the left wing of the dojo, and all the female members of Fiore Dojo slept there. Guys were only allowed in until lights out, which was at nine o'clock. It was already seven thirty. Mamoru knocked on the dorm door.

'Hello?' Said a young squirlle.
'Hey Omishi, can I come in?' Mamoru kindly asked.
'Yes. Minuku is in her room.' Omishi pointed down the hall. 'She will only let me or you in, and i'll leave you alone so you and her can have some privacy. She is really upsey about today with Yusadi.. Luckly they don't share rooms!
'Ya, that wouldn't be good.' Mamoru began to walk to Minuku's room. He knocked on her door.
'Who is it?' Minuku asked.
'It's Mamoru.'

they door opened and MAmoru stepped in. He quietly sat down and point to the seat next to him. He motioned her to sit ther. She came and sat down.

'Explain.' He said to her, giving her a harsh stare. 'What happened last week?'

'Okay... I'll tell you.' Minuku moaned. 'But if I cry.. don't blame me.'

[Cookie Monster]

Nice punctuation, dorkiness!