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Posted 26 May 2011 - 12:18 PM

Sonic and The Dark Rings
[left]BASED ON CHAKRAX's Sonic Nazo Unleashed


Made by Me Sonicagm
(Not Really True Just Something I Thought up)


INTRODUCING A NEW FAN CHARACTER : SONICAGM (Me) =)

Really long Introduction

One Day Sonic was Just Running around as usual then a flash of light appeared in front of
him and because he was running so fast he was not able to stop quick enough and entered
the light. there he saw the 7 chaos emeralds and they seem to be summoning a portal like circle
then the emeralds joined together and formed a circle and he saw what was to happen soon.

After he saw everything that will happened sonic started hearing a voice saying "Sonic you
must stop Dr. Eggman from obtaining the Dark Rings. He plans to revive an enemy you fought
before that you could not stop without....." and sonic asked "without what?" and the
mysterious voice said "shadic" sonic gasped and thought hard who was that person and
remembered the name "Nazo" he remembered everything he has done destroyed his town , almost
killed tails , knuckles and shadow and more.

After Sonic was told what to do he left the mysterious light but before he left he was advised
that "after collecting each one of the dark rings contact me through the emeralds" and so he was
off to another adventure.......


"The Call for Help" Chapter 1 of 5

He first went to tails his best buddy and told him everything that happened and also tails had
a new invention to help them along the way he called it the "Sky Shoes" he said that when you
use this you'll be able to run through air , sonic was amazed and tried it. after a few minutes
he was happy to have it and took off for their next location. while they were on the way to angel
island tails told sonic that "the Sky Shoes drains your rings every second when you use it so dont
use it to much okay" and sonic answered back "okay".

Once they arrived at angel island knuckles was in trouble he was fighting a robot which appeared to
be Dr. Eggman as soon as Eggman noticed sonic and tails he pushed knuckles to the side , grabbed the
master emerald and took off. they helped knuckles patch up and told him everything and so after he
healed up they left.

"Mystic Island" Chapter 2 of 5

Sonic had all the help he needed and headed to the first of the 3 locations. The first location was
a island called "Mystic Island" as they look around they got separated in the thick fog. Tails was
panicking scared that something might happen so tails brought out his "ghost detector" and it was
going wild as if a storm arrived but because of the loud "beeping" of his detector sonic was able to
find tails but knuckles is still lost in the thick fog.

As sonic and tails went on they found one of the dark rings and the closer they got the more the emeralds
reacted. When they were about to grab the dark ring someone was shouted and it was knuckles. Knuckles had
these dark aura around him looked like he's being controlled by the dark ring and a quick second knuckles
threw a punch at sonic but sonic was able to dodge it sonic kicked him and tails grabbed the dark ring and
kept it in a special case that would stop it from unleashing its power. As soon as tails placed the ring
inside knuckles returned to normal and thats when they found out what it can do when they're separated.
The fog was slowly drifting away and when the fog was gone they left to go to the next location.

"Negative Emerald" Chapter 3 of 5

(Shortest Chapter)

As they were on the way to their next location the emeralds opened another portal in front of them and so
they entered the mysterious voice warned them that Dr. Eggman has two of the dark rings so
don't let him get the others. as they were about to leave a dark laser hit the light and corrupted one of
the chaos emeralds and they were pushed out of the light. luckily they were able to keep the plane steady
but he only had 6 emeralds and they saw the missing one heading toward Dr. Eggman's hideout and so they followed
the dark emerald.

"Dark Rebirth" Chapter 4 of 5

As they arrived they found a mysterious hedgehog fighting Dr. Eggman who seems to have the same powers as silver
they went there to help him and defeated Dr. Eggman. The mysterious hedgehog said his name was "Alfonso" but his
name was undercover and he was called sonicagm instead he told them his real name because he trusts sonic and his
friends but Dr. Eggman was just faking and hit tails which caused the drop the the case and the last dark ring was
taken by Dr. Eggman and formed all 3 dark rings and the dark hedgehog was formed , Nazo was born again to cause
destruction.

The First thing he did was take the chaos emeralds and struck a beam of dark energy on to sonicagm his was knocked
out sonic was mad and tried to land a hit into nazo but being to powerful i had no effect as he took down all that was
left then sonicagm kicked sonic out of the way his eyes changed color and had no expression looking like a zombie as
nazo said destroy him he followed and sonic found out he was being controlled he was punched, kicked and taken down
as he transforms into his dark form and take them both on and the final battle begun.

"The Final Battle" Chapter 5 of 5

Sonic transforms into his dark form and tries to take down sonicagm but he was too powerful he only managed knock him
out and go after nazo using the emeralds nazo pushes sonic down reverting him back into his normal self but nazo sucked the negative energy of the emeralds and threw them away sonic got them back using his sky shoes luckily there was still some energy left which allowed him to transform into semi super sonic but it was not enough to stop him

sonicagm opened his eyes seeing nazo and sonic fighting to death with his anger he releases his ultimate power similar to shadow's and silver's. he held nazo and he could not move sonic was continually punching and kicking
then a bright red light crashed on to nazo who appeared to be shadow.

shadow used his own power and helped sonic fight him but sonicagm pushed them out of the way and grabbed nazo and took him into space. a few hours later 2 dark rings and 1 ring of light fell out of the sky but sonic kept them safe
by leaving it near the master emerald. the master emerald shined and took those 3 rings into the emeralds and so the story ends.....

"Sonicagm's Story" Special Chapter

Before all this happened sonicagm's life was not easy as it looked. before sonic even knew about the rings sonicagm was at work. Like silver sonicagm
was from the future and he was trying to find a way to go into the past and stop nazo. In the future nazo was already defeated but the world was destroyed already sonic and his friends frozen in stone everybody else was dead it was not easy until he found a way to the master emerald.

He asked the emerald to grant him the power to go back in the past to stop nazo from destroying the world. Then the 7 chaos emeralds and the master emerald glowed and shinned upon him and granted his power but before he left he saw a figure of a cat. But soon enough silver found him and saw the figure and shouted "BLAZE!! IS THAT YOU" when he got any closer the figure faded away then a bright light brought back a cat named "Blaze the Cat".
and so he was off to the past to stop nazo.

But when he arrived in the pas it was too late nazo was reborn by Dr. Eggman and nazo escaped sonicagm followed nazo to the master emerald shrine while silver and blaze was with sonic and his friends. When he arrived nazo was was holding out the emeralds and powering up something so he fought back but it was to late it was fully powered and blasted him with the emeralds. sonicagm woke up and saw sonic and nazo fighting but sonicagm's eyes were blurring out and lost control of himself and attack sonic and his friends. But knocking out all of sonic friends angered sonic and transformed into DARK SUPER SONIC and knocked out sonicagm. When sonicagm woke up he saw sonic and nazo fighting to death then when he was trying to help a red flash appeared out of nowhere it was shadow the hedgehog.

But sonicagm pushed them out of the way and grabbed nazo and went into space. In space is where they fought to death until nazo's power ran out and went inside the emeralds so sonicagm used the power to put him back into the rings along with him . a few hours later sonic found 3 rings 2 dark ones and 1 ring of light he kept it safe by leaving it to the master emerald and so the story ends.....




IF YOU DONT UNDERSTAND SOME PARTS PLEASE WAIT FOR THE COMIC VERSION IM GOING TO MAKE

This post has been edited by sonicagm: 25 June 2011 - 04:26 AM

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Posted 26 May 2011 - 06:57 PM

Is this a poem? If not, don't center the entire thing. Also, please look at where you're using capital letters.

Unless this was all for some artistic reason, which I can't really see being the case.
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Posted 26 May 2011 - 07:20 PM

This also doesn't belong in Open Discussion.
R.I.P. Reu...

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Posted 26 May 2011 - 09:36 PM

First off, it's short and the grammar is sub-par, to say the least. I'm also getting a serious "Aaaaannnndddd-theeeeeeen" vibe throughout the entire thing, you need to work on structure and pacing.
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Posted 27 May 2011 - 12:54 AM

View PostGold_TSG, on 26 May 2011 - 03:20 PM, said:

This also doesn't belong in Open Discussion.

*Facepalm*

Thanks Gold. Moving it.
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Posted 27 May 2011 - 10:10 AM

View PostGold_TSG, on 27 May 2011 - 03:20 AM, said:

This also doesn't belong in Open Discussion.

sorry im new here not really sure where to put it :D
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Posted 27 May 2011 - 10:11 AM

View PostEnraged Psychopath, on 27 May 2011 - 05:36 AM, said:

First off, it's short and the grammar is sub-par, to say the least. I'm also getting a serious "Aaaaannnndddd-theeeeeeen" vibe throughout the entire thing, you need to work on structure and pacing.

um..... sure :huh:
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Posted 27 May 2011 - 10:12 AM

View PostKvitne, on 27 May 2011 - 02:57 AM, said:

Is this a poem? If not, don't center the entire thing. Also, please look at where you're using capital letters.

Unless this was all for some artistic reason, which I can't really see being the case.

ok i'll fix it when i continue
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Posted 27 May 2011 - 10:49 PM

One other thing, try to put your replies in one post instead of posting three separate times. You can use the Multiquote button instead of the reply button to select multiple posts to reply to.

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Posted 28 May 2011 - 07:05 AM

View PostKvitne, on 28 May 2011 - 06:49 AM, said:

One other thing, try to put your replies in one post instead of posting three separate times. You can use the Multiquote button instead of the reply button to select multiple posts to reply to.

Thanks!

how im not really sure, im new to the world of "Forums"
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Posted 28 May 2011 - 04:08 PM

Click the Attached File  Screen shot 2011-05-28 at 12.03.28 PM.png (7.61K)
Number of downloads: 0 button on each post you want to respond to, then click the Attached File  Screen shot 2011-05-28 at 12.04.48 PM.png (7.94K)
Number of downloads: 0 button at the bottom of the page. They'll show up when you're composing your new post.
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Posted 28 May 2011 - 04:30 PM

View PostKvitne, on 29 May 2011 - 12:08 AM, said:

Click the Attachment Screen shot 2011-05-28 at 12.03.28 PM.png button on each post you want to respond to, then click the Attachment Screen shot 2011-05-28 at 12.04.48 PM.png button at the bottom of the page. They'll show up when you're composing your new post.

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