[sonicx666666]

Here is issue 1:

[Scourge]

Just some slight criticism:

1. A Sonic recolor, horribly fucking boring and cliche. No introduction, so thats like assuming we all know who it is.

2. It was 4 panels long, and absolutely nothing happened but watching aforementioned Sonic recolor napping.

3. The sprites are two different styles, yet Advance and Genesis style sprites exist for both Tails and Sonic.

4. The speech bubbles are ugly and way too big for the tiny amount of text you placed in them, which wasn't necessary anyways because nothing was said in 3 of the 4 panels.

5. I cant even tell what the hell is going on in the 4^th panel, if the Sonic recolor pulls a knife or what, but it could use some visual improvement or at least an explanation.

Take from it what you may.

[sonicx666666]

1.The recolors name is Ashton.

2.This was my first page of a comic I ever did. So of course it would be small

3.They were different styles because the genesis tails had the perfect looks on his face. And I had already made Ashton as a advance sprite before this and AI didn't want to redo him as a genesis.

4.Those speech bubbles were the best ones I could find and I couldn't resize them.

5.Ashton could hear tails behind him and pulled a weird looking light saber out of nowhere.

[Gold_TSG]

sonicx666666, on 23 May 2011 - 07:38 AM, said:

1.The recolors name is Ashton.

2.This was my first page of a comic I ever did. So of course it would be small

3.They were different styles because the genesis tails had the perfect looks on his face. And I had already made Ashton as a advance sprite before this and AI didn't want to redo him as a genesis.

4.Those speech bubbles were the best ones I could find and I couldn't resize them.

5.Ashton could hear tails behind him and pulled a weird looking light saber out of nowhere.

1. That is not how you introduce a character, and it is even worse when it's a terrible recolor. No one will ever give a shit about recolors because they are all the same: Sonic as a different color.

2. My first comic page was the standard 8 panels long, and didn't consist of absolutely nothing going on. This "comic" is boring, leads to nowhere and has no insight at all as to who anyone is. The only character anyone would recognize is Tails. No one should have to ask who anyone else is.

3. That is not an excuse to be lazy. Either edit an advance Tails to have the same look, find someone who can, or redo your yellow Sonic. Laziness =/= entertainment if you're looking for anyone to take this nonsense seriously.

4. You're well on your way to a bad "comic" if you **FOUND** those speech bubbles. If you can't even make your own, then this comic failed before it started.

5. You left no indication as to how he heard him, which is not good writing skill, which is required to make a comic work. And again, people should not have to ask questions about what's going on. And really, light sabers? Is this really the best you could do? Is this recolor gonna have godly powers that will make him the center spotlight too? Is he gonna beat up Knuckles, out-chaos Shadow and out-speed Sonic?

If you cannot follow simple criticism from others, who initially don't want you to continue as a failed comic maker, then you might as well give up now, cause fighting everyone who doesn't like/agree with what you're doing will make you look like a fool and show everyone that you want to remain terrible, which ultimately leads to no one wanting to read it.

FFFFFUCK!!!!

This post has been edited by Gold_TSG: 23 May 2011 - 08:22 PM

[sonicx666666]

Your reply just made me even more depressed then i already am and didn't even think that was possible.

[Gold_TSG]

All I'm doing is trying to enlighten you as to how this stuff works before you set yourself up as a troll target. People don't take well to what you posted, and the content within it, and would most likely say far worse things than either Scourge or myself have said. We are simply trying to help you understand what is and isn't the proper way to go about this. I had to deal with the same (and worse) criticism when I first started out, but I got better because I listened. That's all you need to do.

[Scourge]

sonicx666666, on 23 May 2011 - 06:36 AM, said:

Your reply just made me even more depressed then i already am and didn't even think that was possible.

Bah, we're asses, dont let it all get ya down. I just hate the Sonic recolor bullshit with a burning passion. Gold hates it even more because he's gotten into raging arguments with a pair of morons on here whose characters were terrible recolors and edits of Sonic. Its just boring, its fucking uncreative and cliche. One of them left in buttsore fury because other people on this board, of all levels of reputation even, despised his behavior. There is nothing interesting or creative about a Sonic character that is fucking Sonic with lighter blue fur, with ice powers.

Dont let criticism depress you, or deter you from pursuing your own creations. Listen to it, and let it empower you to become a better writer, or artist. Letting it get you down and giving up is proving the cynics of the world right.

[sonicx666666]

[Gold_TSG]

You'd get a whole lot farther by being original and creative. That's all we're really trying to say.