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She's Mine (Blood on the Dance Floor) She has something Sonic wants. He calls her "killer".

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Posted 02 October 2010 - 04:10 PM

Short Story: She's Mine.




Sonic: 22
Amy: 19
Suzy: 21








Prolouge before story. Suzy: 9



"Mommy, I'm scared," Little Suzy replied to her dead mother on the bed. The guy that murdered her cackled sinisterly. He then picked her up and tore off her clothes...







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" So, where are you going now, Sonic?" Knuckles asked his friend. Sonic was dressed in a trench coat for some odd reason.

" Out with a friend, why should you know?" came the reply.

"Just wondering. Is it the same friend you've been going out with for the past 3 months?" Knuckles asked.

"Yep, see you," Sonic replied and went out the door...
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The slut waited in some dark alley for a certain blue hedgehog. All the while, hearing the screams of the child within her that didn't agree with her lifestyle.

" Yeah, you got raped as a kid, that was wrong, yet, what you're doing right now is wrong, too," the child said.

" Shut up! I'm my own woman, do not try to control me!" she replied. Just then, a blue blur went past her. It was Sonic.

" Hey, you ready?" asked Sonic.

" Sure am, let's go!" she replied. They went into an abandoned bar with a dance floor the color of blood. They both began to dirty dance...
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The next moring, Sonic woke up with a smile on his face. He got up and got some breakfast. Then, he heard Amy's voice, "Sonic, I know where you were last night."

Sonic got real angry and said, " God! You can't stay out of anyone's lives, can you?"

" Sonic, that girl is a slut and a murderer! She tried to stab you in the back, litteraly!" she replied.

" SHE DID NOTHING!" Sonic said and stormed out the door. Amy knew exactly where he was going, the slut will be suprised to see an early call...
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Suzy looked over too see Sonic stand over her... she was ready, and she gave herself to him all that day, yet at night, she grabbed her knife and tried to kill Sonic.

" SUZY!" a male voice that did not belong to Sonic called out to her, " Suzy, you slut! Do you know what you're doing? You're acting like the man that stole your virginity!"

Suzy looked at Sonic and then at the man. He was garbed in black and white. His face covered by cloth. She then began to break down and cry. She now relised what she was doing.

" Sonic... I'm sorry... for everything," she said. Then, she pulled her knife to her chest and stabbed herself. Then, she dropped to the floor, dead...


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Little Suzy, I'm sorry...
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Posted 02 October 2010 - 05:11 PM

Uh..What? I couldn't even read the first sentence.
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