[Smooth Criminal]

Well,first I would like to say that I'm new here and that I love Fan Fiction. And that the first chapter will be a bit short... but, don't worry it'll get better.


Prolouge: Micheal goes to station square.





" Wow, this place is big," Said the Limozene driver, " how will we ever get to that Auditorium?" Micheal looked at the sites and looked back at the map.

" It doesn't say anything on the map, Maybe we should ask for directions?" Micheal suggested.

Then the driver replied, " Fine, how about we try this house?" He motioned to the house that the driver just pulled into. The house looked neat. The door had stained glass and a Bronze door knocker.

" Alright, Thanks Bill," Micheal bid thanks to Bill and walked up to the house. Inside a pink hedgehog was surprised to hear a soft knock at the door. She got up to the door and answerd it. Micheal looked at her in surprise, who wouldn't? It was a pink hedgehog on legs.

" Micheal!? Hello come on in, what is it that you need?" said the Pink hedgehog.

" Well,um, I kind of need directions to the auditorium," Micheal replied.

" It's just by the corner of Hollie Street It's a blue building, you can't miss it."

" Thank you, by the way what is your name?"

" Mine! Mine's Amy, Amy Rose."

" Well, thank you Miss Rose," Micheal said as he walked out the door. Amy turned around and laughed. Just then Tails came out of the kitchen and asked,

" Who was that?"

" You won't believe it, But it was Micheal Jackson!" Amy replied.

" Wow,what a coincidence! And his concert is tonight, too," said the smart litte Fox.

Amy nodded in belief that she might meet up with him again...

This post has been edited by Smooth Criminal: 02 October 2010 - 03:00 PM

[Smooth Criminal]

Chapter 1: If Chao's Hadn't any Wings...



Sonic, Amy, Knuckles, Tails, and Cream (her two Chao's following her) sat in the first row of the auditorium. The auditorium was huge with stainless steel walls that no one would hope to climb. The seats were red with blue striping on them. The auditorium had 2 levels so you could tell it would get packed. Sonic looked nervous because he was sitting by Amy, who insisted on holding Sonic's hand the whole concert, which he, of course, said no.

A few hours later everyone was there people started to chat and fool the security guards with fake tickets. Finally the concert began with Michael dancing to 'Jam' which caused everybody to shout and scream 'Micheal, Micheal!'

2 hours later:


" That was a good concert wasn't it, Cheese and Chocola?" Cream asked her two friends as they walked back to the car, only to hear no answer, " Cheese? Chocola?" She turned around to find everyone, including the rest of the audience, were missing. " Where is everyone?" Now Cream was starting to get worried. Then she heard a familliar sinister voice,

" Ho Ho Ho! You fell for my trap didn't you, pest!" Said the voice.

" D-Dr. Eggman!" Cream said surprised. Just over the corner, Micheal walked over and saw Cream being attacked by Eggman.

" Hey! You leave her alone!" Micheal jumped over and punched Eggman in the face. After he took care of him he looked at the rabbit and asked, "Are you okay?" Cream nodded. " Hey, are you lost? Where is your mother's car?"

" I don't know, my friends left me," Cream answered.

" Well, here, I'll go with you until you find it, okay?" Micheal suggested.

" Please," came back the reply.

Little did those two know,no one would be there to help. Where were they taken? All will be reveiled in the next chapter.

This post has been edited by Smooth Criminal: 02 October 2010 - 02:59 PM

[SonicFang]

That chapter is a great addition to your story. There is one grammatical error in there. Freinds should be friends. Anyway, I like this story and how you put some suspision in it.

This post has been edited by SonicFang: 07 August 2010 - 05:17 PM

[Smooth Criminal]

Thanks for the tip. I will post another one when ever I get ideas.

[SonicFang]

Your welcome. By the way, if you ever need a booster idea, I can sure provide you with one, I always have an idea I might not need...

[Smooth Criminal]

Chapter 2: Hellish Fire.





The sky turned blood red as the sun died and the moon resumed its life. Cream and Michael were heading towards the employee/entertainer parking lot. Cream was so deep in thought about where her friends went that she wasn't paying atention and bumped into the limozene.

" You okay?" Michael asked her. Cream just nodded her head. Michael knew what she was thinking about. "So, who was that person who was trying to hurt you?" Michael asked.

" He's Dr. Ivo Robotnick. Yet everyone calls him 'Eggman' because of his egg-shaped body," Cream replied.

" Why does he do what he does, though?" Michael asked.

" He wants to take over the world..." Cream replied.


Just then, the auditorium crumbled and left a pool of lava in place of where it used to be.

" What the..."

This post has been edited by Smooth Criminal: 02 October 2010 - 04:16 PM

[Scourge]

HAAHAAHAAHAAHAAHAAHAAHAAHAAHAA!!! Its true, a Sonic/Jackson cross over! And I told Gold he was full of shit...

Michael Jackson is dead, as I hope this piece of garbage is soon.

@sonicfang:

"That chapter is a great addition to your story. There is one grammatical error in there. Freinds should be friends. Anyway, I like this story and how you put some suspision in it."

Empty flattery is like raking the guy's leaves with a spoon, you're not helping him at all. Also, when you're going to correct SOMEONE ELSE'S spelling, do a better job of spelling yourself.

[Gold_TSG]

Couldn't have said it better myself. Kudos, sir.

[NiGHTS Noob]

Holy Fucking Shit! It's Scourge!

Scourge, how ya been buddy?

[Gold_TSG]

NiGHTS Noob, on 19 October 2010 - 03:21 PM, said:

Holy Fucking Shit! It's Scourge!

Scourge, how ya been buddy?

He's been on MSN with me all this time. If either of us had you on there, you could have joined the parties.

[Scourge]

NiGHTS Noob, on 19 October 2010 - 10:21 AM, said:

Holy Fucking Shit! It's Scourge!

Scourge, how ya been buddy?

Fuckin great man, nothin like workin 50 hour weeks, drinkin straight bourbon, and burnin the cock at both ends.

Gold told me there was some disturbing shit goin down 'round here and I must say, he was right. Im gone for just a few months of scandalous debauchery, and the place gets invaded by a bunch of ignor'nt fanbitches! Im disappointed in you Noob... veeeery disappointed...

[NiGHTS Noob]

What'd I do? I've been to busy at the AFTER parties to give two shits about some dumbass twelve year old bitches.

[???????]

I didn't miss you anyway, Scourge!

[Kvitne]

YOU'VE BEEN HIT BY
YOU'VE BEEN STRUCK BY
A SMOOTH SCOURGE.

[Scourge]

NiGHTS Noob, on 19 October 2010 - 07:32 PM, said:

What'd I do? I've been to busy at the AFTER parties to give two shits about some dumbass twelve year old bitches.

SO YOU FORSOOK YOUR SOL BRETHREN?! Just fuckin with ya dude, glad to see ya again. XD

@Marx: Add me on MSN bitch! Im on there a helluva lot more than this craphole!

@Kvitne:  michael-jackson.gif (14.8K)
Number of downloads: 1 AAOWW!

Also, good to see you again too.

[SonicFang]

Scourge, on 19 October 2010 - 02:37 PM, said:

@sonicfang:

"That chapter is a great addition to your story. There is one grammatical error in there. Freinds should be friends. Anyway, I like this story and how you put some suspision in it."

Empty flattery is like raking the guy's leaves with a spoon, you're not helping him at all. Also, when you're going to correct SOMEONE ELSE'S spelling, do a better job of spelling yourself.

I have some words for you! I just logged on to see this piece of ***T! It was one word, come on! And by the way, I actually do like this story, and it was my personal opinion! You didn't need to add the last part of your little... speech?

I don't want to say, nor do you want to hear, what I think about your attitude!

[Scourge]

SonicFang, on 22 December 2010 - 05:45 PM, said:

I have some words for you! I just logged on to see this piece of ***T! It was one word, come on! And by the way, I actually do like this story, and it was my personal opinion! You didn't need to add the last part of your little... speech?

I don't want to say, nor do you want to hear, what I think about your attitude!

He mixed Michael Jackson with Sonic the Hedgehog... there is nothing that can be typed nor spoken to encompass how fucking WRONG that is. Take a good look around, because if you truly liked this horse shit, you are completely alone. You are the only one with positive comments about this story, whats that tell ya?

Yeah sure, you are entitled to your opinion, I'll concede that. I mean... so what if you have no taste, no common sense, and no grammar skills beyond elementary school? Thats just the way you were accidently made!

Oh, and its spelled SHIT, not ***T. No kittens will be struck down by God if you swear. You have the freedom of speech, which includes saying "ugly words." If you don't like something somebody says, step up bitch! If I was worried about MY feelings being hurt, I wouldn't have connect to THE INTERNET this morning.



Oh, and ill just leave this here... Don't forget to feed it!

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Number of downloads: 0

[Gold_TSG]

Spoken like a real man.

[Tragedy]

NiGHTS Noob, on 19 October 2010 - 04:21 PM, said:

Holy Fucking Shit! It's Scourge!

Scourge, how ya been buddy?

Oh but If I say I'm back, no one cares. That is so ASS.

[SonicFang]

EDIT: You know what, forget this! There's no point trying to argue with you Scourge. It seems you just have too many people who like you...

This post has been edited by SonicFang: 28 December 2010 - 05:10 PM