[Enraged Psychopath]

-- Prologue --

Dust trailed lazily through the air as a blue sphere rose from the ground, and hurtled fowards at breakneck speed. Upon contact with the Synthetic, the blur bounced away from its target as it broke down, scattering shards of sheening metal across the battlegrounds and severed cables spewing electricity which jolted viciously, illuminating the darkness. Valiant G.U.N warriors bolted over the knoll, and dissapeared into a red haze of corpses. Gunfire echoed across the field, followed by screams of incomprehensible agony and frenzied whirring. The Hedgehog recovered, taking in all the carnage at once.

This isn't going well..

This post has been edited by Enraged Psychopath: 17 May 2010 - 09:00 PM

[Enraged Psychopath]

-- Act 1 --
Rise of Machines

The Machines continued to march, unstoppable like some massive tidal wave, destroying everything in sight and carrying death along with it. The valiant efforts of G.U.N were as nothing in the fact of such an adversary. Upturned cars littered the streets. Buildings shattered, scattering fine debris all over the streets as great columns of flame billowed greasy black smoke into the atmosphere, mindlessely consuming all. Humanity retreated behind what small remnants of cover from the ensuing Iron Storm they could. They returned fire, traces of small rounds lighting up the abyss like fireflies. A small aircraft appeared in the distance, emerging frm the gloom glowing an accute saffron. Two compartments opened up, spewing strange boxes. The plane carpet bombed these objects upon the Synthetics.

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I'll finish up later.
Feedback?

This post has been edited by Enraged Psychopath: 18 May 2010 - 04:34 PM

[SonicFang]

Great Story! I think that this story will be a great one. Anyway, I like this story because it is very descriptive! Just a tip though, maybe you could put some longer chapters in it?