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-Wind of Hope-
-1- Racing the Wind
The dark hall had not been disturbed for decades, it seemed. Dust rose in a low cloud as the doors were pushed back and a large machine clunked heavily into the room. It reached the base of a tall set of stairs, and the machine’s lid popped open and a round man with a wide mustache climbed out, wearing an archaeologist’s helmet and laughing to himself.
“Ha! When the legend warned about the many traps and dangers guarding the shrine, I expected more of a challenge! Now, the fabled treasure is mine! Pandora’s Box!” He climbed the stairs and approached a wide stone ledge. As he came closer, two braziers leapt to life with white flame, illuminating a large carving that filled the back wall. It looked like a woman wrapped round with floating ribbons and stars, all carved from the rock. At her feet, on the stone ledge, a round crystal sigil was carved into the stone, decorated with faded images of wings and stars. Doctor Robotnik tapped lightly at the sigil, then began rotating a few of the carvings, until the stone ledge opened up to reveal a broad box of opaque crystal, the circular sigil being part of its lid. Small sparks and pulses of light moved just under the surface of the carvings, tracing their images. Whatever the item was, it seemed to still be active. “Let’s see, how does it open?”
He twisted at a few more carvings, and as he worked, smaller flames of different colors began to flicker into life around the statue on the rear wall, until the shrine was wreathed in a rainbow halo of light. The seventh flame, golden colored, appeared above the statue’s head, and the box shuddered and the lid clicked upward. Robotnik took a step back as the lid slid aside.
A sudden surge of wind filled the room, sweeping outward and causing all of the flames to gutter out. It passed almost immediately, leaving the braziers hissing and dark, as Robotnik jumped forward to look inside. “What? Empty?! But, I don’t understand, I was sure I read the inscriptions correctly! There has to be something here, there has to be! Wait… is this?…” Though empty, the box itself still flickered with some sort of internal light. Robotnik’s comically villainous laugh echoed in the stone rooms.
Outside the shrine, the wind howled out from the dark halls and archways, over the moonlit tiles and fallen pillars. As it fled further away, the sound of swift footsteps began to accompany it, and the outline of a person formed within it, and after a moment, still running, opened a pair of wide eyes.
-
Out on the emerald plain the next afternoon, Sonic was laying on a hilltop napping, while Tails was making repairs to the Tornado. It was badly dented near the front, where they had made a rough landing earlier in the day. From here they could look out over the long grasses bending in the wind, the darker green smear of a distant forest, and a long range of mountains just visible beyond that. Tails stood up and rubbed his brow with his wrist. “I guess finding an alternative way to power the Tornado until we get another chaos emerald is going to take a bit more work, but at least this’ll get us home. …Sonic?”
“Don’t sweat it, no one is better at getting machines to work than you. I’ll just stay out of your way. And I’ll find you another emerald, I owe you one.”
“It’s alright. You needed them all to go super, or we wouldn’t have gotten out of the dead zone at all!” Tails stood back and stretched, turning to look out over the green plains. He froze as something seemed to catch his attention. “Look at that!” and Tails pointed far out. “What is that? Could something have followed us out of the dead zone?”
Sonic stood and walked to the edge of the hilltop, shielding his eyes from the sun with his hand, trying to see. There was a sky-blue streak moving across the edge of the forest nearest to them, and birds were scattering up into the air as if they‘d been startled. “It doesn’t move like a bot. Hey, I’ll go check it out,” and Sonic dashed off.
He was through the grass and among the trees, till he drew close enough to match speed a little ways behind a figure darting through the woods.
“Wake up, birdies! Into the air!” she laughed. She had sky blue skin and broad talons for feet, and even paler blue feathers pressed close together across her hips and in a wide diamond shape on her chest, the same color as her short-cropped hair. Two long spikes rose up from the back of her shoulder blades, and she had a tail of three long feathers that bobbed behind her as she ran. She also had a small white horn like a crescent moon rising from her forehead. She continued to laugh as she jumped between trees, striking the trunks so hard that all the branches above shook and sent more birds twittering into the air in agitation. She moved fast, but after hitting several trees in a bounce like this, she sped up and left the forest behind.
Sonic smiled to himself, picking up his own speed to catch up. “Hey!” he said after coming abreast of her, “What kind of a wake up call is that to give someone?”
“This day is too perfect for anyone to stay still!” she crowed.
“I agree!”
Her eyes flashed as they matched speed in the long grass for awhile. “Of course, you might as well be standing still, if I bothered to make a real run.”
“That sounds like a challenge! Think you can keep up?”
“I’m in such a good mood right now, I’ll even give you a head start, if you want it!”
“You don’t know who you’re up against!”
And at the same moment, they both pressed forward in a new rush of speed.
From the hilltop, Tails could follow their race by watching the wave of dust rising in their wake. “I can’t believe how fast that person is! Keeping up with Sonic!” But it wasn’t long before they left his view.
Sonic and the feathered girl crossed over the rolling plains, parallel to the mountains. Sonic was impressed, but feeling a little mischievous himself by now, clipped a few meters ahead so that she could see him running backwards with his arms stretched casually behind his head. She looked surprised, and then he put a hand in front of his face to cover a yawn. But when he put the hand down, she wasn’t there behind him anymore. “Huh?” and he looked to his side. There she was, running backwards with her arms behind her head, too.
“Looks like you need to be put in your place,” she said.
He lowered his head and smiled. “This is serious,” he said.
And they began their run in earnest. They dashed over the plains, and when they ran out of grassland they ran into the forest. The ground rose as they wove among the trees, the forest more blur than substance, leaping from rocks and curving branches and over small streams. Neither could quite break away from the other, so they kept running till they had passed beyond the trees and onto the mountainside, over the stones and gravelly slopes. Still, neither was quitting. Now that they were in open space once again, they each renewed their effort to break ahead of the other, and there was deep pound in the air as they both broke the sound barrier.
Eventually, they came to a last tall peak overlooking the sea. They raced each other in a spiral up its sides, and though the way grew steep very quickly, their speed carried them upwards so that they were moving in a nearly vertical climb. They reached the top at the same time from opposite sides, and continued running into the air by hitting against one another’s feet, until, suspended weightless for a moment in the sky, they both were forced to stop. There was nowhere further to run.
They dropped back down to the narrow ridge of the mountain top lightly, both breathing a little harder. Sonic landed first, in a kneeling pose with one arm extended for balance, and when he stood he made a fist and pumped it towards his chest. “Yes!” he said. “That was a great run!”
The girl simply landed on her talons. Now that they were both still, she took a better look at him, starting with his red sneakers and moving upwards. “Huh. But, how’d you keep up with me? You’re just some kind of big blue rodent!”
“Hey, I’m no rodent, I’m a hedgehog!” And he crossed his arms, still smiling, and said, “I’m Sonic the hedgehog!”
The girl smiled back, a short pair of fangs becoming visible. “I’m Podarge Fleet-Footed! Fastest feet on the ground!”
“Hey, that wasn‘t a clear win!”
“Ha! You’re lucky, I’m out of practice!”
Sonic scratched the end of his nose. “You’re sure you just don‘t like to lose?” He looked out over the sea, stretching his legs. “Still, if you want to consider that last run a warm-up, how about a race back as a tie-breaker? I’ve got to head that way anyway.”
“Sounds fun.” They kept their eyes on each other as they both bent forward, preparing to kick off from the peak, then dropped over the side, using the fall to start their second run at an incredible speed.
-
Tails had finished the repairs, and was now scanning the horizon with a modified pair of binoculars. “Oh! There he is! Huh?”
Through the scope, he could see a bank of faint smoke rising from a set of scorch marks as Sonic and the stranger broke out of the forest and back onto the plain. Their paths veered apart as they approached the hill where Tails was watching from, so that once again both were approaching from opposite sides. The roar of the wind followed behind them. Tails noticed that he was directly between what looked to become a high-speed collision, and ducked, covering his head with a shout just as the two smoke-raising trails converged on him.
But there was no collision, and he opened his eyes cautiously. As the dust settled, Sonic and the stranger were now standing just off to either side of the Tornado, breathing heavily. The girl sat back on the ground, rolling back her head to look at the late afternoon sky, while Sonic bent over with his hands on his knees. Then they both started laughing.
“Sonic? What’s going on? Who is that?” asked Tails, feeling confused.
Sonic stood up straight and walked over to offer a hand to Podarge. She waved him off and jumped to her feet on her own. “My name is Podarge Fleet-Footed, the harpy,” she said to the fox.
“What’s a harpy?” he asked.
She smiled and showed her fangs.
“This is Tails, a friend of mine,” said Sonic, while the smaller fox just stared at the stranger.
“Fine. Sonic, you run pretty well, I‘ll look forward to another rematch.”
“Yeah, you too,” and he held out his hand a second time, this time to shake.
Podarge stared at it for a moment, but didn‘t take it. She smiled at him and instead gave a small salute, “It was fun, but I still have places to go.”
“Sonic, we can fly home anytime now, too.”
Podarge stopped and stared at Tails. “What? You don’t have wings, how do you fly?”
He hovered in the air and smirked. “The Tornado, here. I‘m a pretty good pilot!”
Sonic nodded, and gave Tails a high-five as the fox landed back on the ground.
“What?? This thing can fly?” Podarge said, making a face at the machine.
Tails looked a bit overwhelmed, as he answered, “It’s just a bit beat up, it’ll run fine! Haven’t you seen a plane before?”
Her eyes ran up and down the plane, as if searching it for something, and a smile spread slowly over her face. “…Okay, I’ve decided. Let me ride on it, too. Please? Up into the sky!” and she threw one hand upwards, pointing at the clouds drifting overhead.
“But…”
“Why not?” said Sonic, winking at Tails.
“Okay. Come on, get in!”
Sonic leapt up onto the wing, where he usually rode, and Tails dropped into the cockpit. Podarge followed him and took the rear seat, and the plane rolled down the hill onto the field, gaining enough speed to lift up and then turn to the southeast, gaining altitude.
Once airborne, Podarge skipped up onto the wing opposite Sonic, spreading her arms wide as the wind rushed past them. Sonic shook his head at her, and said, “You look like you’re enjoying yourself!”
“It’s wonderful being up so high!” she crowed, and looked down at the ground below, where the shadow of the plane was a small dark arrow passing over the hills.
“Hey, be careful up there, we’ll lose balance!” Tails warned them.
“Hah! Balance, huh?” said Podarge, turning to give a toothy smile at Sonic. “Well, so long as we time it right between the two of us, we could practically dance on this thing, then?”
Sonic leaned down to say to Tails, “Hey Tails, let’s show Po here what the Tornado can really do, even without a power up!”
“You got it, Sonic! Leave the piloting to me!”
“Po?” said Podarge, then squealed as the plane barrel-rolled into a low cloud bank. “Wheee!”
They made it back to Tails’ workshop as the sun was setting, Sonic and Podarge jumping off the plane as it rolled to a stop. Still excited, Po skipped up onto the roof that provided shade to the front of the building, gripping the metal ledge with her talons and grinning. “That was great! Sonic, how about that rematch?”
“Whoa, I’m all for a good race, but aren’t you tired?”
She crouched down, her tail fanning and her elbows resting on her knees. “Maybe,” she nodded, “But, I spent so long locked up, I don’t care. Well, now that I‘m free again, I suppose there is something that I need to do… but, all I want to do right now is run.”
“Locked up?” asked Sonic.
“Podarge, what happened to you?” asked Tails.
She shook her head. “It‘s not your problem. It‘s something that I...” Her talons tightened on the ledge, and the metal pinched with a squealing sound.
“Whoa, strong grip,” Sonic said to himself.
A voice carried to them from over the next hill. “Soooniiic!” Amy called, dashing up the path and running into Sonic, throwing her arms around him as he tried, too late, to back away. “Sonic, there you are! I saw the Tornado fly in. You and Tails took so long getting back, the rest of us made it home ages ago! Why are you so late?”
Podarge cocked her head, looking curious. “Another hedgehog?”
Hearing her voice, Amy spun around, shoving Sonic back a bit as if to keep him protected behind her. “I’m his girlfriend! Who are you?”
Sonic took the opportunity to get some distance from her. “Hey, Amy, this is Po. She’s a friend we met on the way back, after we had some plane trouble.”
“Friend, huh? How come I haven’t heard of her before? Okay, chicken legs, what are you to Sonic?”
“Amy-” began Sonic.
Podarge jumped down lightly from the roof. “All we did was cross paths. I would hardly call us ‘friends’ because of that. No need to get upset, pinky.”
“Why, you-”
“Still, if my being here is a problem, I’ll leave. It doesn’t matter to me,” she shrugged with a half-smile. She was a blur as she ran off into the forest with a last casual wave.
“What’s with her?” asked Amy, surprised.
“Podarge!” said Sonic, but she was already gone. “You two wait here,” he said, and ran off after her.
He caught up to her running along the riverside. Her expression now was serious, almost scowling, her attention elsewhere. “Podarge! …Up for another run?”
“Ha! Fine, let’s settle it now, blue boy!” she said, becoming upbeat quickly, and she jumped ahead.
“Blue- what?” and he spun after her.
They followed the river a long time. It was evening already, and the broken moon was rising, the wood full of fireflies that scattered as they sped past. Racing in the half-dark was a different sort of challenge, and Po occasionally would knock over stones or small trees into Sonic‘s way.
“Hey, that’s cheating!”
“A win is a win!” she laughed, but she wasn’t actually able to keep the ground she gained. Even slowed down by her tricks, Sonic kept even with her. They ran until they ran out of river, coming to a high ridge where the river became a waterfall, spilling down into a wide lake below. They both skidded to a stop before they would have launched themselves into the air over the water, instead collapsing onto the ground with their backs against each other as they caught their breath. They had done a lot of running that day.
After a little while, Podarge said, “Thanks. Sonic.”
They continued leaning against each other, watching the night sky. “Running feels good, right? Like nothing else.”
“Like the wind,” she said, shaking her head, though they weren’t facing each other.
“So, then, keep running. As long as you want to. But, eventually, when you stop running, there’s something else you still have to do, right? And when you do, I’ll be there to help.” He stood and offered her a hand up.
She stood on her own, crossing her arms and shaking her head. “You know, you remind me of someone.” She half-closed her eyes. “It’s really annoying.”
“Huh?” he blinked, then pointed at his face. “Me?”
“Why would you say you’ll help? You don’t even know me.”
“Maybe we aren’t friends yet, but, we have something in common, don’t we? So, let’s be friends.” And he held out his hand again.
She continued to look at his hand without taking it, and seemed a little troubled. Her shoulder spikes twitched nervously. “Seriously… it’s uncanny.” Sonic didn’t seem discouraged, and after a little while, she went on, “The moon is broken, the whole world is different, there’s a lot that I guess I’ve missed out on. I was sealed away for a long, long time, in a magical device called Pandora’s Box. I got trapped in there by mistake, but that box holds another secret, very powerful, and very dangerous. I’m glad enough to be free, but whoever did it wasn’t trying to help me out, just probably searching for the old treasure of the wind shrine.”
“A treasure hunter, huh?”
“Yeah, some ugly guy, egg-shaped with a wide mustache. I didn’t stay to get a better look at him, though.”
“Ugly mustache… wait, no way! That sounds like Eggman!”
“What? You think you know him?”
“This secret you were sealed with, it couldn’t be described as something leading to an ‘ultimate power’, could it?”
“Wh-what? What do you know about it!?”
“Oh man, Eggman is at it again! So, you need to stop him, right? Count me in! Don‘t worry, I‘ve been beating him and his evil schemes for a long time!”
“…No, Sonic.”
“Huh?”
“Call it a family secret,” and she smiled and held one finger up to her mouth. “Hey, look there! Perfect timing, too,” and she pointed off to the north.
A white light seemed to bubble there, perhaps something that could have been taken for a mist catching at the moonlight, until it grew too bright, gathering and then streaking into the sky in a high, white beam that narrowed and then vanished. The sky was dark again for a moment, then a wave of light radiated outward from the point where the beam had disappeared. “What was that?!”
“The invocation of the white wind! Guess that treasure hunter figured it out already. That power is pretty strong, if used right it can bring destruction to everything the light reaches. Zap!” and she threw her hands up with a laugh.
“What?!”
She grew a bit more serious. “…This is the power that destroyed an old city where a woman named Pandora lived. It destroyed countless cities before that, too. Centuries have passed, it shoulda’ been left forgotten, but it’s going to happen again.”
“So, what are you going to do?”
“Me? I didn’t summon this storm. And, there’s nothing I can do to stop it.”
A second wave rolled across the sky, like an after-shock, dimmer than the first, but thin webs of lightning arced behind it. The breeze shifted and was suddenly chill, though they might have imagined it. “Well, I’m not giving up! If Eggman thinks he can make a weapon of the wind, I’ll be the one to put him in his place!”
Podarge was shaking her head. “Sheesh, why do you bother? Maybe you and me can outrace a storm, but how do you expect to stop one?”
“I do this sort of thing all the time, I’m used to it. Podarge, you don’t really want to just give up, even if it seems desperate, am I right? As long as we don’t give up there’s still hope, and that’s all we need to keep trying.”
“Why do you say…”
“You have to decide for yourself when to keep running, and when to stand and fight. I don’t know how much time we have, so I’d better get back to the others.” He gave Po a last wave, and turned to begin his sprint back.
This post has been edited by SoDi: 11 February 2010 - 05:49 PM


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