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my sonic x episode3 i been posting myown tpyed version of sonicx what i think can happen

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Posted 15 September 2009 - 04:57 PM

Episode 3.(81) A new friend or an old.

Ahh, my emerald!! Shouted knuckles as he ran towards where the master emerald used to be. The girl surprised yelped the grab hold of Tails. Tails felt his cheeks warm up a little as she held on to him. Knuckles noticed tails and the girl then ran over to them and said “okay break it up you two.” The girl kept holding on tails. Knuckles pointed at the girl and said “you girl what are you who are you and what are you doing here” the girl looked at knuckles then looked at ground and quietly said “um, um I don’t know.” she looked like she trying not to cry. Tails looked her face noticed he was going to cry and said “knuckles you’re scaring her stop it.” Knuckles looked at her then said “awe come on kid don’t cry” tails said, “its okay miss he won’t hurt you.” The girl looked at tails then smiled and he smiles back at her. Knuckles looked at tails and asked, “Tails what happened here” tails took a second then responded, “uh well I saw something falling from the sky heading toward the island so I flew to see what it was. When I got here I found this girl who fell from the sky and crashed landed on your master emerald. When she landed the pieces flew all over the place.” Knuckles said “oh okay then sorry kid I didn’t mean to scare you.” “um it okay” said the quietly.”

Tails look at the girl and said “where are you from miss” she looked down again and said “I can’t remember for some reason I’m sorry” knuckles looked at her expression and said “are you okay kid” “I’m fine really” she said as she gave knuckles a cheeky smile. Tails who she was still holding on to her felt her body shaking badly “are you sure you’re okay miss” he said sounding slightly worried. “oh my” she said as she realized she was still holding on to tails then she said “um” as her face turn slightly red then she pushed tails down. “Ow” said tails has he fell down. “Oh um I’m so sorry are you okay she said as put her hand out to and help him up. As he grabbed her hand she said “are you okay” tails responded “yeah I’m okay” he smiled at her when got to his feet. “She looked at and said “Are you sure really” said still the looking worried tails just smiled at her as knuckles said “so you fell from the sky huh does that make you an alien girl?” the girl smiled at knuckles and said “no that makes me fox from another planet.” “Oh ok then” knuckles headed toward the master emerald to check the damage. “Tsch” said tails accidentally letting out a covered laugh. The girl looked at tails and said “you got the joke” “yeah I did” tails responded. “I should warn knuckles can be a bit..” before fore tails finished what he was saying knuckles shouted for where the master emerald was“ hey you were being a smart-aleck weren’t you kid” the girl smiled at him put her hands in front of her and said “so you noticed” playfully tails who couldn’t help it anymore burst out laughing.

“Shut it tails” said knuckles as tails said”I’m sorry I couldn’t help myself.” Knuckles made an irritated soft growl then tails put his hand over his mouth and made a nervous cough “ahem um I’m sorry knuckles” “you better be” said knuckles with his eyes closed and a satisfied smile his face. “You guys are funny” said the girl as she watched tails turn his head and laugh quietly. Tails looked up at the girl and “oh right miss what was your name” the girl look at up at tails and said “my name is Telatounia Lafox but I don’t like my name it’s too long. I think you’re um I mean its beautiful said tails blushing about mixing his words up. “You really think my name is beautiful said Telatounia wagging her tails.
“Hey kid you got two tails” said knuckles. Telatounia face went red and put her tails down Tails just noticing said you have two tails too Telatounia” “huh” said Telatounia going closer to tails. “Uh wow um I didn’t notice you had two tails” “well you weren’t the only one who didn’t pay attention heh, heh” “um yeah” “so” said knuckles “you’re name is Telatounia right” “yeah” said Telatounia “that name is too long can we just call you Telly” asked knuckles “um sure I’d like that a lot” said Telatounia happily. Tails thought in his head if someone was looking for her and her name is different they might not find her, then he said “um maybe we should just call her by her full name knuckles” knuckles quickly responded well tails you don’t like your real name either.” “But uh” tails started to say when Telly asked “tails is not your real name.” tails looked at her and smiled then knuckles said “ No way his name is” then tails cut knuckles off and said “my name in Miles Prower but my friends call me tails. “Oh then um I’ll call you tails if you don’t mind” said Telly. “Why would I mind?” said tails “well um I don’t know if you want me to be you friend yet” “of course I” do said tails happily. Telly responded “really wonderahhh” before she finished her words she fainted and began to fall. Tails caught her in his arms before she hit the ground. “Is she okay” said knuckles running up to her. Tails held her and said “the fall must have taken more out of then she realized.” Tails picked her up in his arms then started to fly. “Where are you taking her tails” asked knuckles. “To the impharmary to get better” said tails “oh okay” said knuckles “knuckles” said tails. “Yeah” said knuckles “don’t tell sonic about her please let me do it.” Said tails “huh why tails” asked knuckles “because said tails as remembered Cosmo getting shot “he’ll worry okay” “ fine” said knuckles as he walk be toward the remain. Tails flew off and got Telly to hospital wing then lay her down on a bed. “You’ll be aright Telly just rest here for now” as he yawned the laid his head on her bed side as fell asleep.
Sonic as he was running to find tails saw a bunch of light shoot across the sky “uh oh are those master emerald pieces” he said as he watched the pieces fly in many different directions. “Man what a night at least things are getting interesting but I better check this out and make sure that robot isn’t involved” said sonic as he ran toward Angel Island. Knuckles could be in trouble if he meets that robot” as ran leaving a blue steak behind him.
Next time on my sonic x; rouge notices the master emerald pieces in the sky and goes to check it out as she spots shadow and someone laying on ground and as she asks shadow what happen the boy gets up. The boy takes off and rouge gets shadow to follow him. Then rouge goes to see the master emerald.
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Posted 16 September 2009 - 01:23 AM

Everyone is really out of character, did you notice that? Names start with a capital letter, and the story is cliché. Anyways, I'll stop going grammar Nazi on your ass. I think the story could have some potential if you tried to make the characters act like they would in a normal SEGA storyline. And spoiling the story isn't good.

I wasn't on SOL a lot in the past month, so I wouldn't know if you're going to attack me for posting this. But I really couldn't care less.
Eat my balls.
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