[DanteDavis]

#6-7 will be postponed

[Fireblaze]

DanteDavis, on 07 September 2009 - 08:46 AM, said:

#2 means that idon't blame me for what the character says.

Uh...you're the writer. Doesn't that mean you should be blamed for what his character says...?

[Racerhog]

Fireblaze, on 07 September 2009 - 02:21 PM, said:

Uh...you're the writer. Doesn't that mean you should be blamed for what his character says...?

/= stop doing that, I Thing it is going to be better if you stop fighting for someting going better and better, Fireblaze, just wait for a better chance for him, don't be so rude, give him a chance...
well...and...

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That's, well, the point of criticism.

#4 - Still huge text, slightly awkward late reaction in panel 2, words poking out of bubble in panel 3, the fight was a bit odd.

in one form i think the same, the battle was...to fast...take the comic a bit slowly, no matters if is goign to have to make #100 pages of it, if you want, the comic can advance more than you spect, but you need to put part of hard work of you...

[DanteDavis]

heres #6 don't ask me where it comes from(you'll see) and enjoy.

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[KennEH!]

Fireblaze, on 07 September 2009 - 04:21 PM, said:

Uh...you're the writer. Doesn't that mean you should be blamed for what his character says...?

That not what he means, your taking it out of context. DanteDavis is saying that he can write whatever he wants for your character, no complaints like "he wouldn't say that," and etc.

[Racerhog]

well...i Have the avatar of my chara right now, is look like this...

it´s is...

[Fireblaze]

Racerhog, on 07 September 2009 - 01:56 PM, said:

/= stop doing that, I Thing it is going to be better if you stop fighting for someting going better and better, Fireblaze, just wait for a better chance for him, don't be so rude, give him a chance...
well...and...

So, you're of the opinion that people automatically get better even if no one is giving suggestions on how to improve?
Also, I'm not being rude. Being rude would be cursing him out, telling him he was wasting his time, or calling his work stupid. That happens all the freaking time to people who post comics even ten times better than this on another forum I go to.

#6:
"shall" is kinda a wierd word in that context.
Invincible should be lowercase.
Occasional chunks of blue from Sonic's sheet are visible. Doesn't look so good.
The rock just standing on a tiny tip looks a little odd, but nothing terrible there.

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That not what he means, your taking it out of context. DanteDavis is saying that he can write whatever he wants for your character, no complaints like "he wouldn't say that," and etc.

Ah, okay. I saw it as more of "I'm not in control of what he says" which didn't make much sense to me.

[DanteDavis]

OKay....racerhog are you still working on javi?

[Dark Awesome]

Cool comics man.

[Racerhog]

yeah! but the school is...the school didn't give me some time left to stay here, heheheh...

[DanteDavis]

I''m postponing Nova for awhile until i get kte straight