[ryleigh1207]

Chapter 1 An nice site of trees and kids And then a bright light appered I herd a voice. My name is Zeek The Hedegehog and this is my amazing, action, adventcher, drama, and comdy. I could not move. Then i see a orange blur. The blur became slowly clear. It was a orange fox with two tails. The fox said "Where did you come from?" i said "Where am I? Who are you?" he said "Your not from here are you? Well im tails. You look beat up you must have took a big fall let me take you to my workshop." 5 mins. later... We walked though the door. There I then saw a blue hedgehog and a red enchinda. Tails said "Im back but I saw this guy laying on the ground" the blue hedgehog said "Oh then hi my name is Sonic The Hedgehog but you can call me Sonic." the red enchinda said "How do you know if this isnt a trick by eggman?" I said " Whos eggman? " The red encinda said " oh well good enough my name is knuckles." I shook my head up and down. Then a black hedgehog burst though the door. Sonic said "SHADOW!" I said "whos shadow?" Shadow said " who the hell are you?" I said " Im Zeek." Shadow said " hes a clone!" I said " Im not a..." before i could finish I was blasted out of the house.

[ryleigh1207]

Chapter 2 "urg what happened" i opened my eyes and shadow was standing there with a gun pointing at my head. i was shocked! then shadow put his finger on the trigger. i closed my eyes and then. i opened thim then there i was shadow floting in the air with his gun side by side. I turned my head and there I saw a silver hedgehog. Shadow said "Put me down silver!" Silver said ok" then he put only shadow down but crushed his gun. Shadow said " sence you stoped me then that means this guy isint a clone." I looked at sonic. He was standing there eating a chilly dog. Tails was dancing and singing " YAY SILVER!" and knuckles was gliding away.

[ryleigh1207]

Chapter 3 we in our little group all walked to te green hill zone and then we all saw a warp hole. Shadow said " This could be a trap by eggman". Sonic said " Thats true lets go in! I said " I agree with Sonic." we jumped in. There we saw a battle of aliens and humans " We where all zonked out on the floor. I woke up and There i saw Master chef holding a gun at sonic still zonked out i used my chaos control to stop time and grabed a near by lazzer sword and sliced Master Chef. Then sonic woke up. he said "what happened?" I said "I saved YOUR life" he said "thanks!" The rest of the group woke up. I said " Stay close and be careful or you might end up like Master chef there." we went in groups that sonic made. It went like this. Group 1 sonic, tails, Group 2 Silver, shadow, me.
My group leader was silver and we moved on. We saw a Blue fox. Silver said "Who are you?". He said " My name is Sponk." Silver said " OK then your coming with us!"

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Chapter 4 we contiued on but then a alien poped out and sponk jumped in front and shot him with a pistol. we walked on Silver said " Hey guys i think we should stop here and camp " We all said " OK " So we spent the night. The next day I woke up and i saw sponk sitting on a rock. I picked up the rock with my Geokanises. Sponk turned around he said " Oh hi... U... whats your name?" I said "zeek" He said " ok hi im jeast practecing my sniping." I said ok then. i turned away. Then i heared a BOOM. i turned around and there i saw sponk with NO HEAD! I ran and told the others We ran out and saw his body and his head. we frecked out. all but shadow. He tought i killed him but i told him evrey thang so we bared him and moved on. Then we met up with sonic and tails. I heared a sound a robot sound. I turned around but i saw nothing.

[ryleigh1207]

Chapter 5 we are back home but there is one thang how did i get here? Oh well. Knuckles says " Hey zeek wana battle?" I said " OK" so we battled Knuckles punched me and i used chaos spear on him and knuckles sucker punched me and i sucker punched him he punch combo me on my face and i got pissed of and chaos control and punched him and did a combo. when chaos control stoped knuckles fell to the ground sonic, tails, and Silver where amazed. But shadow standed there and said " Humph, That dose not suprise me he was weak no one can knock me down because im the ultimite Life form."
I said "ya right" Shadow said " DONT YOU DARE SAY THAT! " I said " Oh ya bring it on! " Then the battle began. Shadow used chaos control but for some how i resisted that. i used geokanises on shadow and banged him on the ground. he got beat up by that. he used chaos spear on my i fell down and got back up. The chaos control worn out and then i used chaos control and shadow stoped. i jumped in the air and then charged up a beam. Chaos control stoped. evreyone tought i disapered. and then i shot the beam and it hit shadow. shadow fell to the ground. Evreyone including him was shocked.

[Kvitne]

Hey Ryleigh, I know you want to post your work here, but we have a fairly strict 400 character minimum for the stories posted here. In addition, you might want to clean up your grammar and spelling in these posts. If you need more information you can check out this post here:

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