[Shiro Hikari]

Basic Information
Name: Shiro Hikari
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Species: Draco-Hedgehog
Fur/feather/scale/skin: Skin: Orange and Gold with orange & gold quills going down and bat-like wings so he can fly.
Eyes: Pale Blue
Height: Tall
Build: Thin
Attire: Black Tuxedo with white spiked gloves and black spiked shoes

Theme Words
Items:
Hero Crystal Sword: A powerful sword made out of Inarian Crystal. Its a short sword and bears enchantments to prevent it from being damaged.
Light Bow: A powerful red bow with 2 large blades. The arrows are dark gold with a golden mist. The bow can split and become a pair of fast but weak swords.
Swordsminship:
Hyper Multi-thrust: Deals Minor Damage. A series of fast but weak thrusting attacks.
Spin Storm: Deals Moderate Damage. A series of low to high spin kicks. Shiro uses his spiked shoes for this attack. Thsi attack can make Shiro dizzy leaving him vunerable for a short time.
Magical Abilitys:
Glyph Sleeve: Shiro has the power to hide his items. This comes in handy cause it gives him perfect mobility. The items enter his body and rest in his soul. They will not effect his mind, body or soul in any way. The ability is used by mental commands, they will not respond to words.
Light Arrow: Uses the bow's magical arrows to attack.
Role Playing
Back-story:
Shiro is what they call a "Draco-Hedgehog", his father was a shape shifting dragon named Arkua, his mother was a hedgehog named Alara.
Arkua, fell in love with an orange Hedgehog, her name was Alara. Arkua and Alara got married, and a year later had Shiro.
Shiro Some what resembles his mother, and also had inherited his fathers wings and tail making him part hedgehog and part dragon.
When Shiro was 10 and still in school, he took to magic training, as well as swordsmen training.
But Shiro has a tragedy in his past that he keeps secret from everyone.... When he was 11 his mother had come down with a mysterious illness, some kind of virus that had no known cure.
Shiro coludn't help but watch his mother suffer and couldn't do more then to comfort her as she was in pain most of the time. A month later, she got worse, and her dying words to Shiro were "Shiro, you..you have what it..it takes to be a great person, you..you have made me proud..i..i love you Shiro" "I love you to mom" Shiro said.
She handed him something.."Take..this.to remember.....me...by...it has a power...that will show..itself when the...time....comes...Shiro....keep it up...and..remember...i..will..always be ..proud of you..." And she died without another word.
Shiro looked at the object she handed him, still holding her hand, it was a diamond pendent, the one her mother gave to her when she was a kid., his father couldn't believe it, and Shiro was devastated as he had been very close with his mother. He cried most of the night and vowed to never let her down.
His father disappeared shortly after that, he had been really in love with Alara, and left to go to an unknown destination, leaving Shiro to live on his own.
Shiro is now 19 and graduated high-school, and finished his training with Master Koto, and was presented with a sword made of pure crystal, Koto had said it would change one day, depending how he used it. He wouldn't let his mother down.
He used that sword to protect innocent lives and for the good of man kind.
And to this day he still wears that diamond pendent, still unknowing of it's hidden powers.

Example Post:
"C..Come on... we need to go"
The team traveled back to the dome, Kitsune sacrificing himself for the team....
They arived at the dome and the door was open...but something was wrong....
*Shiro ran over and saw Ariana laying on the ground, the little Chao was nuzzling her*
Shiro: "ARIANA!!" *he ran over
*he picked her up a little*
Shiro: "hold on, were almost there"
*she put her hand to his face*
Ariana: "Sh..shiro..I..I lo..." her eyes flickered, then she fell limp
Shiro: "noooo!!!, Ariana...Ariana" but she lay motionless
"no..no no no"
The door was open, she had saved them at the cost of her life, just as Kitsune did.
Shiro: "This..this is all my fault..., we shouldn't have left her here"
First he lost his mother, then Kitsune and now his only true love
tears came to Shiro's eyes, but he didn't stop them, she was gone, the world collapsed around Shiro, the memory of his mother's death came back, and for the first time sence his mother died 9 years ago..he cried for real.

This post has been edited by Shiro Hikari: 16 June 2009 - 10:18 PM

[Shiro Hikari]

I still didn't get it right.. did I?

[NiGHTS Noob]

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Hero Crystal Sword: A powerful sword made out of Inarian Crystal. Its a short sword and bears enchantments to prevent it from being damaged and breaking.
Alara's Pendent: His Mothers pendent, it holds powers still unknown to Shiro. It holds a lot of sentimental Value to Shiro because it was his mothers last gift.

Only problem here is that Shiro might not know what the pendent does, but you should. You can't just use this to spring a surprise on someone in a pinch. It's alright for people to act as if they don't know what it is, that's why they're RPing, but if you don't tell us what it does, how can we approve it?

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Swordsminship:
Hyper Multi-thrust: Deals Minor Damage. A series of fast but weak thrusting attacks.
Spin Storm: Deals Moderate Damage. A series of low to high spin kicks. Shiro uses his spiked shoes for this attack.

For here I've got to ask about costs. The first one probably doesn't need any, since that would just be his sword style, a quick thrusting offensive style. The second attack though might need to cost something, maybe just as simple as two post actions instead of one, nothing big.

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Magical Abilitys:
Glyph Sleeve: Shiro has the power to hide his items. This comes in handy cause it gives him perfect mobility. The items enter his body and rest in his soul. They will not effect his mind, body or soul in any way. The ability is used by mental commands, they will not respond to words.
Golden Aura: A simple healing spell that can heal minor to moderate wounds and status problems. This won't do much with critical wounds and status aliments.

The Golden Aura's going to need a cost of some sort, and considering the fact that this is an RP with no base healing, we'll have to ask Pyro about that one. I'm still pretty new to this system too.

I must say, stat wise, this is a pretty good attempt overall. Hopefully we can get it approved pretty soon.

This post has been edited by NiGHTS Noob: 16 June 2009 - 10:07 PM

[Shiro Hikari]

ill make a new item
and ill use a different ability

as well as a cost

This post has been edited by Shiro Hikari: 16 June 2009 - 10:23 PM

[NiGHTS Noob]

So I'm guessing the arrows are just like normal ones only using energy of some sort instead of ammo? There has to be a limit somewhere, but it's not like it has to be written down, with magic that's kind of implied and undefined as it is. Just keep that in mind when your RPing, estimate the exhaustion if he uses several arrows in a row or such.

Well, I don't see anything wrong, but it's Pyro's final decision since I haven't had enough experience with this system yet. From what I can see though he's not overpowered, and all the rules work.

[Shiro Hikari]

[Pyroman]

Ok, I'll approve the character.