[kazoka122]

Hey Everyone lots of things happened since the last time i was on this site so...for a quick summary of what happened, i lost my flashdrive (with the old sonic galaxy) so yeah >_> anyways i've come up with a remake of sonic galaxy and ummm here it is (hopes that he remembers how to post a comic) oh im starting with the title and the first page then ill wait for a comment from anyone includeing ummm i think his name was fireblaze or something.

Attached File(s)

•  Sonic_Galaxy_Title.PNG (2.99MB)
  Number of downloads: 1

[kazoka122]

page 1, like i said ill start with page 1 and wait for comments ^ ^

Attached File(s)

•  Sonic_Galaxy_page_1.PNG (130.2K)
  Number of downloads: 1

[black heart the hedgehog]

That was actually pretty good. I'm waiting for more.

[Muzzy Roberto]

Hey hey! It's easy to read! Also easy to see the spelling and grammar errors.

[Keno_the_glitch]

pretty good, but wouldn't the come out of his mouth? (sorry if it's a bad question) and like I said really good but the title seems familiar. did you copy mario galaxy, maybe?

This post has been edited by Keno_the_glitch: 01 June 2009 - 03:10 PM

[Fireblaze]

Hey look, I'm mentioned! =D
In the title page, the amount of style collisions is staggering. You might want to keep it all in one style, and probably all sprited as well.
In the actual comic, there's quite a few grammar errors. The text bubbles are pretty easy to read from, but they have a looot of white space, so you might want to make those smaller.
Also, you might want to move the text away from the exact top/bottom, it kinda threw me off the first time I read it through.
Lastly, you might want to change which sprites you use between panels. I can see Tails, Sonic, and Knuckles all using the same pose in the first three panels. Changing it up a little makes it look like they move in between. That helps a bit.
Anyways, keep it up, I'd like to see where this goes.

[kazoka122]

Fireblaze, on Jun 1 2009, 10:45 AM, said:

Hey look, I'm mentioned! =D
In the title page, the amount of style collisions is staggering.  You might want to keep it all in one style, and probably all sprited as well.
In the actual comic, there's quite a few grammar errors.  The text bubbles are pretty easy to read from, but they have a looot of white space, so you might want to make those smaller.
Also, you might want to move the text away from the exact top/bottom, it kinda threw me off the first time I read it through.
Lastly, you might want to change which sprites you use between panels.  I can see Tails, Sonic, and Knuckles all using the same pose in the first three panels.  Changing it up a little makes it look like they move in between.  That helps a bit.
Anyways, keep it up, I'd like to see where this goes.

well its pretty funny that u say that about the title cause if i remember right, on my first sonic galaxy u said that putting sprites together is a bad idea XD, oh and its nice to see u again.....as for the moveing the text away i dont understand @_@ oh and i made the text more organize but makeing a black straight line, so yeah XD

[kazoka122]

Heres page 2 folks ^ ^

Attached File(s)

•  Sonic_Galaxy_page_2.PNG (135.08K)
  Number of downloads: 1

[kazoka122]

heres page 3 comment pweeze ^ ^

Attached File(s)

•  Sonic_Galaxy_page_3.PNG (152.82K)
  Number of downloads: 1

[Movetron]

Grammar mistakes kawaii desu.

[kazoka122]

page 4

Attached File(s)

•  Sonic_Galaxy_page_4.PNG (144.12K)
  Number of downloads: 1

[black heart the hedgehog]

What is that weird boob thing on Metal Overlord?

This post has been edited by black heart the hedgehog: 03 June 2009 - 02:05 AM

[kazoka122]

black heart the hedgehog, on Jun 2 2009, 09:05 PM, said:

What is that weird boob thing on Metal Overlord?

what boob thing O-o?

[kazoka122]

page 5 ^ ^

Attached File(s)

•  Sonic_Galaxy_page_5.PNG (172.9K)
  Number of downloads: 1

[kazoka122]

page 6 ^ ^ comments pweeze

Attached File(s)

•  Sonic_Galaxy_page_6.PNG (152.08K)
  Number of downloads: 1

[kazoka122]

Keno_the_glitch, on Jun 1 2009, 10:08 AM, said:

pretty good, but wouldn't the come out of his mouth? (sorry if it's a bad question) and like I said really good but the title seems familiar. did you copy mario galaxy, maybe?

Sorry for not responding to this earlier ummmmm the fire i guess could come out of his iron fingers..besides hes a monstrousity so who knows what he has in store for any enemy he faces

[kazoka122]

page 7 peoples

Attached File(s)

•  Sonic_Galaxy_page_7.PNG (136.38K)
  Number of downloads: 1

[Pyroman]

Why are they fighting like it's Dragon Ball Z?

[KennEH!]

Don't they all?

[kazoka122]

page 8

Attached File(s)

•  Sonic_Galaxy_page_8.PNG (100.59K)
  Number of downloads: 1