[black heart the hedgehog]

My first comic.

This post has been edited by black heart the hedgehog: 11 May 2009 - 03:23 AM

[Mr. Retro]

Hm... Well, it's okay for a first, definitely. I can't exactly comment on it, as I am no master at making comics, but it is something I want to do in the future. So, I am going to give you some advice:

First off, it was way too short for it to be, well, entertaining. Even the most plotless comics have some length and story to go with them, so at least give it that.

Second, fight comics aren't really the way to go with sprites. Hell, sprites aren't usually the way to go when it comes to comics at all. But, if you work well enough, you could tone down the fighting and focus more on a base storyline, like perhaps an "Odd Couple" type theme. That could work, you know? Two dudes who are completely different living in the same house and driving each other insane?

Thirdly, your text is way too bold. Use Comic Sans Serif if you really want a comicy feel, and use actualy speech bubbles. That will give you a whole lot more room for things going on, and all that.

[Shock]

Well, retro pretty much covered it, but you should really save those as a .png. Just makes it look less blurry.

[black heart the hedgehog]

I will post this one up, then I will start using speach bubbles........
Could you post a link to some?
I just made this comic for my own personal gain.

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This post has been edited by black heart the hedgehog: 13 May 2009 - 01:13 AM

[Shock]

Why do you ignore me every time I tell you to use .png? Well, this wasn't bad, but use sprite backgrounds. If you need super shadow sprites, go to MFZ.

[black heart the hedgehog]

Sorry I forgot. My next comic will be HUGE so it might take a little bit to post a comic.

This post has been edited by black heart the hedgehog: 13 May 2009 - 04:10 AM

[black heart the hedgehog]

Bumping this with a new comic
No matter what I save it too it always looks blury.

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[black heart the hedgehog]

New comic and a sneak peak at a future storyline.

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[Fireblaze]

2nd to last one...there are no words.
And, in the last one, the panels are oddly shaped, the ground looks kinda wierd, it's blurry around sprites(jpeg'd I think), you use a different size, color and font with each piece of dialogue, the circle of chaos emeralds is kinda random, and I don't know what on earth Amy is doing in panel number four.

[black heart the hedgehog]

Gah,forgot the rope. And the second to last one has words you just have to click on he pic to see them. And the circle around the chaos emeralds was to draw Sonic in.

[Shock]

Fireblaze, on May 26 2009, 08:06 AM, said:

2nd to last one...there are no words.
And, in the last one, the panels are oddly shaped, the ground looks kinda wierd, it's blurry around sprites(jpeg'd I think), you use a different size, color and font with each piece of dialogue, the circle of chaos emeralds is kinda random, and I don't know what on earth Amy is doing in panel number four.

I don't want to know. If it's rope, why are her pants gone?

[black heart the hedgehog]

Shock, on May 31 2009, 03:53 AM, said:

why are her pants gone?

She never wore pants. I just put brown over her legs.

[black heart the hedgehog]

My new comic.

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[black heart the hedgehog]

More parts soon.
There's also a tornament I'm going to hold.I need a least 2 more fan characters to join.

EDIT: I will wait 2 more days for 2 more fan characters. As soon as I get 2 more I am starting.

This post has been edited by black heart the hedgehog: 04 June 2009 - 12:25 AM

[black heart the hedgehog]

New comic and I think the best I made so far.

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[kazoka122]

cool

[black heart the hedgehog]

pt 2

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[black heart the hedgehog]

I'm leaving for camp tomarow so I got this comic in.

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