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Posted 11 May 2009 - 03:20 AM

My first comic.
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Posted 11 May 2009 - 09:22 PM

Hm... Well, it's okay for a first, definitely. I can't exactly comment on it, as I am no master at making comics, but it is something I want to do in the future. So, I am going to give you some advice:

First off, it was way too short for it to be, well, entertaining. Even the most plotless comics have some length and story to go with them, so at least give it that.

Second, fight comics aren't really the way to go with sprites. Hell, sprites aren't usually the way to go when it comes to comics at all. But, if you work well enough, you could tone down the fighting and focus more on a base storyline, like perhaps an "Odd Couple" type theme. That could work, you know? Two dudes who are completely different living in the same house and driving each other insane?

Thirdly, your text is way too bold. Use Comic Sans Serif if you really want a comicy feel, and use actualy speech bubbles. That will give you a whole lot more room for things going on, and all that.
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 02:23 AM

Well, retro pretty much covered it, but you should really save those as a .png. Just makes it look less blurry.
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Posted 13 May 2009 - 01:12 AM

I will post this one up, then I will start using speach bubbles........
Could you post a link to some?
I just made this comic for my own personal gain.

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Posted 13 May 2009 - 04:01 AM

Why do you ignore me every time I tell you to use .png? Well, this wasn't bad, but use sprite backgrounds. If you need super shadow sprites, go to MFZ.
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Posted 13 May 2009 - 04:09 AM

Sorry I forgot. My next comic will be HUGE so it might take a little bit to post a comic.

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Posted 23 May 2009 - 02:18 AM

Bumping this with a new comic
No matter what I save it too it always looks blury.

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Posted 25 May 2009 - 05:28 AM

New comic and a sneak peak at a future storyline.
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Posted 26 May 2009 - 04:06 PM

2nd to last one...there are no words.
And, in the last one, the panels are oddly shaped, the ground looks kinda wierd, it's blurry around sprites(jpeg'd I think), you use a different size, color and font with each piece of dialogue, the circle of chaos emeralds is kinda random, and I don't know what on earth Amy is doing in panel number four.
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Posted 29 May 2009 - 04:56 AM

Gah,forgot the rope. And the second to last one has words you just have to click on he pic to see them. And the circle around the chaos emeralds was to draw Sonic in.
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Posted 31 May 2009 - 03:53 AM

Fireblaze, on May 26 2009, 08:06 AM, said:

2nd to last one...there are no words.
And, in the last one, the panels are oddly shaped, the ground looks kinda wierd, it's blurry around sprites(jpeg'd I think), you use a different size, color and font with each piece of dialogue, the circle of chaos emeralds is kinda random, and I don't know what on earth Amy is doing in panel number four.
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I don't want to know. If it's rope, why are her pants gone?
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Posted 31 May 2009 - 09:03 PM

Shock, on May 31 2009, 03:53 AM, said:

why are her pants gone?
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She never wore pants. I just put brown over her legs.
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Posted 01 June 2009 - 02:26 AM

My new comic.

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Posted 03 June 2009 - 11:17 PM

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More parts soon.
There's also a tornament I'm going to hold.I need a least 2 more fan characters to join.
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EDIT: I will wait 2 more days for 2 more fan characters. As soon as I get 2 more I am starting.

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Posted 18 June 2009 - 01:40 AM

New comic and I think the best I made so far.

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Posted 19 June 2009 - 11:15 PM

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Posted 23 June 2009 - 06:39 PM

pt 2

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Posted 06 July 2009 - 10:57 PM

I'm leaving for camp tomarow so I got this comic in.

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