[Shiro Hikari]

Basic Information
Name: Shiro Hikari
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Species: DracoHegdehog
Fur/feather/scale/skin: Gold, Quills going down
Eyes: Pale Blue
Height: Average
Build: Thin, Tall
Attire: White coat with white pants, shoes and spiked gloves

Theme Words
First:Equipment
Hero Crystal Sword:Shiro has a very powerful sword made of a gray crystal, Its a bit short, but is still deadly in combat.
Alara's Pendent:A small tear shaped diamond pendent, this holds much sentamental value to Shiro as it was his mothers last gift, She told Shiro it has powers that will revel themselves when the time comes. Shiro has only seen a few hints of what kind of powers this little gem contains.
Second:Spells
Chaos Beam:A critcaly damaging beam that does massive damage, but disables Shiro for a moment to recharge. 5 post cool down.
Lightning Storm:A powerful lightning attack that scatters lightning bolts.It can deal more damage depending on the time of day and weather. Shiro gets disabled momentarily. 4 post cool down>
Third:Sword Skills
Wind Slash: Shiro flings his sword upward and launches several blades of wind from the swords tip. The attack takes 3 posts to cool down. This is a critcal damaging attack
Hyper Slash: Shiro does a fast sword attacks that can cut down the toughest foes> This has a 2 post cool down.

Role Playing
Back-story:
Shiro is what they call a "Draco-Hedgehog", his father was a shape shifting dragon named Arkua, his mother was a hedgehog named Alara.
Arkua, fell in love with an orange Hedgehog, her name was Alara. Arkua and Alara got married, and a year later had Shiro.
Shiro greatly resembles his mother, and also had inherited his fathers wings and tail making him part hedgehog and part dragon.
When Shiro was 10 and still in school, he took to magic training, as well as swordsmen training.
But Shiro has a tragedy in his past that he keeps secret from everyone.... When he was 11 his mother had come down with a mysterious illness, some kind of virus that had no known cure.
Shiro coludn't help but watch his mother suffer and couldn't do more then to comfort her as she was in pain most of the time. A month later, she got worse, and her dying words to Shiro were "Shiro, you..you have what it..it takes to be a great person, you..you have made me proud..i..i love you Shiro" "I love you to mom" Shiro said.
She handed him something.."Take..this.to remember.....me...by...it has a power...that will show..itself when the...time....comes...Shiro....keep it up...and..remember...i..will..always be ..proud of you..." And she died without another word.
Shiro looked at the object she handed him, still holding her hand, it was a diamond pendent, the one her mother gave to her when she was a kid., his father couldn't believe it, and Shiro was devastated as he had been very close with his mother. He cried most of the night and vowed to never let her down.
His father disappeared shortly after that, he had been really in love with Alara, and left to go to an unknown destination, leaving Shiro to live on his own.
Shiro is now 19 and graduated high-school, and finished his training with Master Koto, and was presented with a sword made of pure crystal, Koto had said it would change one day, depending how he used it. He wouldn't let his mother down.
He used that sword to protect innocent lives and for the good of man kind.
And to this day he still wears that diamond pendent, still unknowing of it's hidden powers.

Example Post:
Not too long ago a great battle was waged. A battle that would either spell certain death for all or everlasting peace. One Individual by the name of Shiro (the God of Luck)was at the center of the battle and the cause for this battle, his sister Aoi (the Goddess of Death). Due to the help of his Friends Shiro was able to defeat Aoi once and for all saving those that could do nothing but watch. Now after about 3 years of peace Shiro has been reborn, only this time as a Chao. Another battle is about to begin but will Shiro prevail or fall to the new enemy?

This post has been edited by Shiro Hikari: 09 May 2009 - 02:23 PM

[Pyroman]

I remember saying NO HYPHENATIONS. Change Mage-Knight.

Anything that would deal extra damage has to be specified about if it deals a serious wound or critical wound and if it does, there should be a cost.

[KennEH!]

Spoiler

Psst use spellsword.

[Pyroman]

Oh, and "Sword Skills" can be changed to just "Swordsmanship".

No, "Spellsword" is not OK. Imitation, as much as the spoiler made me laugh a bit, it's not kosher in these parts. Try something like, "Sword" or "Swordsman".

[KennEH!]

How is it not kosher, it's a real class by a good amount of RPGs.

[Shiro Hikari]

I fixed it, hey are we alowed to put pics in these sheets

[Pyroman]

Specify about what kind of damage the different attack moves do (Light, serious, or Critical injuries?).

[Shiro Hikari]

fixed, anything else

[Pyroman]

You need to include what kind of damage is done for ALL of his attack abilities and what kind of cost they have.

[Shiro Hikari]

anythging else i fixed that

[Pyroman]

Once again, ALL OF HIS ATTACKS need to be described as dealing light, serious, or critical injuries. You must also include a cost in terms of the game. Do these abilities take more actions? Does the character have to use a post to recover? What is the damage and the cost for all of their combat abilities?

[Shiro Hikari]

OK NOW im starting to get annoyed


there i put cool downs which require a certian # of posts until they can be used again

THAT should be good enough

This post has been edited by Shiro Hikari: 08 May 2009 - 08:29 PM

[HTM]

Shiro Hikari, on May 8 2009, 08:26 PM, said:

OK NOW im starting to get annoyed

Again. Live with it, Shiro. You will get through it, and then we will see how good you are at roleplaying.

[Shiro Hikari]

there i put cool downs  which require a certian # of posts until they can be used again

THAT should be good enough

This post has been edited by Shiro Hikari: 08 May 2009 - 08:30 PM

[Shiro Hikari]

Hypothermial-Moron, on May 8 2009, 08:28 PM, said:

Again. Live with it, Shiro. You will get through it, and then we will see how good you are at roleplaying.

whatever

[Pyroman]

Did you read the damage system? Do you know how crippling a critical injury is? To have one move that deals an injury like that is one thing, but to have two and using either move still counts as only taking one action and comes at only a "Cool down" cost? That's a game breaker.

Listen, I know you just want to RP with us and have some fun, but you're trying to push Gary Stu through the system and it doesn't fit. Try again with a different, less powerful character. Read the profiles of characters that have been approved if you want to get an idea what's OK.

[Shiro Hikari]

TAKE YOUR RP SYSTEM AND SHOVE IT UP YOUR ASS

[Shock]

Holy shit.

You should start running.

[NiGHTS Noob]

Shiro Hikari, on May 11 2009, 03:41 PM, said:

TAKE YOUR RP SYSTEM AND SHOVE IT UP YOUR ASS

Listen you little elitist prick. This is Pyro's fucking RP section, that means its Pyro's rule set, you don't want to play by some rules go and find some dumbass piece of Sonic RP forum shit and go there. There's like fifty of them that I can find of a freaking google search. Nobody's forcing you to play here, you can just go the hell away if you want.

[Pyroman]

Actually, it's not MY RP section, it's OUR RP section. That's why I'm trying to make it fair for everyone with this system.