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Posted 03 April 2009 - 05:55 PM

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Name: Sibylx
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Species: Raccoon
Fur/feather/scale/skin: He has blue fur. Strange color for a raccoon? Live with it.
Eyes: Green
Height: 4'1"
Build: Wiry, and strong.
Attire: Black pants, and black sneakers. He has a dark blue T-Shirt, with a dark blue pocketless hoodie.

Weapons/Items/Powers/Abilities:

1) Razor (OS: 5 DS: 3 Specialties: Chosen Wielder) Razor is a sword that he possesses. He named it that for it's everlasting sharpness. Not really any special way he uses this, except for swinging it.

2) Flight- Lets Syblix fly.

3) Bow (OS: 5, Ammo: 3 Specialties: Homing Feature) There is nothing special about this either, but it's arrows home in on the target.

4) The Typhoon- (Vehicle Type: Air/Water. Speed: 5. Fuel Efficiency: 7 Durability: 6. Special Abilities: Transformation.) A 2-Man plane, it can transform into a boat by retracting it's wings and wheels, and using a propeller that comes out of the back to make the plane sail through the seas.

Stats:

Strength: 20

Agility: 10

Vitality: 10

Lesser skills: Stealth

Character Development

Backstory: He was born in abandoned city that's name was forgotten over the years. He killed birds and other animals for food. Syblix soon found enough old parts to make a plane. He flew it away from the city, and after about a week, his fuel was running very low, and his plane didn't seem like it would last much longer. He saw a forest filled with life. There were trees full of fruit, and a town nearby. He landed in the town, and met many new friends, who gladly helped refuel and repair his plane, adding a Computer Chip that gave it the ability to transform.

Personality: Syblix is a prankster with a sarcastic tongue. But living with the people he lives with, he's gotten kinder.

Example post: Syblix stared at the large door, blocking him from the outside world. He slid off the bed he was lying on, and landed on his feet on the wooden floor. He walked over the boards that made creaking sounds as he walked over them, and made it to the door. He thought about breaking it down. He backed up several feet, then sprang into it. It fell, along with Syblix, to the ground with a crash.

This post has been edited by Shock: 03 April 2009 - 05:59 PM

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Posted 03 April 2009 - 07:20 PM

Wow. Just. Just wow. Congratulations on this character, man. Well, the only thing I see that can be ranted about would be the backstory. A documented village's name would never be forgotten. Where did he get the knowledge of building a plane? Where did he get the fuel? But that's about it.

Your character is approved in my eyes, though. But just so you know, you have to want to roleplay with that character.
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Posted 03 April 2009 - 07:31 PM

"He walked over the boards that made creaking sounds as he walked over them"

This line doesn't make sense. Just sayin'.
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Posted 03 April 2009 - 09:14 PM

Hypothermial-Moron, on Apr 3 2009, 11:20 AM, said:

Wow. Just. Just wow. Congratulations on this character, man. Well, the only thing I see that can be ranted about would be the backstory. A documented village's name would never be forgotten. Where did he get the knowledge of building a plane? Where did he get the fuel? But that's about it.

Your character is approved in my eyes, though. But just so you know, you have to want to roleplay with that character.
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sorry I did this all on a itouch, so I can't really make it too descriptive, and your right, I forgot to tell where he got the knowledge and stuff. I'll edit it when I can get on my computer. And sorry bout that, Kvitne. I want to roleplay, Hypo, so I'm not like those people that make a character for no reason.

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