[Keno_the_glitch]

Please rate my comic it's short but if I get more good comments I'll make a whole series!

I hope this works out

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[Egnio]

Use backgrounds, speech bubbles, and save as PNG, and you'll be half way of making good sprite comics.

[Movetron]

0/5.
Speech bubbles, save as PNG, and use Paint.NET instead. (Or GIMP, but it's not as good for making comics.)

Plus the story sucks monkey balls. (Had to break the truth to ya at some point)

[Red]

Also, wrong place. There's a forum(sub-forum?) for sprite comics.

[Kvitne]

Whoops, almost forgot to move this.

[Keno_the_glitch]

'Kay I'm Working on a (hopefully) better comic ! It'll be done in a couple of hours

This post has been edited by Keno_the_glitch: 23 April 2009 - 10:52 PM

[Keno_the_glitch]

O.K. everyone I'm done! That only about 50 mins. !

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[HTM]

Might want to get better backgrounds and a beta-reader to proofread your grammar and spelling. But otherwise, I'm not really that good of a critic, so yeah.

EDIT:
The underlined words are links.

EDIT2:
And develop some nice quality storyline, and tad longer than it is now, otherwise people will start saying "Oh wow, bet I could do better than that!".

This post has been edited by Hypothermial-Moron: 25 April 2009 - 10:21 PM

[Keno_the_glitch]

O.K. you stop commenting now. So, don't comment on comics unless it's good, I forgot to mention, I use backgrounds that just come to me (as in I make them myself). I'm making a series, well at least it's very fun making sprite comics! So now like I said no more comments unless it's something good about my comic.

[black heart the hedgehog]

Keno_the_glitch, on Apr 25 2009, 11:31 PM, said:

O.K. you stop commenting now. So, don't comment on comics unless it's good, I forgot to mention, I use backgrounds that just come to me (as in I make them myself). I'm making a series, well at least it's very fun making sprite comics! So now like I said no more comments unless it's something good about my comic.

You did say

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Please rate my comic

And we are trying to give you help. Keep acting that way and no one will even venture into this topic.

This post has been edited by black heart the hedgehog: 25 April 2009 - 11:37 PM

[Shock]

I agree with HM and blackheart. And to help you improve, I'll give you some suggestions. Use sprite backgrounds, they aren't too hard to find, and if you want, I'll give you a link to find some.Or just google it. Dont mix sprite styles, unless something happened in the comic causing the character's styles to change. And finally, please get a plot or something.

This post has been edited by Shock: 26 April 2009 - 03:51 AM

[HTM]

There is always The Mystical Forest Zone.

[Shock]

That was what I was going to show him.

[black heart the hedgehog]

It may just be me but the comic is getting a little too pokemonish.

[Keno_the_glitch]

ok, now all I need is a real story line any suggestions? until then I'll post random...glitches! yay, glitches I love glitches! (you can comment to help me improve)

[Shock]

Not sure..Depends on what type of comic you want. Do you want it to revolve around fighting and adventure? Or do you want it to be funny?

[Keno_the_glitch]

I want a funny comic!

[Keno_the_glitch]

Hey everyone! I'm represented by a purple, cheap recolor of silver! anyway, I may get some proper Keno_The_Glitch sprites. Oh, and This is a "glitch chronicle" Just basicly a comic I made out of boredom. so, enjoy

I forgot some speech bubbles, and that's all I see as errors! I'd like to know somrthing positive about the comic! (I like positive!)

[black heart the hedgehog]

It is Ok. You used a good background. The only thing I say is use a different sprite sheet of blaze. I could send you one if you want.

[Fireblaze]

There's your positive - you have interestin backgrounds.
Here's some stuff you need to improve on.
-Gigantic panels are not fun, especially when they're mostly empty space.
-Text boxes should have little empty space - just a little more room than the text itself.
-Keeping panels about the same size vertically is good.
-When resizing, do it in more "normal" numbers - 200%, 300% ect going up, and 50%, 33%, 25% ect going down.
-There are some pretty good explosion effects out there, if you're interested.