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adventures of Keno sprite comics made by me

#1 User is offline   Keno_the_glitch Icon

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Posted 02 April 2009 - 12:53 AM

Please rate my comic it's short but if I get more good comments I'll make a whole series! :D

I hope this works out

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Posted 02 April 2009 - 01:08 AM

Use backgrounds, speech bubbles, and save as PNG, and you'll be half way of making good sprite comics.
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/230309/61095_Songbar_template.swf

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Yeah, but you're a Sonic-tard, so that detracts about 6 years off of your real age mentally in my eyes.
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Posted 02 April 2009 - 01:32 AM

0/5.
Speech bubbles, save as PNG, and use Paint.NET instead. (Or GIMP, but it's not as good for making comics.)

Plus the story sucks monkey balls. (Had to break the truth to ya at some point)
Eat my balls.
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Posted 02 April 2009 - 02:56 AM

Also, wrong place. There's a forum(sub-forum?) for sprite comics.
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Posted 02 April 2009 - 04:51 PM

Whoops, almost forgot to move this.
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Posted 23 April 2009 - 09:37 PM

'Kay I'm Working on a (hopefully) better comic :lol: ! It'll be done in a couple of hours

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Posted 23 April 2009 - 10:54 PM

O.K. everyone I'm done! That only about 50 mins. !

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Posted 25 April 2009 - 08:52 PM

Might want to get better backgrounds and a beta-reader to proofread your grammar and spelling. But otherwise, I'm not really that good of a critic, so yeah.

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The underlined words are links.

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And develop some nice quality storyline, and tad longer than it is now, otherwise people will start saying "Oh wow, bet I could do better than that!".

This post has been edited by Hypothermial-Moron: 25 April 2009 - 10:21 PM

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Our business is Life itself...

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Drayn Verandie, Jewel Verandie, Tyko Verandie, Rick Moore
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Post icon  Posted 25 April 2009 - 11:31 PM

O.K. you stop commenting now. So, don't comment on comics unless it's good, I forgot to mention, I use backgrounds that just come to me (as in I make them myself). I'm making a series, well at least it's very fun making sprite comics! So now like I said no more comments unless it's something good about my comic.
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Posted 25 April 2009 - 11:36 PM

Keno_the_glitch, on Apr 25 2009, 11:31 PM, said:

O.K. you stop commenting now. So, don't comment on comics unless it's good, I forgot to mention, I use backgrounds that just come to me (as in I make them myself). I'm making a series, well at least it's very fun making sprite comics! So now like I said no more comments unless it's something good about my comic.
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And we are trying to give you help. Keep acting that way and no one will even venture into this topic.

This post has been edited by black heart the hedgehog: 25 April 2009 - 11:37 PM

I'll think of somthing soon.
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Posted 26 April 2009 - 03:40 AM

I agree with HM and blackheart. And to help you improve, I'll give you some suggestions. Use sprite backgrounds, they aren't too hard to find, and if you want, I'll give you a link to find some.Or just google it. Dont mix sprite styles, unless something happened in the comic causing the character's styles to change. And finally, please get a plot or something.

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Posted 26 April 2009 - 07:34 AM

There is always The Mystical Forest Zone.
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Posted 27 April 2009 - 03:14 PM

That was what I was going to show him.
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Posted 28 April 2009 - 03:08 AM

It may just be me but the comic is getting a little too pokemonish.
I'll think of somthing soon.
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Posted 04 May 2009 - 10:51 AM

ok, now all I need is a real story line any suggestions? until then I'll post random...glitches! yay, glitches I love glitches! (you can comment to help me improve)
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Posted 04 May 2009 - 01:09 PM

Not sure..Depends on what type of comic you want. Do you want it to revolve around fighting and adventure? Or do you want it to be funny?
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Posted 05 May 2009 - 10:47 AM

I want a funny comic!
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Posted 07 May 2009 - 09:56 PM

Hey everyone! I'm represented by a purple, cheap recolor of silver! anyway, I may get some proper Keno_The_Glitch sprites. Oh, and This is a "glitch chronicle" Just basicly a comic I made out of boredom. so, enjoy
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I forgot some speech bubbles, and that's all I see as errors! I'd like to know somrthing positive about the comic! (I like positive!)
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Posted 07 May 2009 - 10:57 PM

It is Ok. You used a good background. The only thing I say is use a different sprite sheet of blaze. I could send you one if you want.
I'll think of somthing soon.
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Posted 08 May 2009 - 02:16 AM

There's your positive - you have interestin backgrounds.
Here's some stuff you need to improve on.
-Gigantic panels are not fun, especially when they're mostly empty space.
-Text boxes should have little empty space - just a little more room than the text itself.
-Keeping panels about the same size vertically is good.
-When resizing, do it in more "normal" numbers - 200%, 300% ect going up, and 50%, 33%, 25% ect going down.
-There are some pretty good explosion effects out there, if you're interested.
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