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World Collision A sonic Fanfic with some oc's

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Posted 25 March 2009 - 03:15 PM

This isn't a first fan fiction for me but it is on this site so I hope you enjoy it.

Disclaimer: I do not own Sonic the hedgehog or any characters related to the Sonic franchise Sega, Archie and company does.

Author note:this is a work in progress so please do not 'flame' me,
constructive criticism is appreciated and welcome but please refrain from using hater tones.By the way I do own Kita and Kina so please ask me before using them,Thank you.
Also you can reply to this,not like that is not what it's there for.

World Collision
'Chapter one'
Sonic just stared as tails was flung backwards by the force of Fiona's hand. It seemed forever before Sonic could wrap his mind around what had just transpired."Tails!” sonic cried out reaching for the little fox as he fell. Scourge the reason for what was happening stood watching, smugly by Fiona. He turned to her and calmly stated his thoughts,”Humph, if that's all the twerp had to say then I guess we should be leave'n, right babe?” Scourge smirked as the trans- dimensional portal to anti-Mobius opened up behind the two.

Just as scourge and Fiona was about to pass through, another portal opened up spitting two hedgehog girls out.” what in the hell?" one girl said upon observing her surroundings. “Hell if I know sis!" yelled the other clearly aggravated by the sudden bruising upon entering Mobius prime.

The former girl was a white furred hedgehog girl with sapphire blue eyes and icy blue quills that lay flat on her head in somewhat of a longer version of Amy's hair style her tail was also icy blue in color. She wore a similar version of Amy’s clothes only it was a shirt and skirt ensemble that was dark blue in color. The shirt was a neck less and sleeveless top that wrapped around her it had a black border at the top and bottom of the hem. While the skirt was a short mini-skirt that had black vertical stripes and bottom hem. She wore a pair of black shorts underneath the skirt and a pair of dark blue socks with diagonal black stripes. Her boots were also dark blue with black designs. To complete her outfit she wore a black velvet collar and two blue and black striped flower hairpins beside each ear. As well as a dark blue and horizontally black striped bell bottomed arm sock on each arm covering a pair of fingerless black gloves. On the shoulder of one arm was a black snowflake shaped symbol.

The latter girl was a white blonde furred hedgehog girl with ruby red eyes and bright golden blonde quills that partially laid flat on her head with the back quills held up in a ponytail fashion by a red hair band. She wore a red sleeveless turtleneck top with a black circle design in the front and black upper and lower hem. Black bands covered the upper part of her arms and black skin tight arm socks covered the lower part of her arms hiding red and black fingerless gloves. A pair of red shorts with a vertical black line on each outer side that included pockets covered her lower body to about right above her knees. Red boots with black designs adorned her feet. She had both ears pierced, the left had a stud in the lower part of the ear, and the right had a stud in the upper part of the ear. She too had a black symbol on her shoulder it was in the form of a small flame.

“Well whadya’ know a hooker and a goth.” Scourge said upon inspecting the two girls, completely forgetting about going back, as well as Fiona.

“Excuse ME!” the blonde hissed turning toward scourge with a sneer.”You have NO room to talk green boy, I mean after all if your girlfriends clothes get any tighter we’ll be haven’ a funeral” looking scourge in the eye, the girl continued,” And what are you suppose to be anyway? The little green bad boy from mars?” While trying to help the fox kit up Sonic and tails both snickered covering their mouths to hide the grin on their faces, making it difficult for Sonic to help him up.

Scourge laughed himself, surprising the rest of them.”Wow, and here I was thinking you were just another pretty face, you got some nerve to go along with that mouth of yours.”He replied haughtily.”What’s your name?”He asked.”I’m Kita and the quite one here’s my twin sister Kina.”The blonde replied nonchalantly pointing to the blue haired girl. Which, said girl just adjusted her skirt as if nothing was wrong.

“Quite, huh? You probably do her fighten’ for her don’t cha?”He asked Kita. Kina stopped what she was doing and glared at scourge.”You couldn’t possibly fight your own fights right kid?”Scourge continued talking turning to kina, ignoring the look she was giving him. Kita just chuckled darkly knowing the meaning to her sister’s glare. All scourge heard after that was silence, the others stared in wonder as this small blue haired hedgehog girl floored scourge with one hit.

Scourge couldn’t believe it one minute he was standing and now he was on his back. Fiona stood over him in concern,” what in the hell happened Fiona?”He asked as he raised himself up.

Sonic was busting a gut with laughter, as was Tails and Kita. Kina just glared at scourge, and then she spoke “you may want to get your worthless spiked rear back where you came from green boy before I kick it there.” With that said, Fiona dragged a dazed Scourge through the portal.
'end of chapter one'
So I do not end up double posting I'll just put chapter 2 here when I get the time to do so since Either:(A.) no one has anything nice to say about this fic or (B.)It just plain sucks and no one cares to break it to me.

Chapter two
“Man...Ha-ha...girl I have never thought it possible for someone to lay me OR scourge flat with one hit."Sonic said, wiping a tear from his eye.
“Are you super strong or something?” asked Tails. Kina turned to them with a blank look. “No I do not have super strength Tails…the truth is scourge just wasn’t paying much attention to me…so…it was merely dumb luck that I got that nice of a hit in." Sonic and tails looked at her in wonder. “How did you know he was called Tails?” Sonic asked in suspicion. “Well…it is a long story Sonic and I am pretty sure being out in the open is not a place for story telling here."She replied as Kita grinned deviously. Kina turned to her twin, “Do not go there sis, I know what you are thinking so DO NOT go there.”Kita laughed and said, “Too late, I’m going there.” Kina sighed, “Why must your mind be in the gutter?” Kita laughed, “Sis you know better than that my mind is never IN the gutter it IS the gutter.”
Sonic glanced at tails, the little fox shrugged. “Women.” The two said shaking their heads.
"Well...we're not far from Freedom H.Q. and I'm sure Sal won't mind having a couple of extra hands."Tails nodded in agreement,"So?"Sonic turned to the girls."sure why not." with that Sonic grabbed the two and ,with Tails following, headed for home.

'Freedom H.Q.'
"NO!"Sally screamed pointing a finger toward Sonic,"Sal,They have no where else to go!"Sonic shot back."They don't belong here Sonic,any other time I would,but not now! with the war still going they could get seriously hurt if they stayed and I'm not going to risk it!"The subjects in question looked to one another, before Kina stood and approached Sally cautiously,sensing the tension in the princess."Look princess we don't mean to cause trouble but we can help you if you'd like?"Just then the ground trembled causing the group to fall."What was that?"Antoine came busting in to the room in fright"Princess Sally!Ze Eggman he iz attacking!"
Outside a small group of robots stood in the ready."Ha ha ho! Sonic come out here I have a little something for you!"Eggman boasted grinning madly.
"Man this is so not cool...Sal you got any ideas as to what's going on here?"Sally shook her head"No I don't...although there must be something special about those robots if he has only brought twelve of them...he knows you Sonic so he knows you can break his little toys with no problem but to come here with just a few...that's something even he is not dumb enough to pull unless they had some real firepower or something...as to what they do...I have no idea."Sonic scratched his chin thoughtfully"So I just need to be more careful is all,right?"Sally shook her head, "Sonic! this isn't a game,we need to group up and do some recon, before we jump in to a fight where we may not win,besides we no nothing about these things."
Kina and Kita looked out toward the small group of 'bots,"Oh no!"Kina cried.Sally turned to them"Do you know something?"Kina nodded"They are the Ap05tl3s ...we call them the Apostles,There are only twelve of them because that's all that was created...before their creator was...executed for treason."Kita picked up"and the empirial king used them as his bodyguards before they turned on him."Sally looked at the two girls in confusion"Turned on?"Kina nodded,"yes, somehow their system was compromised causing a malfunction in their judgment unit...their heart...and what was right became wrong and vice versa.","So how do we stop them?","that's just it...we don't know,we went through a portal to find a world that may have the technology and know how to destroy them...only the man who created them could stop him."Sally sighed"Why this world?"Kita replied"Why did 'cianna' send us here if it's the wrong place not only that but how did they get here?"the group shook their heads,"Wait!"Kina said suddenly followed by Sally,"If they're HERE then here must be their origin point!"Kina said excitedly"And if that is so than our world must be a past version of yours which means...!"Sally and Kina finished in unison"The creator MUST be still alive and EGGMAN is the empirial!"
END of Chapter Two...please review/reply

This post has been edited by Scourgekito the hedgehog: 03 April 2009 - 03:31 PM

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Posted 03 April 2009 - 06:18 PM

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Posted 15 April 2009 - 09:21 PM

Chapter three

Somewhere,on the other side.

"We need to intervene!"A dark velvet voice cried out.
"It is not our place to intervene but to watch and you know this."Calmly stated another, more grizzled, voice.Dark sapphire eyes glared into seething gold.
"He is our leader Nephilum,You need to obey his words." Came a smooth and ladylike voice not nearly as cold as her terrible, reflective, dark violet eyes.
"*giggle* you know you shouldn't fight you two*giggle*"Said one with a childishly sweet voice her eyes hidden from view.
"ENOUGH OF THIS!"the golden eyes glaring into blue before turning back to a small pool in the center of the room.

Back on the right side.

"So all we need to do is decipher what they know of the robots' creator and compile it with information on our residents that we know to get a match."Sally explained for what seemed like the hundredth time.
"Whatever you say Sal?"Sonic replied,For what too seemed like the hundredth time.
"*sigh*So Kina what do you know about their creator?"She said,quickly changing the subject.
"Well..the history books say that he was a great man of equal genius to the Empirial,..They were even said to look a good deal alike,almost like twins but opposite as they come."
Sally thought of everyone they knew that could fit such a description.
"hey,Sal!"
Sally looked toward Sonic"What is it?"She replied obviously aggravated.
"From what she said it sounds a bit like Dr.Kintobor from anti-mobius...I mean who else could fit the bill?"Sally grinned widely
" That's It Sonic!...Sometimes you really surprise me with your logic."Sonic smiled briefly"Hey!"He replied slightly offended.
"Now the question is how do we contact him?"Sally remarked in thought.
"Maybe you do not have to."Said a familiar voice from the doorway.
"Dr.Kintobor! what are you doing here?!"Sonic said startled by his sudden appearance."I came here searching for my missing Nurse bots...and unfortunately found them attacking people under your 'Eggman's' command...I had hoped to stop them but my special override code has been tampered with."The doctor sighed in defeat."Doctor,you do not think you can provide us with some information on them so we can get rid of them do you?"Sally asked hopefully.Dr.Kintobor shook his head,"I'm not sure what any information I give you will help princess,you see they have been totally refitted and changed internally...They are no longer my design...I'm afraid the only one who has the information you seek is Eggman himself."
Sonic snarled,"Like that's gonna happen doc,It's not like we're best buds or something."
The group looked to one another despairingly,it seemed as if all would be lost and Mobius would once more fall under the rule of a mad tyrant.Was there nothing they could do but watch as everything they knew was destroyed?
"Hell No! If I'm going Down it will be fighting!"Sonic cried jumping up with his usual confidence shining through."I'm with you!"Kita too stood with a determined sneer,and clenched fist raised.Sally,Kintobor and Kina stared for a minute.When with a fire in their eyes Sally and Kina stood as well."I could possibly help medically if you are truly going to do this."Kintober said with a small smile.Sally grinned back and nodded,Then turned to the others with a knowing look on her face,"Let's go rally the Troops Guys we have work to do!"


Yay! end of chapter three hope you like it...if you have any ideas feel free to tell me,Until then.

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Posted 24 April 2009 - 02:20 PM

I'm bumping this post to say this story is going on hold for a little bit due to writers block...I hate the little plot bunny he always ends up running away when you need him and coming back with a new story in hand.
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