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flame the bird tell if its s**t or okay

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Post icon  Posted 25 March 2009 - 08:10 PM

NiGHTS Noob, on Mar 25 2009, 07:03 PM, said:

Also, your example post needs to be a full on paragraph with an example of either character interaction or fighting style, or both.
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thats where i get confused
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Posted 25 March 2009 - 08:30 PM

Basically, it means that you need a longer Example Post, a detailed one, mind you. Also, it needs to not be IM style. Example:

Jake: "I'm going to sit down now!"
*Jake sits down*

Yes, an awkward example, but an example, nonetheless.

Be like... *Shudder* This:

Jake yells loudly and proudly, "I'm going to sit down now!". As he finished the sentence, he sat down.

Damn. I feel embarrassed now.
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Posted 25 March 2009 - 09:06 PM

is it better now :D
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Posted 25 March 2009 - 09:11 PM

No, NOT that way. The latter is the correct one. Also, you might want to correct the spelling, and try to use the best grammar you are able to use. This isn't an instant messenger. This is a forum. Take your time.
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Posted 25 March 2009 - 09:13 PM

Hypothermial-Moron, on Mar 25 2009, 09:11 PM, said:

The latter is the correct one.
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what dose that mean?
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Posted 25 March 2009 - 09:19 PM

Capitalize guy! Kvitne is a moderator so fighting with him won't end well. Plus, when you type in the reply box, please right click any words underlined in red.
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Posted 25 March 2009 - 09:22 PM

He's been warned, and knows what to do, so leave him alone about it for now.
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Posted 25 March 2009 - 09:22 PM

Ok, sorry for all the fuss. :(
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Posted 26 March 2009 - 01:00 AM

NiGHTS Noob, on Mar 25 2009, 11:03 AM, said:

OK, so anyways, I'm here now.

Your character is actually pretty close rule wise. Only a couple problems.

Your weapons can have ten stat points max (2 less for each special abilities), and there's really no reason to not use up all your points. Other than that, the first weapon needs some fixing up. Neither of the special abilities are real special abilities. Don't worry though, you can shoot multiple shots in one turn with any ranged weapon, you just need to pay 2 agility for each shot.

Also, your example post needs to be a full on paragraph with an example of either character interaction or fighting style, or both.
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When were you made mod of roleplaying?
Nor being sarcastic, just curious.
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Posted 26 March 2009 - 02:51 AM

He's a mod for this forum only. He can edit topics and such, and can approve characters. It's been this way for a while, since Pyro disappeared.

I miss Pyro. :(
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Posted 26 March 2009 - 06:50 AM

dragon jake, on Mar 25 2009, 09:13 PM, said:

what dose that mean?
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The second.
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Posted 26 March 2009 - 11:15 AM

What is a PM?
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Posted 26 March 2009 - 01:03 PM

How is that related to your character? It's a Personal Message.
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Posted 26 March 2009 - 01:30 PM

Oh, it's just that Kvitne told me to send him PM's instead of email's, but never mind
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Posted 26 March 2009 - 10:27 PM

Kvitne, on Mar 25 2009, 10:51 PM, said:

I miss Pyro. :(
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Me too. I've just been so busy lately that I don't have the patience I need to be a good mod for this section. Maybe when things clear up for both Pyro and I we can make an awesome RP comeback of Super Special Awesome-ness.
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