[singlemaiden]

I got a reply that said I needed something more creative like, sonic verses nazis so I’m doing it.
Sonic’s P.O.V.
I was running past the gray suits. Always gray. The Nazis knew I was there but they couldn’t do anything about it. I was too fast. A building was coming up ahead and I couldn’t stop in time so I ran up it the feel of gravity leaving me was extraordinary, like... running up a wall at the speed of sound:) I jumped into the room I needed and took the briefcase out I ran out. On the way, I encountered some robots. Looks like they made some sort of a deal with eggman because only he could make this sort of thing and sell it to the Nazis. Any way
When I looked to find out if the did I saw a tag on that said "Nazis!!!1!1!!!" jeez serious typo.

I jumped over them and curled up in a little spiky ball and sliced right through them. B I N G O. it was amazing how id cut it right in half. But they are crawling and reforming into 2.im gonna need some explosives. BIG explosives.

Nazis 101:
DO NOT cut their equipment in half. They’ll be two then.

I took one of their own explosives and tied it two the two robots so that once they separated they would blow up. I ran for cover and I heard a noise...BOOOOOOOM!!!!!!1!!!1!!!!!(By the way, I’m doing the !!1!1!! Thing on purpose because I’m making fun of the person who did the reply I was talking about earlier ) I turned around and there they were, smoldering heaps of molten metal, coming toward me. Seriously, these guys are invulnerable!!1!1!!( ) I decided to make a run for it. The computer in the briefcase would supply everything we needed to know about the Nazis and their weapons. I turned around and there were more of them. Maybe about 2,000. Eggman has really outdone himself this time. Too bad they’re in the Nazi’s control. I make my way around them not bothering to stop and fight them because I knew it was a moot point. Then I ran. About 2 min later I ran up a wall to Chris's roof and delivered the briefcase. We were going to need it in this war. Even me, Sonic the Hedgehog, will have trouble with this war.

[singlemaiden]

HAHAHAHAHA!!1!!1!!
BOOYAA!!!1!!1!!! i happen to be making fun of a certain reveiw that i got saying that i have bad grammer and that im not creative. IN YOUR FACE!!!1!!1!!! anyway this story is dedicated to that reveiw that suggested writing about sonic versus the Nazis. the "!!!1!!1!!!" is not a typo but a way of making fun of that reveiw. i did not like it as you can see. BYE BYE!!!1!!1!!!

[Kvitne]

singlemaiden, on Mar 9 2009, 06:04 PM, said:

i happen to be making fun of a certain reveiw that i got saying that i  have bad grammer and that im not creative. IN YOUR FACE!!!1!!1!!!

Failure.

[singlemaiden]

well sooorry! Mr. Moderater! i cant help it when im mad! it wasnt even constructive criticism! it was just plain mean! of course i have bad grammar! i dont care i have bad grammar! and him insulting my creativeness? he shouldnt insult the creativeness of my plot if he doesnt even know what it is yet! if you ask me, he got what he deserved.

[Kvitne]

I'm just saying you did nothing but prove his point. Also, using good grammar and spelling is a part of the rules here, so if you want to stick around you should fix that right up.

Also, I already spoke to you about capitalizing your sentences and such, don't make me do it again.

EDIT: I just went back and read what you said was "just plain mean". Streak was giving you constructive criticism, you just seem to be too shortsighted to see that. I'd watch your step if I were you.

Closing this shit.