[Shock]

Well since i'm extremely bored, I will be working on a fanfiction now.

Chapter One.

"This isn't the time." Said Shadow, waving Sonic away. Shadow The Hedgehog was sitting in his room, on his bed, reading a book about Hedgehogs.

"But I really need your help." Sonic The Hedgehog begged. "Amy's hammer is stuck in a tree."

"I thought you hated Amy." Shadow said, glancing up from his book.

"I do." Sonic replied. "But she said she will make me breakfast for the next three months if I get her hammer out."

"I'm not going to help you, Sonic." Shadow said, looking back at his book.

"Can I have your shoes so I can fly up to get the hammer?" Sonic asked, looking at Shadow's shoes.

"No." Shadow said. Sonic didn't listen. Instead, he grabbed the shoes off Shadow's feet, and ran out of the house.

"Damnit." Shadow said. He cat-eared the page he was on in his book, then slid off the bed and walked out of the room. He walked outside, and leaned against the side of the house as he watched Sonic put on the jet-boots and flick a switch to turn them on. Sonic floated off the ground, then he picked up speed. He started zooming all over the place, involuntarily, and bumped into Amy's hammer that was still in the tree. It fell out of the tree and hit the ground. Shadow walked over to it and picked it up. He aimed it at sonic's feet. They weren't a easy target with him flying all over the place. Shadow finally threw the hammer. It missed Sonic's feet, and Sonic did a somersault in mid-air. The hammer's handle hit him in the chest, and he flew backwards into another tree. His back smashed into it, and the boots fell off his feet in the collision. Shadow ran and picked them up. He quickly put them on his feet and ran back inside the house.

As he ran through the doorway, he bumped into Tails, who was just walking out.

"Hi, Shadow." Tails said, looking up at Shadow.

"Yeah, whatever." Shadow said, flatly. He walked past tails and into the hall. Then he walked into his bedroom and sat on his bed again.

"AHHHHHHHHH!" A voice screamed from the front yard. Then Shadow heard a loud 'CRASH!'.

"Damnit, what now?" Shadow groaned, and slid off the bed again. He walked out of his room and then through the hallway. He saw Tails and Knuckles sprint outside of the house in a panic. Shadow ran through the open doorway that led to the front door, and stopped. He saw sonic lying in a thornbush next to the house.

"You!" Sonic said, pointing at Shadow. But moving just made his predicament worse. "Ow!" Sonic screamed. Knuckles and Tails ran to him and pulled him out of the bush. He was stuck everywhere with thorns.

[Game_Over]

Rating: 3/5

[Shock]

Game_Over, on Mar 1 2009, 11:13 AM, said:

Rating: 3/5

Thanks. I know you're probably the only one who's going to post here, because everyone else would like to see me dead.

[Kvitne]

First off, stop pity posting. If you stop caring what other people think of you and post like a normal person and people will stop hating on you.

Second off, watch the length of your writing. You're just barely over the 400 word limit. If you're gonna continue this piece I'd suggest longer chapters.

[black heart the hedgehog]

Reading a book on hedgehogs........hmmmm now what could that be?

[Game_Over]

Shock, on Mar 2 2009, 02:47 AM, said:

Thanks. I know you're probably the only one who's going to post here, because everyone else would like to see me dead.

I would like to see you dead aswell...haha jk.