[Blue_Blur95]

My first Fanfiction. Constructive comments are welcomed.

Chapter/Part 1

The year 11,253, deep space. Scourge the Hedgehog and his girlfriend Fiona Fox are aboard the Galactic star, Scourge's ship.
"Scourgey, Scourgey-baby are you here?" a voice called.
"Yeah, I'm here Fiona." a male replied, turning his chair to face her.
A first look at Scourge could tell you a lot about him. He had a devilishly handsome face with gleaming Aqua-blue eyes and bright green fur. His attire resembled that of a futuristic biker, a jet black leather jacket embroided with orange flames and simple, green boots with a black trim.
Scourge was silent a moment as he studied the fox in front of him. He loved Fiona dearly and would do anything for her. He loved her for he beauty and personality, but mostly the beauty part. And boy was she hot! Fiery red orange skin and deep red hair which fanned out on her forehead. On this occasion she was dressed entirely in black. Knee high boots, a tiny miniskirt and fingerless leather gloves.
"Listen baby," Fiona said cuddling up to her spiky boyfriend. "I've been looking at the maps of this galaxy but I can't find where we are. It's been a while since we passed any planets. I'm getting worried."
"Chill out," Scourge replied, flashing her a grin. "I know exactly where we are with the help of this." Scourge produced a small black remote and pointed it at the ship's computer pressing a button on it.
A 3D map appeared on the screen. "I was born on a planet near here," Scourge continued. "Called Teradark, I'd love to see it again." Fiona smiled at him. "So I can crush every last Mobian who lives on it!" he growled.
"W-what? Why Scourge? They're your people. You’re...family." Fiona replied, shocked.
"They abandoned me at birth," Scourge said angrily slamming his fist on the arm of the chair. "Sent me away to live with a bunch of psychopathic Freedom Fighters thinking I'd make a difference to the world. Pah! No-one tells me what to do. So I left when I was eight. I managed to stitch together a life for myself."
"So you never thought to tell me this, until now?" Fiona said. "Look I know people have their secrets but I never thought..." Fiona trailed off into silence. "I've got stuff to do so I'll leave you to your thoughts." She went to stand up but Scourge grabbed her elbow.
"Hey babe where you goin'? I thought we could have a little me and you time."
Fiona sniffed. She always softened when Scourge called her babe. She gave him a warm smile and then embraced him.
Just after their happy moment a large force hit the side of the ship, causing Fiona to fall on the floor.
"You okay?" Scourge asked her.
"Yeah, I think," she replied nursing her arm.
"Warning, warning unknown ship detected," a computer voice said.
"Uh-oh this can't be good. Fiona, set the controls to automatic. Do it!" Scourge barked and Fiona jumped to her feet.
But before she could three, huge robots transported themselves onto the ship. The largest one pointed its weapon at Scourge and said "Come with us or I will kill you where you stand and I will not feel any remorse."
"Okay, okay I surrender," Scourge said, almost happily.
Fiona's face was twisted with shock. Scourge caught her eye and gave her a private wink.
Holding up his black gloved hands he said simply "Chaos spear" destroying them.
"C'mon Fi, we gotta go. Now!" Scourge yelled as Fiona leaped into his arms.
The hedgehog and fox raced out of the door and through many winding corridors that were dimly lit, overlooking the black depths of space.
After ten minutes, Scourge stopped and put Fiona down. He ran a hand through his quills and smiled sweetly at her showing his sharp teeth.
"Wow that was great! I've been waiting to soften my knuckles on something for months."
Fiona shoved him, hard. "This is horrible," she cried on the verge of tears. "How can we escape?"
"We need to get to the escape pods. I don't know who wants us but we're not sticking around to find out. I love you Fiona." He gave her a small squeeze then pulled her closer, into a kiss. "I love you too Scourgey."
"Now let's go." he grabbed her hand and sped off again. Unfortunately at the end there were two robots.
"Oh shi-," Scourge started. A robot picked Fiona up in a large metal claw. She struggled and screamed for Scourge.
"If you harm her you bastard, I'll give you another degree of hell." Scourge said softly. There was no mistaking the steely tone in his voice.
He heard a noise behind him. Scourge whipped his head round only to discover yet another android. The robot karate chopped the hedgehog in the back and Scourge plunged into an unconscious sleep.

Scourge the Hedgehog and Fiona Fox copyrighted etc SEGA/Archie. I do not own them.

This post has been edited by Blue_Blur95: 19 February 2009 - 07:53 PM

[Scourge]

FUNNY... I DONT REMEMBER DOIN ANY OF THIS!

PREPARE FOR A LAWSUIT, CHUMP!

seriously though, Welcome to SOL, im a Scourge fan myself, but I dont usually do the stupid-ass role-playing like that...

[singlemaiden]

[FONT=Optima][SIZE=1][COLOR=orange] okaaay. i liked it but scourge seemed a little out of character. either way. [SIZE=14]IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!![SIZE=1]okay im done

[Shock]

singlemaiden, on Mar 6 2009, 02:13 PM, said:

okaaay. i liked it but scourge seemed a little out of character. either way.
IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!okay im done  

Please use the "Close all Tags" button when your adding the tags.

This post has been edited by Shock: 10 March 2009 - 08:00 PM

[Kvitne]

Okay dude, it's been said multiple times now. I'm pretty sure she's got the idea.

Good lord, now I know how the mods felt when I was doing this.

[Tragedy]

Pics or it didn't happen, Kvitne. I just can't see that happening.

[???????]

Robert's name for Kvitne back then was Mall Cop Kvitne. That, or something very close. In the past, I think Kvitne corrected people way more than anyone ever did or will.

Hey, don't be makin' that angry face at me, Kvitne. I'm just tellin' it like it is.

[Tragedy]

Oh, I thought he meant he was doing the same things that singlemaiden was doing...

[Kvitne]

???????, on Mar 10 2009, 03:22 PM, said:

Robert's name for Kvitne back then was Mall Cop Kvitne. That, or something very close. In the past, I think Kvitne corrected people way more than anyone ever did or will.

Hey, don't be makin' that angry face at me, Kvitne. I'm just tellin' it like it is.

Oh, I can't stay mad at you, you cool cat.

[Tragedy]

Yeah, it's so cool when you use that emote, Daddy-Os.

[Scourge]

I couldnt get past the first sentence... What the hell would Scourge be doing piloting a space sh-...

I just remembered that time Sonic spent all those comics after the "Quantum Dial" fiasco... silly Archie!

I know its a fan-FICTION, but couldnt it be more... Scourgey?

[Shock]

I'm gay. Gay for Shmeckie., on Mar 10 2009, 03:46 PM, said:

I couldnt get past the first sentence... What the hell would Scourge be doing piloting a space sh-...

I just remembered that time Sonic spent all those comics after the "Quantum Dial" fiasco... silly Archie!

I know its a fan-FICTION, but couldnt it be more... I'm gay. Gay for Shmeckiey?

Fixed. And im going to agree with Used-To-Be-Scourge there.

[Green]

After the first 2 sentences I glanced at your gender. But it was a good fanfic, as fanfics go.

[Shock]

Green, on Mar 12 2009, 03:13 PM, said:

After the first 2 sentences I glanced at your gender. But it was a good fanfic, as fanfics go.

i didn't even look at her gender untill you just mentioned it. Man, i'm lame.