[Metal Vector]

Hi this is my first comic (well not really but my first posted here) anyway here’s the first comic



also note that I don’t have Photoshop, I use paint, also I will respect all opinions so don’t just say I’m good to be nice, give me you’re honest opinion.

[Cookie the Kitsune]

Honest opinion: It looks good and there a plot to it which makes it cool automatically!

[SuperSonicComix]

lol! Good one. Id use MS paint, but awesome! This topic reeks of Cookie..

This post has been edited by SuperSonicComix: 17 January 2009 - 11:02 PM

[Cookie the Kitsune]

SuperSonicComix, on Jan 17 2009, 06:02 PM, said:

lol! Good one. Id use MS paint, but awesome! This topic reeks of Cookie..

Well, I'm sorry for posting a comment.

[SuperSonicComix]

I was kidding. Everything i say comes out the wrong way today. Havent had a good day.

[Metal Vector]

Cookie the Kitsune, on Jan 17 2009, 04:02 PM, said:

Honest opinion: It looks good and there a plot to it which makes it cool automatically!

Thanks, but I would also like some Feed back to help me improve.

[SuperSonicComix]

You dont need to improve! Just continue! I like how you clashed the made up-backgrounds and sprite backgrounds. But if you want critiscism, then use MS Paint and upload it with imagehost.org and use the forum link code and just paste it into a post. DO NOT USE PHOTOBUCKET, ITS LIKE TEH ULTIMATE VIRUS-GIVER!!..

[Metal Vector]

SuperSonicComix, on Jan 17 2009, 04:02 PM, said:

lol! Good one. Id use MS paint, but awesome! This topic reeks of Cookie..

Well I did use MS paint I just call it paint, and thanks, got any feed back to help me improve?

[Cookie the Kitsune]

Okay well.... how about this: try saving it as a png file it comes out less blurry when posting.

[Metal Vector]

Cookie the Kitsune, on Jan 17 2009, 04:17 PM, said:

Okay well.... how about this: try saving it as a png file it comes out less blurry when posting.

Thank you, I will do that in the future.

[SuperSonicComix]

Im in a better mood now. Anyone want popcorn? ^^

[Cookie the Kitsune]

Oh, now you like the popcorn stuff!=]
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*munches*

This post has been edited by Cookie the Kitsune: 17 January 2009 - 11:25 PM

[SuperSonicComix]

When did i not like it? *Munches*

[Fireblaze]

As you two may have expected, I'm here n' stuff.
Let's see...
You're doing much better than a lot of people when starting off. The character's positions are consistant, sprites are well placed, and backgrounds go well with what they place is.
As for improvment, I'd reccomend to not use made-up backgrounds unless they are close in quality to others, or you can't find something close enough, or what you're trying to express you can't really do that way. The last panel clashes a lot with the others because of background.
Otherwise, I'd change up how you do the bubbles. I would change the tails so they aren't so hard to see on darker backgrounds - like a short stub tail that points to the character instead of a black line connecting them.
That's all I can think of. Maybe I'm tired or something.

Cookie, Super...D=

This post has been edited by Fireblaze: 17 January 2009 - 11:32 PM

[SuperSonicComix]

What do you want blaze?

[Metal Vector]

Fireblaze, on Jan 17 2009, 04:32 PM, said:

As you two may have expected, I'm here n' stuff.
Let's see...
You're doing much better than a lot of people when starting off.  The character's positions are consistant, sprites are well placed, and backgrounds go well with what they place is.
As for improvment, I'd reccomend to not use made-up backgrounds unless they are close in quality to others, or you can't find something close enough, or what you're trying to express you can't really do that way.  The last panel clashes a lot with the others because of background.
Otherwise, I'd change up how you do the bubbles.  I would change the tails so they aren't so hard to see on darker backgrounds - like a short stub tail that points to the character instead of a black line connecting them.
That's all I can think of.  Maybe I'm tired or something.

Cookie, Super...D=

Thanks, Ill do that.

[Cookie the Kitsune]

Sorry Blaze.

[Fireblaze]

SuperSonicComix, on Jan 17 2009, 03:37 PM, said:

What do you want blaze?

Just thinking, wishing you two wouldn't snipe each other or argue and stuff.
Just that almost all of the posts I've seen between you two has been arguing. Makes me D= a little.

[SuperSonicComix]

We were being nice..For once.

[Cookie the Kitsune]

Cookie the Kitsune, on Jan 17 2009, 06:39 PM, said:

Sorry Blaze.