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Sonic and Tails crazy adventures It involves Sonic and Time Travel

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Posted 17 January 2009 - 10:57 PM

Hi this is my first comic (well not really but my first posted here) anyway here’s the first comic

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also note that I don’t have Photoshop, I use paint, also I will respect all opinions so don’t just say I’m good to be nice, give me you’re honest opinion.
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:02 PM

Honest opinion: It looks good and there a plot to it which makes it cool automatically!
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Cinder,Shock,Strike,Light,death,Blaze,Fang,Tsunami,Cookie,cheese duck,Ghost,Frizo,Sword,Eternal,Firestorm
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If you open a door for someone and they don't say thank you, either ignore the fact that they didn't say thank you or slam their head in the door over and over and over and over.
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:02 PM

lol! Good one. Id use MS paint, but awesome! This topic reeks of Cookie..

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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:10 PM

SuperSonicComix, on Jan 17 2009, 06:02 PM, said:

lol! Good one. Id use MS paint, but awesome! This topic reeks of Cookie..
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Well, I'm sorry for posting a comment. <_<
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Cinder,Shock,Strike,Light,death,Blaze,Fang,Tsunami,Cookie,cheese duck,Ghost,Frizo,Sword,Eternal,Firestorm
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If you open a door for someone and they don't say thank you, either ignore the fact that they didn't say thank you or slam their head in the door over and over and over and over.
Little Kid: ._.
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:12 PM

I was kidding. Everything i say comes out the wrong way today. Havent had a good day.
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:14 PM

Cookie the Kitsune, on Jan 17 2009, 04:02 PM, said:

Honest opinion: It looks good and there a plot to it which makes it cool automatically!
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Thanks, but I would also like some Feed back to help me improve.
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:16 PM

You dont need to improve! Just continue! I like how you clashed the made up-backgrounds and sprite backgrounds. But if you want critiscism, then use MS Paint and upload it with imagehost.org and use the forum link code and just paste it into a post. DO NOT USE PHOTOBUCKET, ITS LIKE TEH ULTIMATE VIRUS-GIVER!!..
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:16 PM

SuperSonicComix, on Jan 17 2009, 04:02 PM, said:

lol! Good one. Id use MS paint, but awesome! This topic reeks of Cookie..
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Well I did use MS paint I just call it paint, and thanks, got any feed back to help me improve?
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:17 PM

Okay well.... how about this: try saving it as a png file it comes out less blurry when posting.
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Cinder,Shock,Strike,Light,death,Blaze,Fang,Tsunami,Cookie,cheese duck,Ghost,Frizo,Sword,Eternal,Firestorm
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If you open a door for someone and they don't say thank you, either ignore the fact that they didn't say thank you or slam their head in the door over and over and over and over.
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:18 PM

Cookie the Kitsune, on Jan 17 2009, 04:17 PM, said:

Okay well.... how about this: try saving it as a png file it comes out less blurry when posting.
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Thank you, I will do that in the future.
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:21 PM

Im in a better mood now. Anyone want popcorn? ^^
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:22 PM

Oh, now you like the popcorn stuff!=]
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:24 PM

When did i not like it? *Munches*
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:32 PM

As you two may have expected, I'm here n' stuff.
Let's see...
You're doing much better than a lot of people when starting off. The character's positions are consistant, sprites are well placed, and backgrounds go well with what they place is.
As for improvment, I'd reccomend to not use made-up backgrounds unless they are close in quality to others, or you can't find something close enough, or what you're trying to express you can't really do that way. The last panel clashes a lot with the others because of background.
Otherwise, I'd change up how you do the bubbles. I would change the tails so they aren't so hard to see on darker backgrounds - like a short stub tail that points to the character instead of a black line connecting them.
That's all I can think of. Maybe I'm tired or something.

Cookie, Super...D=

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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:37 PM

What do you want blaze?
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:37 PM

Fireblaze, on Jan 17 2009, 04:32 PM, said:

As you two may have expected, I'm here n' stuff.
Let's see...
You're doing much better than a lot of people when starting off.  The character's positions are consistant, sprites are well placed, and backgrounds go well with what they place is.
As for improvment, I'd reccomend to not use made-up backgrounds unless they are close in quality to others, or you can't find something close enough, or what you're trying to express you can't really do that way.  The last panel clashes a lot with the others because of background.
Otherwise, I'd change up how you do the bubbles.  I would change the tails so they aren't so hard to see on darker backgrounds - like a short stub tail that points to the character instead of a black line connecting them.
That's all I can think of.  Maybe I'm tired or something.

Cookie, Super...D=
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Thanks, Ill do that.
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:39 PM

Sorry Blaze.
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:40 PM

SuperSonicComix, on Jan 17 2009, 03:37 PM, said:

What do you want blaze?
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Just thinking, wishing you two wouldn't snipe each other or argue and stuff.
Just that almost all of the posts I've seen between you two has been arguing. Makes me D= a little.
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:42 PM

We were being nice..For once.
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Posted 17 January 2009 - 11:45 PM

Cookie the Kitsune, on Jan 17 2009, 06:39 PM, said:

Sorry Blaze.
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Cinder,Shock,Strike,Light,death,Blaze,Fang,Tsunami,Cookie,cheese duck,Ghost,Frizo,Sword,Eternal,Firestorm
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