[Psycho the Hedgehog]

Info
Name:Psycho
Age:17
Gender:Male
Species:Hedgehog
Fur/feather/scale/skin:Bright green fur
Eyes:Red
Height:5 ft 4 in
Build:105 lbs
Attire:Wears a shirt that is usually light brown but changes colors according to his mood(IE. if he's angry it changes red). He also wears green pants with a Darkrai(Pokemon) picture on it.

Weapons/Items/Powers/Abilities:

1)Blade of Shadows/Dark Blade (Chosen wielder.)
Offense: 4
Defense: 4
Specialties: Indestructible

2)A dark purple amethyst (Chosen wielder. Allows him to shoot dark beams.)

3)Shoots dark beams (Uses 1 strength for each beam)

4)Shadow Psycho (Powered up version of Psycho. Reddish orange fur, gloves are a completely black color, and his eyes are completely white. Loses vitality gradually if he is powered up. He reverts back and faints when vitality runs out.)

Stats:

Strength:
15
Agility:
10
Vitality:
15
Lesser skills:
Running

Character Development

Backstory: His dad's side of the family is the echidna tribe. His mom's side of the family is the hedgehog family of shadows. Psycho's dad somehow survived the attack of Perfect Chaos. He was strong enough to walk until he met a young hedgehog lady. They met each other and this lady tended to his dad's wounds. They eventually fell in love during the time they've been together and got married. Psycho's mom now moved in with his dad and they had a child and named him Psycho. He did not know about the powers he had until he was 13. He then trained his powers and went into the Dark World at age 15. He found the Dark Blade, took it out of the Dark World, and became the new Prince of Shadows.

Personality: Psycho just enjoys fighting all the time. He constantly trains to keep his powers in tip-top shape. He is also hasty at times but will go out of his way to rescue friends.

Example post: I have been wandering the barren wilderness for a long time enduring the harsh conditions. I suddenly saw many of Eggman's robots dashing towards me. "Why would those pieces of scrap metal be out here? No matter, I can take all of them out", I thought. As I readied my blade I waited for them to get closer. Then as they came as close as they can without seeing me I rushed towards then and starting slashing wildly at all of them. Every single one was slashed to dices. I was done with the last bunch when I saw Eggman on his machine. "What are you doing here Eggman?!", I shouted. Eggman replied ,"I see you have destroyed all of my robots. I'm gonna destroy you once and for all now!" But as he was done talking he was already flying through the air and suddenly I saw red and blue silhouettes.

This post has been edited by Psycho the Hedgehog: 10 January 2009 - 10:24 PM

[Movetron]

"...family of darkness..."

How "original".

No offense, lol.

[HTM]

Oh. My. Goodness. God. What. The. Fuck?

That aside, let me, constructively, critize:

First of all, it would be a crazy and respectless parent, to be calling their child "Psycho". If you didn't know, Psycho is an abbrevation of "Psychopath", which is, in an offensive terms, a bad, very bad, thing. And any middle names? Last? No?

There are no hybrids in the official canon. So, he's not fullblooded hedgehog, as the Species slot states. And no one survived the "Chaos accident" or whatever. Well, maybe Knuckles, but he is the LAST echidna, and Tikal, well, that's pretty obvious she survived as well.

Can't argue with the fur, nor eyes, nor height and build, but attire. "Wears a shirt that is usually light brown."?! So his shirt changes colour? Man, pretty awesome shirt then. Obviously, I know you mean that he changes shirts, but you could explain it properly.

Who the heck is Darkrai? Seriously?

And as for everything else. It sucks and is really bad. Too much dark. And if you didn't know, the title "Prince of Darkness" is already taken by Ozzy Ozbourne. So no PoD's for you, my fiery friend!

[Movetron]

Hypothermial-Moron, on Jan 10 2009, 03:11 PM, said:

Oh. My. Goodness. God. What. The. Fuck?

That aside, let me, constructively, critize:

First of all, it would be a crazy and respectless parent, to be calling their child "Psycho". If you didn't know, Psycho is an abbrevation of "Psychopath", which is, in an offensive terms, a bad, very bad, thing. And any middle names? Last? No?

There are no hybrids in the official canon. So, he's not fullblooded hedgehog, as the Species slot states. And no one survived the "Chaos accident" or whatever. Well, maybe Knuckles, but he is the LAST echidna, and Tikal, well, that's pretty obvious she survived as well.

Can't argue with the fur, nor eyes, nor height and build, but attire. "Wears a shirt that is usually light brown."?! So his shirt changes colour? Man, pretty awesome shirt then. Obviously, I know you mean that he changes shirts, but you could explain it properly.

Who the heck is Darkrai? Seriously?

And as for everything else. It sucks and is really bad. Too much dark. And if you didn't know, the title "Prince of Darkness" is already taken by Ozzy Ozbourne. So no PoD's for you, my fiery friend!

There IS a such thing as color changing shirts.

I think they were invented in Korea. o.o

*only read it on dA*

[HTM]

Digital-Duchess, on Jan 10 2009, 09:16 PM, said:

There IS a such thing as color changing shirts.

I think they were invented in Korea. o.o

*only read it on dA*

Holy shit. I'd like one of those then.

[NiGHTS Noob]

Psycho can also stand for Psychokinesis or Psychokinetic, same thing is telekinesis. Your right though, it is a pretty odd name, I can't see parents naming him that since it would probably get confused with Psychopath.

As for your slots, which if you follow what HM said, will be the only thing left to fix.

You should read up on weapons in the weapons topic for your blade. Basically you get ten points to divide among offense, defense, and abilities, but your still going to want to read up on it to learn everything.

You can't enter a super form, you can enter a powered up form, though I'd recommend something other than an emerald. Your form and ability to transform into it can be grouped into one slot, however all powered up forms need a drawback so that it's not an overpowered skill. Every + needs a - to even it out, for buffs it's the fact that they take up slots, but for attacks or moves, it's that they take up slots and cost something.

Powers of Darkness is non descriptive. You need to give him an (as in one) ability from it and a cost for it depending on what it is.

[Movetron]

Hypothermial-Moron, on Jan 10 2009, 05:17 PM, said:

Holy shit. I'd like one of those then.

Me too. D:

They're like, really expensive...o.o