[SuperSonicComix]

Hey. This FanFiction is about a new Fan Character i made. Shock the Hedgehog. If i DO poste a image, itll be a recolor, sorry. =[ But its about him and his friends, and his adventures. After a LOOONG time in roleplaying forums, i think i have a good story. If you want, poste Bios. Id be happy to use them in my story! The next post will begin the story. =D

[SuperSonicComix]

Shock The Hedgehog was walking through the forest. He was feeling a strange feeling. A new feeling. Ever since that day when he was captured by
Eggman, he's felt strange. His friends look at him like hes worthless. They j-
ust walk by, completely ignoring him. These stares, and the cruelty of life has
made him stronger. Every time someone stared at him, or spat at, the feeling
grew bigger. Now it was like a rapid booming inside of him. He couldn't help it,
he smiled. He began to run. Then...He shot off the ground.

"Huh!?" Shock said in surprise. "Im-...FLYING!" Shock's smile grew bigger.
Now it was a huge grin. "One problem," He thought. "I dont know how to steer!"
He was about to crash into a tree. The tree seemed to be rocketing towards him.
Exactly 5 seconds before he collided with his doom, he imagined himself flying a-
way from the tree. He had closed his eyes, while imagining that, and when he opened them...He was flying to the left. He was now flying above a town. "Huh."
He said, confused. "Where am i? How long have i been flying?" He was not able
to answer those questions. He looked down to see people staring at him. His
grin returned. He waved-And flew right into a wall.

[SuperSonicComix]

On with the story. =D

In another part of town, a rabbit named cloudy was looking up at the sky. "I wish i could fly like a bird!" She cried, to noone in particular. Everyone was used to her constant hopes, wishes, and dreams. "If this one wish is granted, i will be happy for my whole life." Though she wished for much, not one wish was granted. Then, she saw a flash of yellow bolt through the sky. "A star??" She pondered. "Strange. Wait a minute...Stars dont have fur! Thats a hedgehog! Hedgehogs dont fly!!!" She continued to stare. Then her eyes opened wide as the bolt of yellow hit the wall right next to the building she was standing at. "Woah! Who are you?" She asked the strange new fox. "Whats your name? Are you ok? Howd you get here? Were you just flying? Foxes dont fly! Hey, are you even listening to me? Oh no, your not even conscious!" The questions dropped from her mouth.

"Ooof.." The hedgehog replied. "Im alive??..." He looked up to see a rabbit standing over him. She was very pretty, and the hedgehog's eyes practically turned to hearts. "Are you-...A angel??" The rabbit only smiled and offered a hand, to help him up. Shock took it, and he felt a rush of warmth invade him. "Uhm.."

"Shhh! Dont let anyone hear you. Hedgehogs aren't allowwed here. I'll explain it all once we get to my house. I live alone. How old are you?" The rabbit asked.

"15." Shock answered. (You did figure out it was Shock, right??)

"Im 15 too. Follow me, quick." The rabbit, Cloudy, said. Shock obeyed, and they ran through alleys, Shock holding onto Cloudy's hand for dear life. They finally reached a small house. Cloudy opened the back door, and they both walked into a poorly decorated house. Not that it was a bad-looking house. It was nice, but not beautiful nice.

"Wow.." Shock said.

Ill write more later.

This post has been edited by SuperSonicComix: 12 January 2009 - 08:21 PM

[SuperSonicComix]

"Whats your name?" Shock asked , after being seated. "Mines Shock."

"Mines cloudy." Cloudy replied, blushing.

"Thats a pretty name. Just like you." Shock said. He couldnt tell if Cloudy liked him, but by the way she smiled, his hopes were high.

"Er..Thanks." She felt her face growing very hot. She changed the subject. "I hate to say this, but you might have to leave this town.." Shock felt like he might break down crying. But what she said next made him perk up.

"But...Uhmm..Can i stay with you, once you leave?" She asked, embarissed by her own question.

"Wow!" He thought. He didnt need to be asked twice. "Yeah. I dont mind, i guess." He said aloud. He played it cool. He knew he couldnt jump right in with something like: Yeah! That'd be awesome! Or something like that.

"I like him alot already! Hes really cute!" Cloudy thought. But she kept a straight face and said next: "Thanks. I dont like this town much. The mayor is mean."

Shock did not inquire anymore of the subject, and they set off at once. "Cloudy?"

"Yes?" Cloudy asked

"Do you have a...Did you ever have a..Special friend?" Shock said, trying to find the right words.

"No." Cloudy replied, already thinking what he was going to ask next. But to her surprise, he said nothing else, but only smiled, and continued walking forward into the forest again. "Maybe hes waiting for the right moment to ask.." She thought, dreamily. Not to long after, they were in the forest. It was getting dark, so they set up a camp inside a big hollow tree.

"Im tired. 'Night" Shock said, exhausted. He immediatly plopped down on a pile of leaves. Cloudy checked his eyes to make sure he was asleep, then she curled up next to him. Shock felt warmth, and opened his eyes. He saw cloudy, asleep, and he smiled. He then fell asleep,

[SuperSonicComix]

Shock then fell asleep, putting his head atop cloudy's back.

Sorry, i accidently got it cut off. Ill leave it as it is, and wait for comments. Once i get a few comments, i will be continuing it.

[SuperSonicComix]

Hello again. Why doesnt anyone post? ...

[Rugdog]

YOu could have put this all in one post... but whatever I ain't no Admin

[SuperSonicComix]

Sorry. I didnt know the max limit of characters. I didnt want to get really far, then have it get cut off. That wouldve sucked. Anyways, did you like it so far?

[SuperSonicComix]

And i figured id better tell you. Right now, it might not seem like a guy's story. But wait for the action. It gets better.

[KennEH!]

SuperSonicComix, on Dec 28 2008, 01:50 AM, said:

Sorry. I didnt know the max limit of characters. I didnt want to get really far, then have it get cut off.

There is none.

[SuperSonicComix]

KennEH!, on Dec 28 2008, 05:20 PM, said:

There is none.

Thanks. Great. But id really appreciate it if people stopped posting random crap and started posting about the story.

[SuperSonicComix]

Well, while i think of something to continue with, someone GOD DANG POST!

[Fireblaze]

Seems interesting, but needs some more before I can really comment. Anyways, I'm hoping it won't stay romance-y the whole time, I got enough of that with Twilight.
*VOMITVOMITVOMIT*

[SuperSonicComix]

Yes, twilight was nasty. Now i will write more.

[Cookie the Kitsune]

I wish I could buy up all the Twilight books just so I can explode them.

[SuperSonicComix]

Shock woke up. He looked around him. He looked down to see Cloudy laying beside him. He slowly stoof up, not meaning to wake her. He began to quietly walk through the forest. He thought of how far hed come. The rabbit hed met. The grace in which she ran. Beautiful. But a strange ruslting in the trees shocked him back to reality. He looked up, only to see a Badnik shooting down at him. "Hey!" Shock shouted, and then ducked into a bush, out of sight of the badnik. The badnik's eyes scanned the area. Scanning lazers came out of them. The lasers passed right over him, fortunatly. Then he dove out of the bushes, and began to follow it, silently.
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Cloudy awoke, and looked about. "Wheres Shock?" She thought. Then she heard a noise from all the bushes surrounding the Hollow Tree. Badniks! They began to roll on their wheels, out of the hiding spots, and began to close in on her. She quickly looked closely at one of them. Finding no guns, or any holes that a missile might come out of, she leapt into the air. She landed on the nearest one, and kicked it hard. Her foot only hurt a little, so she followed with a punch. The badnik exploded right beneath her, but she was too quick to be hit by it. She leapt off the moment she punched it, and was now leaping on another. Following the same tactics, she finally destroyed them all but one. "Phew!" She said, exhausted. "This is tiring." Then she heard a terrible screeching. She looked up. "Monkeys?!" She cried. Yes, reader, Monkeys. Monkeys were attacking. But not her..They began throwing coconuts at the badnik! Once the badnik exploded, they began to swing away, rather loudly. "Thanks!" She called after them. They immediatly halted. They all turned around, and nodded their heads, as if they understood. Then they began pointing in a direction. Cloudy stared in the direction, puzzled. Then a monkey with a coconut on his head opened his mouth and began to speak. If that wasnt creepy enough to Cloudy, the way he talked was enough to explode her nerves the rest of the way. He talked in perfect english. Though it is hard to remember, i will try to explain what he said as best i can.

"Your friend is that way, young rabbit. You and him are the creatures legends speak of. Hurry, though. He is following one of the worst badniks ever. One that would take a army to destroy. Go after him." The monkey said.

"Than-" She started. But she didnt get to finish. The Monkeys dissapeared into thin air.
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Shock was still following the Badnik. He was a great fighter. (Better than Cloudy, and you saw HER tactics) But then the badnik began to grow. It grew and grew untill it was as tall as the tallest tree. And those trees were dam tall! "Dammit..Wheres a rabbit when you need one?" He began to back up and hide, again, in the underbrush. Then he heard something behind him. "Crap, not another!" He murmured. But, it was NOT another one, reader. It was Cloudy herself.

"Monkeys..Prophecy..Big badnik..Trouble.." She panted. Then she fainted.

"Crap!" Shock whispered. He ran over to the limp body, and picked it up. He ran all the way back to the hollow tree. The badnik never saw him.

[SuperSonicComix]

Not done, but my fingers hurt, therefore i am taking a break.

[SuperSonicComix]

Hey cookie. What do you think, blaze?

[Cookie the Kitsune]

Hi Super! It's sounding great. I like the monkeys destroying the badnik part!^^D

This post has been edited by Cookie the Kitsune: 31 December 2008 - 06:10 PM

[SuperSonicComix]

Yes, every story/show, has to have that wise old stalker guy. In this one, i chose monkeys XD