[InTheNightlight]

Name: Michael
Age: 10 1/2
Gender: Male
Species: Kit Fox
Fur/feather/scale/skin: Greyish fur with 3 tails coloured red green and orange
Eyes: Golden Yellow
Height: 2' 5"
Build: Same as Tails but has stronger tails
Attire: Orangeish shirt, blue shorts, and an orange and green beanie

Weapons/Items/Powers/Abilities: Sometimes called "Slots". You can have up to four total.

1) Can summon a sword similar to Cloud Strife's in FF7
Offense: -5 Strength
Defense: -3 Vitality

2) Is able to use telekinesis to an advanced level(faints if used too much)that can hold enemies in place
-5 Vitality

3) Can fly and use a paraloop to tear a hole in space
-1 Agility

Stats: allocate points here. Total number of points cannot exceed 50.

Strength: 10

Agility: 10

Vitality: 10

Lesser skills: Not as good as a skill that would go in one of the four "slots", but still useful in some way. You can pick from the following, each one costs ten points:

Running

Character Development

Backstory: Michael was born in the deserts of Shamar(in the future)and was left on his own at age 4, his parents having been abducted by Eggman. He somehow travelled time to the present. He spent most of his life traveling the globe, but stopped to build shelter in Apotos, where he met his friends Sean, Greg, and the girl of his dreams, Emma. When the world was shattered, he lost contact with them, but when he noticed a blue monster and an orange fox about to leave, he snuck aboard and got off at Spagonia, where he was reunited with his friends. He has found his sister, Ruby, and is trying to save his family from Eggman.

Personality: Kind, naive, restless

Example post: "G...g...gosh...sandwich!" He muttered. He was pinned to the floor with a Swatbot aiming a gun at his heart. He tried to focus his energy to summon his sword. He quickly jumped up and slashed his sword into the robot's head. It exploded. He was breathing heavily. He sheathed his sword and walked away.

This post has been edited by InTheNightlight: 24 November 2008 - 09:21 PM

[NiGHTS Noob]

The sword needs values, as in an offensive strength and defensive strength that cannot exceed a total of ten (there's also special abilities if you want to read about them in the weapons topic.)

The telekinesis needs a description on what it actually does (rather, how it's used, because we pretty much all know what telekinesis is.)

Also, what does the paraloop do? Is it like a NiGHTS paraloop where it cuts out a whole in space? Or is it just used for maneuvering? If it does damage then it's going to need some values.

Lastly, you didn't use all your available points. You've still got one Slot and ten stat points left to spare. You don't need to use them, I'm just letting you know.

[Pyroman]

I think summoning a weapon should be a seperate slot than the weapon itself. That and you can/should give your character's weapon two more points or give it a weapon ability. His telekenisis should be described in a bit more of a technical way that explains how it works in the system we use (how many posts target can be held in place, cost per post, etc.), his flight and space-tearing abilities should be seperate skills.

His stats should total 50 including lesser skills so either put ten more points into a stat or you can take another lesser skill.