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Fists. It's VERY unoriginal to make your characters have too many abilities and mix them with other species. Unoriginal name, Unoriginal look. I'm sorry, but your character needs improvement.

And making them related to actual sonic characters really isn't that great, either.

I'm not trying to be mean, but you really want your character to be original, right?

If you do, make it NON-powerful,related to other characters, or mixed species.

If you REALLY wanna be a good Sonic fan.

[FistsTheHedge-Echinda]

Digital-Duchess, on Jan 24 2009, 06:27 PM, said:

Fists. It's VERY unoriginal to make your characters have too many abilities and mix them with other species. Unoriginal name, Unoriginal look. I'm sorry, but your character needs improvement.

And making them related to actual sonic characters really isn't that great, either.

I'm not trying to be mean, but you really want your character to be original, right?

If you do, make it NON-powerful,related to other characters, or mixed species.

If you REALLY wanna be a good Sonic fan.

thank u for being nice and real. i dont want Fists to br original with abilites, but i will change the species and non related to sonic characters. thanks for telling me something that helped me improve. i will post the new file on here soon.
Thank You!!!!!!

[FistsTheHedge-Echinda]

ok heres the new file.
Name:Fists
Species:Hedgehog
Family:Spiky(father,desesed)
Lirin(mother)
Niko(brother)
Comet(adopted son,tiger)
Age:15
Abilities:super speed
super strength
fly
energy blasts
History:....

[HTM]

FistsTheHedge-Echinda, on Jan 25 2009, 04:39 AM, said:

ok heres the new file.
Name:Fists
Species:Hedgehog
Family:Spiky(father,desesed)
          Lirin(mother)
          Niko(brother)
         Comet(adopted son,tiger)
Age:15
Abilities:super speed
            super strength
            fly
            energy blasts
History:....

Now that's a lot better. Good taking advice from Digiduch(If I may call you that, Digital-Duchess). Then again, I'm more of the "say what's wrong and not what's right" type of guy. Oh well, I'm off tryin' to take on your reply on me. Don't want to continue, but hey, wanna word fight! D:

FistsTheHedge-Echinda, on Jan 24 2009, 11:13 PM, said:

ok ill like to say 2 words before i answer u. SHOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
alright i know u might be mental, but ill write in small words.
SONIC POEPLE FROM ANOTHER WORLD!!!!!!!!!!
how do u not know that. sure, in the games when sonic went in water he had a time limit, but in sonic x they can go in space. u might not understand sience but when the sperm cell joins with the egg conect, dna from both father and mother get in the mix of the childs dna. why do u think amy's spines looks like echinda's spines but shorter. but wait. i bet ur like 9. u shouldn't be talking about this. but dont worry. u mommy cant see u sware on the internet. second(2), i forgot to put a period (.) at the end of the sentence. (plus fan also means hedgehogs and echindas can mate) third(3), i havnt told u his abilities yet. and now, i wont.
also, i got ultim8's reply. forth(4), u dont know thats theres not another echinda. u said yourself.(Knuckles is the only Echidna left. Or so I've heard) this isnt the sonic universe. its the sonic fan universe. fifth(5), FUCK YOU! sixth(6) and finaly, i once heard that "fighting with u is like racing against u in the special oylimpics. even if u win, ur still a retard."

Shove what? You mean shut the fuck up? Fine with that.
Don't know what you mean by being mental, but I do know that Sonic is in a completely different universe.
As far as I'm concerned, Sonic X can bite my ass. Cheesy as hell and the English isn't availible in my country.
I understand science. I do know that the fastest sperm cell contacts the egg, but, surprise surprise, do you see any hybrids here? There would. Trust me, I've been through the beastiality stage and I'm not afraid of admitting it.
I'm not nine. I'm 15. Besides, my mother does know I swear in real life, thus subconsciously knows that I swear over the internet. And besides, if I were nine, why the hell is my grammar and spelling be better than yours?
Yes, you haven't told the abilities. You could've! *Shrug*
OK, great to hear you did get it. Sorry then.
Yes, I do know Knuckles isn't the last one. There IS Tikal, right?
There are four Sonic type universes then? Holy crap! ArchieSonic universe, SEGASonic universe, ArchieSonic fan universe and SEGASonic fan universe? Have I missed some important details or something?
Answer to number five. Indeed. Fuck me. Lemme ask you something. What's your definition of "fuck you" then, huh? You know what, don't answer. I know, I was just jokin'.
Answer to number six. Yes, I've heard that. Besides, I've read it in KennEH!'s sig.

Let's not continue, we can both agree, that your edited character is much better now, thanks to Digital-Duchess.

P.S: Like you said, you don't want to be original with abilities. I respect, then. :)

This post has been edited by Hypothermial-Moron: 25 January 2009 - 08:44 AM

[FistsTheHedge-Echinda]

Hypothermial-Moron, on Jan 25 2009, 02:22 AM, said:

Now that's a lot better. Good taking advice from Digiduch(If I may call you that, Digital-Duchess). Then again, I'm more of the "say what's wrong and not what's right" type of guy. Oh well, I'm off tryin' to take on your reply on me. Don't want to continue, but hey, wanna word fight! D:
Shove what? You mean shut the fuck up? Fine with that.
Don't know what you mean by being mental, but I do know that Sonic is in a completely different universe.
As far as I'm concerned, Sonic X can bite my ass. Cheesy as hell and the English isn't availible in my country.
I understand science. I do know that the fastest sperm cell contacts the egg, but, surprise surprise, do you see any hybrids here? There would. Trust me, I've been through the beastiality stage and I'm not afraid of admitting it.
I'm not nine. I'm 15. Besides, my mother does know I swear in real life, thus subconsciously knows that I swear over the internet. And besides, if I were nine, why the hell is my grammar and spelling be better than yours?
Yes, you haven't told the abilities. You could've! *Shrug*
OK, great to hear you did get it. Sorry then.
Yes, I do know Knuckles isn't the last one. There IS Tikal, right?
There are four Sonic type universes then? Holy crap! ArchieSonic universe, SEGASonic universe, ArchieSonic fan universe and SEGASonic fan universe? Have I missed some important details or something?
Answer to number five. Indeed. Fuck me. Lemme ask you something. What's your definition of "fuck you" then, huh? You know what, don't answer. I know, I was just jokin'.
Answer to number six. Yes, I've heard that. Besides, I've read it in KennEH!'s sig.

Let's not continue, we can both agree, that your edited character is much better now, thanks to Digital-Duchess.

P.S: Like you said, you don't want to be original with abilities. I respect, then.

im glad we worked this out. thank you for liking my new file. now with all of thoughs abilities, u could probly blow up Pluto, if u wanted. but now i think we can be friends. thanks again Hypo(if i can call u that, Hypothermial-Moron)

[HTM]

Sure you can. NiGHTS Noob calls me that. I refer to myself as HTM sometimes, but hey, it's about each individual anyway.

On a complete side note, you double posted.

[FistsTheHedge-Echinda]

Sorry, no one would post. Can you add friends to your profile? im new so sorry.

[HTM]

You go to a profile, then you press on "Add to Contact list" button. It's somewhere to the right.

[FistsTheHedge-Echinda]

Hypothermial-Moron, on Jan 26 2009, 01:58 AM, said:

You go to a profile, then you press on "Add to Contact list" button. It's somewhere to the right.

ok thanks!

[SuperSonicComix]

FistsTheHedge-Echinda, on Jan 26 2009, 09:37 PM, said:

ok thanks!

Hi Fists. I like your new file better aswell. And my birthday was yesterday. ^^ And if you need help on anything character/roleplay-related, Hypo is your guy.

[HTM]

No, I'm not the guy! NiGHTS NOOB is. Or Pyroman. I'm not bad, I'm just not good! D: Never think you deserve something yourself, you have to have someone else to think you deserve it! Wait. That was offtopic. Meh.

Your birthday was yesterday?! D: Happy birthday, SSC! Guess that's it.

[FistsTheHedge-Echinda]

SSC srry i missed your birthday. i wasnt on for a while.
here's Fists sprite:

its his battle pose. im working hard on the rest of his sprites, but there will probly be a little of them. SSC ill add u to my contacts. ill post Niko pics on here, but my friend (Jay Oare) made him. untill here are 3d pics of Fists and Niko:

Fists

Niko
ill post soon!

[HTM]

Recolour time! Seriously, no offense 'n all, but. Looking at it with my mind, it's just a no. Well, I can still see something blue with Fists, and he's just too white, some shading would make wonders.
As for Niko. He's just a lazy recolour of Shadow. Nothing special.
Both made in MSPaint, I can see!

By the way, no offense implied.

[Movetron]

Hypothermial-Moron, on Jan 31 2009, 10:02 AM, said:

Recolour time! Seriously, no offense 'n all, but. Looking at it with my mind, it's just a no. Well, I can still see something blue with Fists, and he's just too white, some shading would make wonders.
As for Niko. He's just a lazy recolour of Shadow. Nothing special.
Both made in MSPaint, I can see!

By the way, no offense implied.

Paint.NET, actually...

[Green]

Hypothermial-Moron, on Jan 29 2009, 06:56 PM, said:

No, I'm not the guy! NiGHTS NOOB is. Or Pyroman. I'm not bad, I'm just not good! D: Never think you deserve something yourself, you have to have someone else to think you deserve it! Wait. That was offtopic. Meh.

Your birthday was yesterday?! D: Happy birthday, SSC! Guess that's it.

Off topic, but why are all your emoticons facing the wrong way?

[HTM]

Is there another smiley imaging one's surprisement? Of my current knowledge, there are only other plz accounts on dA.

[FistsTheHedge-Echinda]

WTF!?! We r way off topic!!! back to topic, i didnt rely care about the 3D pics, but wat about the sprite!?! i mean rely guys! Sheesh!!!

[Mr. Retro]

Brain... Slowly... Eating itself... Due to... Bad... Grammar... Exposure... of intense... Magnitude... Talking... Like... Captain Kirk...


Okay, well, might as well tell you folks about my first made up Sonic character. I called him Kol the Porcupine (There IS a difference between porcupines and hedgehogs. They're completely unrelated, actually.)

Name: Kol the Porcupine

Age: 18

Appearance: Kol actually had the normal fur colour of a porcupine, being brown with the occasional yellow-white streak. He was just about as tall as the other characters, placing him about 3 feet. He had white gloves like the rest, and orange shoes with a white sphere at the toes.

Abilities: Kol was able to take a major beating, more so than Sonic, and he could even contend with Knuckles' endurance. Taking after the myth that Porcupines could shoot their kills, Kol was able to throw spines at his enemies with the help of his Slingshot Braces, which allowed him to throw things at a much higher speed and strength than anatomy would allow, but he'd have to be able to lift it without help. He could also use the Braces to slingshot himself faster, or to allow him to whiz through the air for a short distance. In measures of speed, think of him at Knuckles speed in the original games. Not QUITE as fast as Sonic, but still pretty damn fast.

Personality: The thing about Kol was that he didn't like being bothered, and was perfectly content to be alone. He wasn't overtly aggressive, but he would make sure his point got across, and conversations with him were ALWAYS brief. Overall he was quiet, moody, and didn't like to do things that took too long.

Backstory: HOLY SHIT THIS IS COMPLETELY CROSSED WITH SONIC STORYLINE! OMIGAWD GAIZ.
But honestly, his whole character was dependent upon interactions with Sonic and Metal Sonic. I didn't like Tails so in my mind he was off making some retarded invention or getting pounded in the butt by Charmy.

Kol lived in a large forest, which was next to a city. He was known for being incredibly hostile to construction, sabotaging machines and throwing workers a few feet away from the forest, probably into traffic or the like. Well, the forest had alot of mineral deposits, which Eggman wanted to use for developing more of his robotic army. Eggman made this clear to Kol, and had Metal Sonic kick his ass to make it ULTRA-clear.

Kol didn't particularly like that, so he immediately attacked any Eggbot he saw. Eventually Sonic came by upon hearing that Eggman was there, and headed into the forest. Confusing Sonic for Metal Sonic, Kol attacked him, and won by dragging the fight into the lake.

Meanwhile, in the Death Egg (it will always be the token lair for Eggman in my mind) Eggman found out Sonic was there, and decided that now would be the best time for world domination through the use of the Chaos Emeralds, which he had collected at an unannounced time. Unfortunately for him, Metal Sonic was tired of taking the fat bastard's shit, and took all but one Chaos Emerald, and fled. Being pursued by Eggbots, Metal accidentally dropped the Emeralds and scattered them across the forest.

Kol had since departed from Sonic, and was on his way to kick Eggman's ass, when he found a Chaos Emerald that had fallen from the sky. Eggman arrived and demanded that Kol hand over the Emerald, but as a fuck you, Kol bailed and decided to find all the Chaos Emeralds, just to piss Eggman off.

Sonic decided to do the same thing, as did Metal. Another battle between Metal Sonic and Kol occured, this time Kol being the victor thanks to Kol having learned about how Metal fights, and eventually Sonic, Metal, and Kol each collect an Emerald, leaving them all with two and Eggman with one.

Accidentally, Eggman awakens a huge creature that wishes to help him in world domination, and they form a bosslike creature that starts engulfing the forest. Sonic, Metal Sonic, and Kol team up and kick Eggman/Monster thing's ass, and everything is great, Kol thanking both of them for saving his forest, until he tells the to get the fuck out. The END.

[HTM]

EPIC backstory. Although to me, sort of cliché. But hey, it IS your first.

I don't remember my first one. Let's go with the one I remember was first. Chain the Echidna.

P.S: I am aware that there are no echidnas left except Knuckles and Tikal, but I didn't know that then.

Name:
Chain the Echidna

Age:
I don't remember. Think it was about 28.

Appearance:
He was all red. His muzzle was beige, so was his arms. He looked like Knuckles in all respects, except eye-color, that was yellow.

Personality:
Shadow, nuff said.

Backstory:
Shadow, nuff said.

EDIT:
Knuckles watermark!

This post has been edited by Hypothermial-Moron: 01 February 2009 - 08:27 AM

[SuperSonicComix]

Everyone misses birthdays every once in a while. Thanks for caring at least a tiny bit, hypo. Ok, so i dont make you lose any more dignity, ill talk about your character. (i better say something mean, so you can come up with a comeback, that will make some of your dignity return) IT SUCKED! *okay now you say something*