[razourikthehedgie]

I'm new here, so plz put down the machete if you dont like this story!!!
One day, shadow was in the green hill zone, angsting. Then, amy came running past and stole shadows razor blade. Then, of course, shadow got really pissed off. Amy said "I'll only give you back your razor blade if you help me make sonic jealous!" But then shadow said "there is one problem: I DONT KNOW HOW TO LOVE!" So amy said "if you come to my house I'll teach you!"
Then, the next day, amy and shadow went to the ice cap zone, where sonic was. Amy started making sonic jealous and saying how shadow did great things with her. Sonic then gets really pissed off and throws a snow ball at shadow, which makes shadow even more pissed off... Shadow then throws a chaos spear at sonic, and then, sonic is just a little pile of ash on the ground... "You didnt have to do that," said amy, knowing that shadow was extremely pissed off...
I doubt this is that funny, but hey, its my first story, and besides: SHADAMY FOREVA!!!!!!

[Mr. Retro]

[Season-Shifter]

Nixon approved!

[razourikthehedgie]

Your comments are brilliant, mates! Thanks alot for the constructive critiscm!
NOT! Wow, frostspine was right, the ppl here are mean...

[Mr. Retro]

Its just because it was a horrible attempt at being funny. The fanfiction section is for people who actually put effort into a story, and have it a decent length. The only reason Muzzy got away with it is because its Muzzy, and he can make genocide funny.

[Scourge]

razourikthehedgie, on Oct 12 2008, 02:36 PM, said:

Your comments are brilliant, mates! Thanks alot for the constructive critiscm!  
NOT! Wow, frostspine was right, the ppl here are mean...

Oh dont be a baby, if you wanna stick around here just read through some of the topics before posting shit like this. You'll learn....eventually.

[razourikthehedgie]

Yes, ok, after making it I figured this was a piece of crap, like the other story that I think shadow link made and everyone thought he/she was trying to copy muzzy...

[Green]

I don't do fanfics, so it wasn't me.

[Scourge]

It was lightsonic11, and I think he learned a little something.

[razourikthehedgie]

I think razourik the hedgie learned something too.

[frostspine the hedgehog]

razourikthehedgie, on Oct 12 2008, 03:36 PM, said:

Your comments are brilliant, mates! Thanks alot for the constructive critiscm!  
NOT! Wow, frostspine was right, the ppl here are mean...

I sed that?

Serris7, on Oct 12 2008, 07:25 PM, said:

It was lightsonic11, and I think he learned a little something.

he learned what?

[razourikthehedgie]

I think he learned not to make fan fiction stories, or something like that...

[Green]

razourikthehedgie, on Oct 14 2008, 12:47 AM, said:

I think he learned not to make fan fiction stories, or something like that...

Congratulations, you are the first person I have ever facepalmed on the net.

He learned not to make up stupid shit that isn't funny and has already been done.

[Scourge]

Oh snap...Shadow Links out to get'im!

[razourikthehedgie]

Oh snap, thats the explanation I was lookin for, thanks, shadow link...
*sends about 5 or so more facepalms at me*
Um... Shadow link, are you sure you arent tuntis's brother? Ya know, the guy from the gmc?

[Green]

razourikthehedgie, on Oct 14 2008, 02:37 PM, said:

Oh snap, thats the explanation I was lookin for, thanks, shadow link...
*sends about 5 or so more facepalms at me*
Um... Shadow link, are you sure you arent tuntis's brother? Ya know, the guy from the gmc?

I'm sure I don't have a brother, unless they kidnapped my twin at birth .
And the person face-palming isn't me. I am American and 14.

[razourikthehedgie]

Ur lying, americans cant be that smart! xD
I guess perhaps it is a blatant change, however, since tuntis is finnish.
Are you the same shadow link from the game maker community? Just curious...