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SONICBOOM Sonic Sprite Comic

#1 User is offline   UnlimitedHedgehog Icon

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Posted 20 September 2008 - 07:06 PM

My sonic sprite comic, SONICBOOM, please tell me what you think of it, thanks.

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Posted 21 September 2008 - 07:12 AM

Yellow text on white is hard to read.

Also: I think it's bad form and tacky to make reference to the author. But that's me.
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Posted 21 September 2008 - 07:16 PM

I'm pretty sure that there was another sprite comic that used the name "Sonic Boom."
It was also...better.

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Posted 21 September 2008 - 07:23 PM

Well, it's not the worst sprite comic ever, but it is still a sprite comic so that's kind of like saying that my neighbor's chihuahua is the most annoying dog ever, but it's still a yappy and generally useless little bitch*.




*Not a swear word here because it actually refers to a female dog, even that dog is an annoying little shit.



Also, yeah yellow on white is hard to read.
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Posted 23 September 2008 - 07:17 PM

Thanks for your views on it ^^; I know it's not that good, I only started a while ago.
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