[Meteor Magus]

Info
Name: Astero
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Fur/feather/scale/skin: Skin
Eyes: Crimson
Height: 185
Build: Really thin, but extremely tall and very fit
Attire: A golden robe, a yellow pointy hat, and a pure white cloak.

Weapons/Items/Powers/Abilities: Sometimes called "Slots". You can have up to four total.

1) Fallen Star ( OS: 6 Ammo: 2 Chosen Wielder )

2) Magical Staff (OS: 4 DS: 4 Chosen Wielder )

3) Addlebrain ( -2 Vitality from exhaustion, causes enemy target to get confused and attack themselves )

4) Cloak of the Heavens (Agility x2 )

Stats: allocate points here. Total number of points cannot exceed 50.

Strength: 10

Agility: 12 (24)

Vitality: 18

Lesser skills: Not as good as a skill that would go in one of the four "slots", but still useful in some way. You can pick from the following, each one costs ten points:

Jumping

Character Development

Backstory: Astero was once an apprentice black mage, until one day, while exploring a cave, he found a white cloak. He tried the cloak on, not knowing it was actually a blessed garment from long ago. The cloak then shone with a brilliant white light. When the light died away, Astero found that his robes, which were black, were now a shining gold. He had had a great power bestowed upon him... and his life would never be the same again.

Personality: Intelligent, sarcastic, impatient.

Example Post: Astero stepped out of the building, taking in all the fresh air. It was a crisp fall night, and he just stood there for a second, letting the breeze cool him down. He looked up to the stars. "What a beautiful starry sky we have tonight." he said to himself, then sighed. Since he had found the white cloak that he was now wearing, he had not had many chances for some peace like this. He looked around, looking over the sea. He was about to go back inside, when he noticed a slight movement in a bush right near his door. He muttered a magic word, and the bush went up in flames - revealing the strange man hiding behind it.
"Who are you.... and what the hell are you doing in my garden?"

EDIT: Wrong format for 'Cloak of the Heavens' , changed stats
EDIT2: Oh for God's sake, hurry up and APPROVE!

This post has been edited by Meteor Magus: 09 August 2008 - 11:56 PM

[Pyroman]

Ok, very good. My only problem is with his Cloak of the Heavens. I'm a bit confused as to its effect and/or uses. Everything else looks pretty good, so if you can clarify this one little detail I'll approve your character.

[Meteor Magus]

Is this ever going to get approved?!