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Hey, wanna take a look at my up coming comic =D Its called Sonic, adventures in life.
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Posted 22 May 2008 - 05:04 AM
Well hey. I'm new, not really. I have signed up for an account on here before. I cannot remember the name or password, so I have decided to just make a new account. But here is my comic, I hope you enjoy
Do you like it?
Do you like it?
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Posted 22 May 2008 - 02:27 PM
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Posted 26 May 2008 - 02:00 PM
ARRGH!
"Pss, hey Guido, its all so clear to me now. I'm the keeper of the cheese and you're the lemon merchant, you get it? And he knows it. That's why he's gonna kill us. So we got to beat it, ya, before he let's loose the marmosets on us. Don't worry little missy, I'll save you!"
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Posted 26 May 2008 - 06:09 PM
I just shoved those stored burning chopsticks into my eyes. I don't know joe um dyoll ty[ung/
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Gold: *pokes your corpse*
Shmeckie: Sorry, I was doing someone
Shmeckie: SOMETHING
Shmeckie: DOING SOMETHING!
Gold: HAHAHA!!
Shmeckie: Sorry, I was doing someone
Shmeckie: SOMETHING
Shmeckie: DOING SOMETHING!
Gold: HAHAHA!!
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Posted 27 May 2008 - 01:43 AM
lol "Amonic"
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Posted 14 June 2008 - 04:19 AM
Errs:
The placement of the bubbles makes me want to read the text in the wrong order.
There seems to be no plot at all. (not that I'm not guilty of doing that once or twice)
The sprites look awkward.
Sonic's bubble in the first comic, at the end, doesn't make any sense. It's not explained. Is it a thought? Is he saying something? You didn't tell us through the pictures.
Good Things:
If this is your first try, it's not hopeless (if its not one of your first tries, you may want a new hobby).
I'm certain that if you're open to criticism then you'll get better.
You have potential if you listen to people and make according to feedback.
The placement of the bubbles makes me want to read the text in the wrong order.
There seems to be no plot at all. (not that I'm not guilty of doing that once or twice)
The sprites look awkward.
Sonic's bubble in the first comic, at the end, doesn't make any sense. It's not explained. Is it a thought? Is he saying something? You didn't tell us through the pictures.
Good Things:
If this is your first try, it's not hopeless (if its not one of your first tries, you may want a new hobby).
I'm certain that if you're open to criticism then you'll get better.
You have potential if you listen to people and make according to feedback.
'Cause it's easy,
once you know how it's done,
you can't stop now; it's already begun,
you feel it running through your bo-ones,
and you jerk it out.
once you know how it's done,
you can't stop now; it's already begun,
you feel it running through your bo-ones,
and you jerk it out.
~CEASARS
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*reminder: put something witty, significant, un-n00bish, and/or "cool" here.
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Posted 15 June 2008 - 04:08 PM
Actually,Green Hedgehog,about the one where you don't know if Sonic is talking or thinking or something, he's actually thinking about the poster of himself in his room.
How do I know?I'm a comic reader,but I learned how to read em from my Looney Tunes comics.
How do I know?I'm a comic reader,but I learned how to read em from my Looney Tunes comics.
Things To Do When Life Gives You Lemons
1)Make lemonade
2)Eat them
3)Make lemon flavored candy
or
4)Throw em back and say "I WANTED CHOCOLATE!"
Wanna know what happens when Sonic marries Amy?
THEY HAVE FIVE CHILDREN,DUDES!
BELIEVE IT!
Better believe I'm Sailor Supernova!
1)Make lemonade
2)Eat them
3)Make lemon flavored candy
or
4)Throw em back and say "I WANTED CHOCOLATE!"
Wanna know what happens when Sonic marries Amy?
THEY HAVE FIVE CHILDREN,DUDES!
BELIEVE IT!
Better believe I'm Sailor Supernova!
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