[lightsonic11]

Day 1: jail
Number 5682469, thats my name they call me down here. I came to this world at May 10, 2008, I don't know how, all i can see was a big white light. "Hey, wake up! the boss well like to see." A fish monster said. I said "all right fish-face, what does he went?" "don't call me fish-face, its Mr. fish-face to you ok" he said wall pushing me up.

"He just said get number 5682469 thats all" he said. {I hate people calling me thats!} I said in my head. Wall we were walking to the boss's room He asked, "whats your name kid?" I said "my name... my name is Mark the hedgehog!" He just looked at me and said "ok, here the door, have fun..."
He open it and walked away.

There I was, in the room where the guy that locked me up, I don't know why but he did. "So, your name is mark. nice name for thief." He said, I yelled at him "I'm not a thief!!!" he looked at me with his eyes, I can see nothing in them. "your a thief, you got a piece from a door we need, but who cares about thats." He said with a happy grin on his face. {why is he happy?} I said in my head. "Theres a girl here for you mark, her name is amy." he said.
I warm hand was on my shoulder and I heard "hello my treasure ."

I was walking down to a air ship with amy the treasure hunter, and my friend Robert the phoenix. When we got in the air ship, she closed the door fast and said "glad thats over, Robert take mark to his room." He nod and told me to come with him. "Hey mark, glad your alive." Robert said. "I know, that place was cold dude!" I said. He smiled at me, i smiled back. "well, heres your room, I got to help Such clean up" He said wall he ran off. "Wait, Such is here, is Ian here Too Robert" I yelled, he nod. I grin and open the door, and said " woooow, nice room! But, where is the bed?" [gold room, no bed]

Day 1/2: amy's room
"where is Ian, I told him to get the heater on!" Amy said. Her room lights just went out when she was talking. Then, Someones hand came out of the shadow and grabbed her by the neck. "Good evening Amy..." Someone said wall choking her. "Nice to see you got my gift amy" he said. "eek... Stop.. your choking... me..." she said all most dead. He throw her to the wall. "I went you to get my gift to you home town by the two doors, and look for me, Dr. Ko" he said with a evil grin. "why do you need him, hes just a kid" she said. "just get him, you have in till 9:00 pm tonight" he said walking in to the shadow. The light went on fast, he was not in now, and the door was still locked! "Ever one, were going to the city of eve." she said.

[nick_phizz]

Just asking: is it supposed to be Day 1/2 ? Or 1 1/2 (1.5)

[lightsonic11]

1/2 means noon, I was tired, i did this at midnight