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Jewel An RP character, that is needed. I think

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Posted 06 April 2008 - 10:45 AM

Basic Information
Name:
Jewel Verandie

Age:
15

Gender:
Female

Species:
Hedgehog

Fur/feather/scale/skin:
Red fur

Eyes:
Vibrant teal

Height:
3'11"

Build:
Slightly above average

Attire:
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Theme Words
First: Psychogenetic
Ability/item 1: Telepathic communication, able to send telepathic messages to other people's minds.
Ability/item 2: Grasping levitational powers, Jewel is able to levitate just about anything under double her weight, and within eyesight and 20 metres.
Second: Intelligent
Ability/item 1: IQ of 157
Ability/item 2: Strategic thoughts. When given enough time, Jewel can properly set up strategies that would sort of eliminate her/her ally's/allies' weaknesses, and maximise her/their effectiveness.
Third: Mechanical
Ability/item 1: Jester airboard
Ability/item 2: Knows how to build and repair airboards and other vehicles, except cars.

Role Playing
Back-story:
Jewel, according to her parents at least, has always had psychogenetic powers. So her parents had to raise her properly, so she wouldn't go ahead and get herself killed, and maybe a few other people.
Jewel was always interested in military strategies. When she was 11, she complained why she didn't have any strategy games, but when she had them, she complained why they were so easy. And when she hit the age of 13, she graduated from 9th already. Classified very intelligent, she was moved to a school for gifted children.
She went well, and took up learning mechanics, just as a hobby of hers. She just took up repairing vehicles and airboards, and building these airboards.

Example Post:
Jewel sat down on the tree-chair in the library, and read a book. She didn't know, that behind her was a crowd that wanted her autograph. Still sitting on the chair, she turned the page, and heard someone cough rather quietly, but close enough for her to hear it loudly. When she turned her head only so she could see what was behind her. She was astonished to see a little over 30 people. She quietly put the book down, and sat up. She walked towards the out-door, and when she was out, she ran as much as she could, because she didn't want to sign any autograph's, because she had a hand injury from her last movie she was with in.
The café Jewel was in was pretty much stuffed with old people, reading the newspaper. Jewel sat down at one of the café table, and the waitress came after six minutes.

This post has been edited by Hypothermial-Moron: 25 April 2009 - 08:31 PM

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Our business is Life itself...

My RolePlaying roster:
Drayn Verandie, Jewel Verandie, Tyko Verandie, Rick Moore
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Posted 06 April 2008 - 06:49 PM

Nothing wrong with this character, but why give her a weakness like that in her slots? Oh well, I guess if you ever want to change it you can request a change in the pinned topic.

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Posted 12 January 2009 - 08:39 PM

So the third skill makes her stats react differently to things like traps, and then combat?

I don't see anything wrong with your changes though, so I'm going to close this.
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Posted 15 April 2009 - 09:11 PM

Back story doesn't seem to fit her theme words.
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Posted 25 April 2009 - 08:23 PM

Describe her levitation and telepathy a little more and she should be passable.
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Posted 25 April 2009 - 08:53 PM

Ok. Good to go.

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