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Sonic : Power Trilogy A sprite comic i have made up.

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Post icon  Posted 18 March 2008 - 10:29 PM

Hi guys this is my first comic so dont expect it to be fantastic

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Posted 19 March 2008 - 12:26 AM

I like the anti disco thing going, but why was the most powerful microchip in the universe just floating around in space? No sense man, no sense at all :(
Sometimes I wonder if I'm missing some all important truth in the world. At that point I usually grab some chips and watch the people who have apparently found it tear each other apart in the super market over the now last bag of chips...

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Posted 19 March 2008 - 02:08 AM

I don't have a problem with it. Maybe you could compete with The Amy Rose Show, (but thats not likely).
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Posted 19 March 2008 - 02:57 AM

sonicknucklestailsamycreamrouge, on Mar 18 2008, 10:08 PM, said:

I don't have a problem with it. Maybe you could compete with The Amy Rose Show, (but thats not likely).
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Anyway, A for effort, but learn to spell. Finally has two l's, It's Eggman, actually, etc.
"Pss, hey Guido, its all so clear to me now. I'm the keeper of the cheese and you're the lemon merchant, you get it? And he knows it. That's why he's gonna kill us. So we got to beat it, ya, before he let's loose the marmosets on us. Don't worry little missy, I'll save you!"
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Post icon  Posted 19 March 2008 - 10:33 AM

Yer i think i might make that the microchip was on board professor Gerald Robotnics ship and i the chip helped make the ultimate life form (not shadow) plus SAB2 is the best game ever :D
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Post icon  Posted 19 March 2008 - 11:52 AM

Here is episode 2 :) :) :)

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Posted 20 March 2008 - 01:53 AM

Firstly, will you still post it here and not make us go to themysticforestzone.com?

secondly, can you press the return key every time u make a new picture, i hate having to scrol back and forth.
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Posted 20 March 2008 - 01:58 PM

GRAMMAR. The first box is a major run-on sentence. Remember capitols, periods, commas, etc. Names and cities need capitols. Also, the last box with Shadow and Knuckles talking is difficult to read because of the black backgrounds in the text bubbles. With text bubbles, try to center the text and leave some room around it, but don't leave too much white space. The way you had "Beep, beep" is a good example. That is how you'd like the other bubbles to look. The rest of the text have either too much white space or not enough. When Knuckles says "FOR GODS SAKE EVERY TIME..." the line is too close to the text. But when he says "Noo! Someone help me please!" there is way to much white space, especially on the right side.
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Posted 20 March 2008 - 02:39 PM

kk thanks for the advice. :)
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Post icon  Posted 20 March 2008 - 02:42 PM

ill try if rember and no ill be allways be postin it here i just use sprites from misticalforestzone :lol:
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Post icon  Posted 20 March 2008 - 11:19 PM

Here is episode 3 :blink:

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Posted 21 March 2008 - 02:07 AM

The way you arranged the text boxes, it makes you want to read them in the wrong order, you might want to fix that. Also capitalize the character's names, and add a few more frames to the stories, you jump around way too mush and it's a little hard to keep track of. At least for this newest panel these are the problems.
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Posted 21 March 2008 - 01:00 PM

I thinks its good but just wait for awhile before you post episode 4 and make it long and bigger, some pannels were hard to read.
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http://stt.csdprojec...creamresize.gif

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Posted 21 March 2008 - 01:12 PM

kk ty , i think i will make ep 4 very big
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Posted 21 March 2008 - 06:43 PM

At least it doesn't make Tails gay. *cough* AMY ROSE SHOW *cough
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Posted 21 March 2008 - 06:47 PM

The 3rd comic has a horrible layout. You never want that much empty space at the bottom and at the sides. Also, I'd fill in the white gaps with black. it's easier on the eyes, and makes the text bubbles stand out.

Also, small nitpick, but I'd make Tails text frame a darker yellow...
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Posted 21 March 2008 - 10:30 PM

Yer i rushed 3 ill take my time on 4 =D
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Posted 23 March 2008 - 11:19 AM

U still making it UK?
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Posted 23 March 2008 - 11:38 AM

yer when i can
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Posted 23 March 2008 - 11:49 AM

Not that I look for these kinds of thing but, the rings at the top of Episode 1 looks like a <8.
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