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Drayn Verandie my favourite S-fan-character

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Posted 17 March 2008 - 01:02 AM

Basic Information
Name:
Drayn Verandie

Age:
32

Gender:
Male

Species:
Hedgehog

Fur/feather/scale/skin:
Blue fur

Eyes:
Dark yellow

Height:
4'5"

Build:
Above average, muscular

Attire:
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First: Gunner
Ability/item 1: 9mm Beretta pistol, sheathed in a brown, cloth strap behind his back, covered by his coat.
Ability/item 2: 9mm Beretta pistol, sheathed in a brown, cloth strap behind his back, covered by his coat.
Second: Combat
Ability/item 1: Relaxed, Drayn is able to focus on the opponent's/opponents' position/positions when in a dark room, or when his opponent/s are in hiding (Stealth devices included). Although it doesn't always work, he can make a rough summary of where.
Ability/item 2: Very good strategic coordination, which makes Drayn a fairly good hand-to-hand fighter.
Third: Assassin
Ability/item 1: Silent steps. It will get very difficult hearing him, although not quite impossible.
Ability/item 2: A 6" long knife, ˝" thick, and 3" wide. Put into a black leather sheath when not supposed to be used, the knife is specifically made to slice through throats rather that stabbing, but should be effective enough to last.

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Back-story:
Drayn once was one of these martial artists in training, when he was about 16. Being beaten down so often at his bad neighbourhood school, he had to learn how to defend himself more effectively. He learned very quickly how to fight, faster than average, although it was no record.
Then, after about three years, Drayn finally completed his training, and then he set off to strive after firearms. "You never know..." Drayn always said, when someone asked why. He got his firearms alright, and no specific price for it. He got them legally, and carries his firearms licence at all times, just in case.

Example Post:
Drayn ran away from the angry thugs, that were chasing him. He heard gunshots, chants, screams, what-ever you may come in mind with. Suddenly, a weapon appeared in his hands, and Drayn quickly turned around, and started running backwards. He didn't aim, because that wasn't nessecary, because there were many. Drayn started shooting them, but his bullets were plastic, so they wouldn't kill any, only make them fall to the ground.
Drayn sat down by the table in the back of "Ritz Café". A waitress walked by the table, and asked: "What would you like to have?". Drayn looked towards her, while having his right arm on the table, and his left in his pocket. "Coffee, please." Drayn answered like a normal person. The waitress wrote it down, and walked away.

This post has been edited by Pyroman: 03 May 2009 - 06:48 AM

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Posted 17 March 2008 - 01:30 AM

Read the part about lesser skills and stats. Also, read some approved profiles and see what they have put there. I don't think you understand how lesser skills work.
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Posted 17 March 2008 - 03:48 PM

Is that OK?
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Posted 17 March 2008 - 05:22 PM

Adding up your stats, you have 46, that disallows you any lesser skills
I am the lord of Darkness

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Posted 17 March 2008 - 05:45 PM

Awa...?

Does the Stat-points(Strength, Agility, Vitality) also count in the Lesser Skills?
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Posted 17 March 2008 - 07:40 PM

You get 50 points total. Each lesser skill costs 10 points, and the remaining points go into your stats any way that you want.
Sometimes I wonder if I'm missing some all important truth in the world. At that point I usually grab some chips and watch the people who have apparently found it tear each other apart in the super market over the now last bag of chips...

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Posted 18 March 2008 - 03:48 PM

UH, that hit hard! OK then...
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Posted 18 March 2008 - 05:50 PM

You can have two more weapons, powers, or special abilities, but if you only want two, that's fine. You could always ask to edit later in the appropriate topic. I'll accept the example post you gave as some kind of dream sequence and call this character approved!

Remember to include a link to this character's profile (this topic) in your signature. Have fun!
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Posted 12 April 2009 - 07:38 PM

Ok, this looks cool, but the back story needs work (mostly because it has to be BOUT HIM not necessarily his family) and I'd like you to describe his items/abilities a bit more (I have Op and Rave's profiles updated for v2, so check them out for an example of what I mean).
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Posted 25 April 2009 - 08:20 PM

Sort of random thing to happen in his example post, but nothing really wrong with it. This looks like a character that makes good enough sense for me to approve, so I will.

Character approved.
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