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Sonic the Hedgehog: In Full Circle Old Enemies, New twists.

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Posted 16 March 2008 - 10:29 AM

NOTE FROM AUTHOR:

I type this while I am at work. So I may end up producing a lot or little based on the work load.

The following MAY or MAY NOT contain:
Violence
Blood
Comedy
Romance
Sex
Tele-tubbies
Drugs
Alchohol
Sonic

Enjoy....

Sonic the Hedgehog: In Full Circle.

It was late at night. The Egg Lab was all mess, papers scattered everywhere, plans all scrambled with each other, pieces and parts wherever you step. In the corner lied a robotic figure covered in a white sheet. Eggman was sitting on the table crying, while gradually drinking a bottle of "Dack Janiels." Murmuring to himself.

"Damn that Blue Pest." Eggman sobbed. "Everything I have tried, all the plans I made, all the very essence of my soul for World domination, all foiled by that blue rat!"

Eggman turned his head and faced the white-sheeted figure.

"You were the only invention I had ever created that ever came close to eliminating Sonic. When I first made you, you were my pride and joy.

Eggman began to grind his teeth and became red with rage. He took an enormous gulp of Dack Janiels and flung the bottle of liquor right at the machine screaming...

"YET YOU BETRAYED ME YOU TRASH!"

Still baring his teeth and yelling, Eggman picked up a pipe that was lying around his lab, He slowly staggered his way to the cloth-covered robot, almost falling. He pulled off the sheet revealing a decrepit and pummeled blue robot. That robot was Metal Sonic. He stood lifeless in front of Eggman like an old Marionette. Eggman raised the pipe above his head. and screamed.

"THIS IS WHAT YOU GET YOU WORTHLESS SCRAP METAL!"

He swung it with all his might and shattered Metal Sonic's head into nearly countless fragments. Eggman breathed heavily as he began to calm down. He took a look around to see damage he done. He raised his eyebrow noticing that the parts that flew out Metal Sonic's were not parts of the original plans. Puzzled, he rummaged further through the pieces and discovered a memory disk.

"That odd I don't ever remember installing this to Metal Sonic's Mainframe. I can't help but wonder what it is."

Drowsy and dizzy, he walked over to his computer and (barely) inserted the memory disk inside. Immediately he started to scan through each file eagerly. Eggman's eyes lit up completel as he smiled with an evil grin, bursting in laughter.

"I don't believe this. Numerical calculations of Sonic's speed and strength. Even with the Chaos Emeralds. Attack patterns and even probablities and habits. This is a gold mine. Ha! there is even an equation to exceed Sonic capabilties. What have you been up Metal?"

The screen immediately turned pitch black. His face became white with fear as he saw the animation of the machine he had just obliterated appear on his screen. Metal Sonic spoke.

"The alchohol must have went to your head when you started opening up files randomly from my disk. I thought you would have at least enough sense to run a virus check before opening anything. This is why Sonic keeps defeating you over and over and over. But I should thank you Robotnik, you gave me new life. Even now, as we speak, I took control of your machines that served you so loyally."

He stared down at the monitor.

"What do you want?"

This post has been edited by Swordsman729: 16 March 2008 - 11:59 AM

Everyday you live is a gift. That why its called "The Present"
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Posted 16 March 2008 - 05:15 PM

Huh. Interesting. I never imagined the calm gentlemen Robotnik to be a boozehound. And this Metal Sonic story reminds me of something Ultron did (I hold Ultron in high esteem so I meant that more as a compliment than a "you're ripping of someone's ideas" statement).
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Posted 17 March 2008 - 04:27 AM

Who (or what) is Ultron
Everyday you live is a gift. That why its called "The Present"
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Posted 17 March 2008 - 04:46 AM

Well, this started out better than most Sonic fanfics. Keep it up!
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Posted 19 March 2008 - 02:16 AM

Better than me. Keep going!!!!
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Posted 19 March 2008 - 02:27 AM

Swordsman729, on Mar 16 2008, 08:27 PM, said:

Who (or what) is Ultron
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Ultron is one of Marvel Comics' biggest villains and one of the first characters to go with the "wipe out organic life and replace it with machines" angle. He/it also happens to be one of the best, or the best character to use it.
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Posted 19 March 2008 - 07:53 PM

11th paragraph, it sould be, "Thats odd" yet it says, "That odd."
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Posted 20 March 2008 - 10:40 PM

Srry for double posting but i had to revive this thread,
If you need some more story, i got some.
you could post about metal sonic putting robotnic into prison and sonic saves him and they team up or somthing.

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