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My first comic, Like you haven't heard that before Yep, Its my first

#1 User is offline   MangeTH Icon

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Posted 24 February 2008 - 04:21 AM

Meh, It's my first comic, it's so short because i'm still thinking more about the strory line.

Hit me with your worst criticism, and should I make more?

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Posted 24 February 2008 - 04:17 PM

Robotnik hates Sonic... K...then what?
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Posted 24 February 2008 - 05:13 PM

Well....I'm working on that, but I mean rate me on how I did with the basics...like character placement in relation to each panel, or the word bubbles, blur effects and such..
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Posted 24 February 2008 - 08:21 PM

The blurring seems a little unneeded, as nothing is happening in the comic.
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Posted 24 February 2008 - 08:48 PM

yeah, I guess. I'm just over using my new adobe photoshop elements 6......I almost finished the next one, but I have used some unneeded blurring, and it will need some tweaking...
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Posted 25 February 2008 - 12:03 AM

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Posted 25 February 2008 - 12:18 AM

Oh well thanks for pointing that little mistake out....
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Posted 21 March 2008 - 10:55 PM

i WAS JUST LOOKING SRRY FOR REVIVING THIS TOPIC BUT you should have made it longer and if it was, i would've gave it 10/10 but... it almost had nothing in it sooo..... 7/10.
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and here are some of my fav images!!!

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http://stt.csdprojec...creamresize.gif

and... http://www.theage.co...07/...__300x471,0.jpg
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